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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
heyy ... its not boring ... atleast i didnt find it boring ...

n yes u can speed up a lil ...

update soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
hey take it @ the pace u want to bcoz if u rush up u might lose the insight of the story...will wait for the maaneet moments
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43

lovinng ur ff

cont soon

thnx 4 d pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
np problem dear
i'll be waiting for maaneet
moment
thanks pm
thank yu so muchhh
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi teja,

thanks for another nice part dear. it was very cute. geet crying for a feather shows her emotional attachment with her own world.

take the story forward as u want it to be. then only we could get Teja's version of maaneet. we would love to read that.

thanks for d PM dear.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
grt parts
thnx 4 d pms
great geet gang
cont soonn
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
hi Teja,
please update dear...waiting😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
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Tonya🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
this is a prety sweet update
plz add me 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
sry for making u wait guys...
really had a very busy week today...
i m trying to update today...
mostly...i will udate today...
plz dont go mad on me...
sry once again...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50

Ishq Hai Yeh

Part -5

Sry frns...really sorry...I m so late this time..

Family gathering guys...and some functions in home...bit busy this week...

Plz...sry for keeping u in waiting...

Here I m updating another part...

Plz tell me wheather u like it or not and don't forget to press button...

I beg u...plz comment...

Next day-morning

Geet ran towards her class room. She stood at the class room door. The class already started and the teacher is explaining something.

Geet:excuse me mam.

Mam:ms.geet handa. Do u know u r 15 mins late to class.

All the students are looking at geet.

Geet:I m sorry mam...wo kya hain na...while I m coming to college my cycle tire had punctured mam...so I m late...

Mam: don't give excuses geet. I know ur lies very well. Now go and sit in ur place and don't repeat this.

Geet:ok mam.sorry again.

She looked at the class. Her frns gang sat in their usual places.meera and dia sat together,while yash and sid sat together. The only place left for geet is beside mish. Its her usual place. She went and sat there.

They started whispering without mam noticing them.

Mish:hey geet late again.

Geet:hmm.

Mish: don't tell me that u went to the park in search of ur stupid feather.

Geet:mish first don't class my feather stupid...and yeah I went to park,but not to search of feather.

Mish:then...!!!

Geet:just like that...dil ne kaha...

Mish: geet tum bhi na...

Geet:arey vo chod...do u know wat I got there?

Mish:wat???

Mam saw them whispering and warned them to shut up.

Mam:will u both keep quite or should I throw u out?

Geet and mish went silent for sometime and again started.

Mish:geet kaho kya mila wahan?

Geet:mish mam is looking at us I will tell u in break.

They kept quite through out the class. Now its break time.

All the gang members rounded geet and started their chit-chat.

Meera:so geet...late again.

Geet told them y she is late.

Yash:so geet...wat did u got there?

Geet:haan...dekho...

Geet took out a book and handed it to sid. Sid opened the book and ...

Sid:geet u got ur book back...guys..its her chemistry notes.

Then meera took the book from sid and checked the whole book.

Meera:haan...its chemistry book...but...

Yash:but wat?

Meera:geet...but this is not ur hand writing...!!!

Geet then quickly took the book from meera and now she observed the hand writing clearly.

Geet:haan...par...its my name written on it.

Sid:yes...its written on the 1st page...her name,class and other details.

Mish:where did u find it?

Geet:oh mish...told u na in park...bench par...when I went to that park bench in morning before coming to class...I saw the book is lying on the bench...and opened it and saw my name...though that I got my book back and when I turned the pages I also found my feather...so I brought it with me...i dint check hand writing then.

Yash:may be some one had written the book for her knowing that she lost it.

Dia:may be ur MR.STRANGER wrote this book...

Geet:ohhh shut up dia...what mr.stranger.

Dia:wahi geet...who is leaving a rose daily for u on the bench...along with ur name card on day 1.

Geet:no ways dia babz...stop dreaming now...

Then the bell rang...break was over.

Present

Geet still sat on the bed smiling.

Geet(whispered):hmmm...MR.STRANGER...even nowi dunno who mr.stranger is... I dunno whether its mr or miss...even after receiving these many letters...

Geet smiled looking at the bunch of letters in her hand.

Get came out of her thoughts while her maid knocked the door.

Geet:haan...

Maid:geet memsab...its 3.00P.m...till now u dint have ur lunch...if handa sab knows this he will fire me..plz come for lunch.

Geet:haan...I m coming.

Geet went near dining table and had her lunch in a full stream as she skipped her break fast...oops...brunch...

Its half past 9.00 geet was stting infront of her laptop and checking her mails. Mr.handa arrived home and saw geet was busy with her lap top. He came near her.

Mr.hand: geet beta...did u finsh ur dinner?

Geet:nai papa.waiting for u.

Mr.handa:oh...come on then lets have it now.

They both went to table and started having their dinner.

Geet:papa...I need to talk to u about something important.

Mr.handa:haan beta kaho...baat kya hain?

Geet:papa I don't like to sit at home...its really boring and I hate it.I want to work.

Mr.handa: that's really nice idea geet.so dint u think of anything?

Geet:haan papa...I got 3 offers...one from xyz constructions,2nd is abc constructions and the third is khurana constructions.

Mr.handa:wah 3 offers that's good...but y r u looking like confused geet?

Geet:haan papa I m confused...3 r offering good amount so what to accept?

Mr.handa:geet in delhi khurana constructions is best. And also they r giving good pay.i feel it suits u well.

Geet:may be papa..but I still had one last interview with them...

Mr.handa:oh...when?

Geet:tomorrow.

Mr.handa:acha!!...so r u going?

Geet:jee papa. I will give it a try.

Mr.handa:good beta...ow go to ur bed...and at what time is ur interview?

Geet:11.00 A.M papa...

Mr.handa(smiling): that means u can sleep till 10.00...hain na..

Geet makes baby face:papa...

Mr.handa:taak hain...good night beta.

Geet:good night papa.

Both left to their rooms.

geet laid on her bed and thought for some time...

geet(in her thoughts):dunno papa y i feel like this...but even my heart is saying to take khurana constructions offer...i feel like there is some thing...some sort of connection...hearing the name itself is bringing me some strange feelings...dunno wat is their in that company...i m attracted to it even before entering...lets see geet wat is special about this company...

geet slowly sliped to sleep thinking about next day interwiew.


Precap

maan meet geet😊

Plz...comment...and press like button...

Edited by teju2292 - 14 years ago

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