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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part
new look -good
waiting for dinner date
thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ,...

loved d part 20 ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey nice update dear...
looking fwd...

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi Teju,

Very lovely and cute update dear.

Dadima is going to have an eye on maan...lol...bechara MSK ab kya karega?????

Dadi wants to see the changes in KC in the last 2 months..come on dadima...come to KC soon and see what your pautha is doing here with geet...i am excited for the meeting between dadi and geet.

Dadi is wondering why MSK is going for business meeting in jeans and white shirt that too with two buttons opened...lol..now i am wondering what will happen, if MSK really attends his business meetings like this?

Really enjoyed the update to the core.

Can't wait for the dinner date...continue soon Teju.

Have a nice day and weekend

143 dear

Tonya


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: tonyahk

Hi Teju,

Very lovely and cute update dear.

Dadima is going to have an eye on maan...lol...bechara MSK ab kya karega?????

Dadi wants to see the changes in KC in the last 2 months..come on dadima...come to KC soon and see what your pautha is doing here with geet...i am excited for the meeting between dadi and geet.

Dadi is wondering why MSK is going for business meeting in jeans and white shirt that too with two buttons opened...lol..now i am wondering what will happen, if MSK really attends his business meetings like this?

Really enjoyed the update to the core.

Can't wait for the dinner date...continue soon Teju.

Have a nice day and weekend

143 dear

Tonya



hey tonya
really yaar if msk go to business meeting lke that...we can find many ambulance before office just to carry the fainted girls...
he he he😆😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
missed 3 update to comment...
i am sure rasika or sasha shud hv changed it...
waiting for the dinner date...
pl cont soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago

hi guys, i m back with another update...thanks for commenting and liking my ff...plz keep commenting...and plz press like button...this is too a short one but hope u like it...i will try to update another on or nefore this tuesday...plz bear with me...sorry...love ur comments..

Ishq Hai Yeh

Part -21

" sir lets go" geet says in her serious tone by which maan understands that she is still angry on him.

He opens the car door and she sits inside without even looking at him. He goes to the other side and sits in the driver seat and drives off"

They reach a restaurant and maan comes out to open geet's door but before him geet opens her door and walks out and waits for maan to join. Maan joins her with slightly surprised by her anger. They both enter into the restaurant and maan takes her to a table which he reserved for them. Geet sits there and asks him " sir where is mr.raj?"

Maan answers her in a causual tone " may be on his way"

Geet sits there without another word. Maan looks at her for few minutes and call the waitor to order the food and turns towards her asking her to order something "geet what do u want to order?"

" nothing sir'let the client come we will complete the meeting and I will leave" says geet playing with her dupatta and not looking at him.

Maan says in a stern voice " geet we are here for dinner so just order it"

Now geet looks up at him and his face is clearly showing coldness and anger. She then quickly takes the menu card and orders herself something and places it back at it place when maan picks it up and orders something for him.

Maan looks at her for sometime and thinks this is the perfect time to execute his plan. He excuses him from her. Geet sits in her place looking around the decourations of the restuarent and for sometime looking through the menu card and for sometime checking out the people around her. Its quite sometime maan went but didt return still. She is searching for him turning her head right to left and from left to right wondering where he went when a waiter came with a plate and some card in his hand which he placed it before geet and went away before she even see him properly.

Geet looked at the plate on which its written'..


she then opens the card on finds her name written on it with a 'I m sorry' in the hand writtening which she knew who's.



she looks at it for few moments blankly'she is surprised'no no shocked by the card ans the sorry'before even she realize the lights went off and from the small diace which was near their table came some light and she instantly turned and stood up from her chair to just find few letters arranged on the diace with candles'

' I am sorry geet'''..are the letters arranged with candles'she is messmerised with the beauty and glow of the candles when she finds two hands placed on her both sholders from behind and a body coming close to her almost like hugging her from behind. She instantly know that touch and the breath which now fell on her ears and in a slow and soft whisper she heard 'I am sorry geet'.i mean it'I really do'.

Geet turned to him and looked into those choclate brown eyes which showed guilty and sorry. She is melted instantly'before she could speak the lights came back and all the peple around clapped looking at both of them which brought them back to the present. They both separated from the closeness and went and sat at their respective places when a sudden voice alarmed them.

"am I dreming? Or is it really?"

They both turned and looked at the person who is standing before them with his mouth wide open and his eyes showing the surpricing face ever. Dev is stnding looking at maan then to geet and to maan from geet. He is literally dumb struck with what he saw'.maan saying sorry to someone'a girl'that too this wonderful way'

"I never thought bro ki aap aisa yeh sab'." Dev closed his mouth watching his brother glancing at him with angry.

Maan is caught by his younger brother red-handedly and he doesn't know what to say him. He gave him one of his usual angry glare and walked off from there excusing himself to calm him for sometime. Geet still dint reply for his sorry. He just wants his younger bro to leave the place before he return.

Dev sat in the chair which maan left and started to talk to geet " geet tum yaha bro ke saat?"

Geet is first startled by dev and him calling maan as bro. she atlast found her words and said "bro?"

" haan geet he is my elder brother"

"oh..ok"

" so is that boss my bro? that u gave innumerable galiya to" dev said controlling his laugh.

Geet dint expect this coming and tried to push it off " aisa nahi hai'"

Dev said " geet come on I am not like my bro angry and all'y r u paniking'and I don't mind'" dev stops unable to calm his laugh and again says " geet I saw the candles"

Geet dint know what to say so she keeps quite.

" u know what geet'bro never told sorry to any one till now in his life'not even to dadima'..u r the first one who got the word sorry from my bro and I think u will be the last one" dev said smiling knowing what is going wrong with his brother from few days now.

Dev thinks to himself " so bro..i m not wrong'finally u r fallen in love'geet is the best choice'I know her'she only can bare you" dev laughs at his own thoughts.

Geet is surprised by what she heard from dev she thought " he just told to me'no one else till now'then y for only me?..he is so good'told me sorry..i should now accept it should be normal to him" geet thoughts are disturebed by voice of maan who came back.

" dev what r u doing here at this time?" maan asked him with still the anger playing on his face.

" bro u know meera na'I came to dinner with her." Dev repled and got up from the chair and offered it to maan which he took instantly.

The name meera caught geet attention. Now what meera says to her when she comes to know that she is her for dinner with her boss'she told her that she is going for meeting'but now she know that there is no one named raj and maan done this to tell sorry for her. But how on earth she is going to explain this all to meera? She instantly asks dev " dev where is meera?"

Maan turned his face towards her eyes in which he saw some uneasiness and tesion and fear but he dint know why.

" mein yaha hoon" came the voice of meera who is standing with her hands placed on her hips and looking seriously at geet which she returned a uncomfortable and silly smile.

" so this is ur important meeting hain na?" asked meera with angry on her face.

"wo''.. w o'" geet tried to speak but again cut in middle by meera.

" bas geet'ur meeting is so important y r u disturbing?...carry on'carry on with ur meeting..i don't want to become haddi for u..u should have told it staright on my face'anyway now I know and I will make sure not to become haddi for u" shouted meera and left the place instantly and dev followed with a sorry look on his face.

Now maan understood what happen'may be geet planned something with her and its disturbed by his lie about meeting. He felt little guilty for this and asked geet who sat staring at the place still at where meera just stood and shouted few minuted before.

" sorry geet I dunno u planned outing with ur friend..i dint thought this would happen" said maan in a calmer tone.

Geet looked in to his eyes and replied " don't worry sir..she will be alright'I will speak to her at night. Her anger will be just for sometime and she will be normal soon'this happens always and we don't care'our friendship is strong'she is so understanding"

Maan feels calm after listening to her but still some where a guilt is ther and also she dint reply to his sorry till now. Geet tries to lighten the mood and says what dev said her " so sir I m the only one to whom u said sorry hain na"

Maan dint know what to reply and how'he felt like killing his bro right there for telling this to geet and now she is making fun of him.

" r u making fun of me?" says maan in serious tone.

Geet is taken a back by his tone'she is just kidding to make his mood lighter but here he is angry'.uff..how did I forget that I am sitting before and speaking to MAAN SINGH KHURANA'she hit her head.

The food came and they ate silently without another word. Maan is angry on her for not replying to his sorry. Geet tried to speak to him but he ate silently.

Precap:

Now geet persuading maan


part 21

Edited by teju2292 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow awsome yaar /... loved it so mcuh !!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
that was a nice way to say sorry...
but didnt expect dev-meera to b there...
oh cant wait to c geet trying to persuade maan...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awee
O mere sona re sona re sona...
I can't wait to see Geet manofying Maan

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