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valliyah

@valliyah

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

Fiza yeh kya kiyaaa...............maar daala Allah😳................Sharneel i mean Neela ki yaad agayi..............ab jyada intezar na karwana..........Aapke update ke intezar mein😳...............!!!

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samira

@-Samira-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

woow sis masha-Allah

amazing start Fiza

i'm loving this story

update soon next part insha-Allah

thanks for the pm

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nerdndproud

@nerdndproud

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#53

superb starting fiza................u portrayed a common girl life almost perfectly...........loved it...........plz update soon..............

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: sharneel
Fiza ji..Aadab. pehle to har uss khata ki muaafi maangte hai jo aapki tehrir se nazrein churane per kiye humnain. yaqeen maane hamara... na likhne ka waqt naseeb hota hai aur na parhne ka sabar baksha Khuda ne. Aaj bhi yeh jo likhne aagaye woh sirf iss liye k iss bahane aap se 2/4 baatein to ho jayengi 😊 accha likkha aap ne...bohat hi 'Urdu' style me hai 😊 kisika saath nibhane ka vaada hum nahi karte kyunki aise vaade akser toot jaaya karte hai per hamare naik tamanna aur duayen hamesha aap k saath hai. likhte jayye aur aapke alfazon ko aise hi sarahay sab...Ameen!

oh btw...kuch inspiration chura k le jaa rahe hai in panno se, shayed hum bhi phir likhna shuru kar paaye.

-Neela

For you:

hum se na poocho k khata kaise aur kab hue..
dard me doobe rehte hai akser...aankhein phir bhi nam kab hue

Neela ap taswar nhi ker sakti ap ko yaha pa ker humain kitni khushi hoi...jis insaan ny humain is zaban mein apni baat kahny...aur pesh kerny ki himat di...woh khud yaha ajay....hum ny asa soch bhi nhi tha.....maafi mang ker na hi humain shrminda kerain aur na hi paraya.....aur khuda ra likhny k waqt nikal liya keray...hum buaht bekarai se muntazar hotay hain......

hum janaty hai....islyan ap se oii vaada nhi mangty....ap yah aai ....humaray liyan naik khwashisaat k izhar kiya ...humaray liyan buhat bari baat hai.....

ap humary pano se inspiration....shrminada na keray ......

buhat buhat shukriaya apny alfaz humari nazar kerny k liyan

thnku so much for ur coment ..khushi hoi k ap ny is tahreer ko saraha...

u dont know how it felt...i almost scrd my collogue whn i saw ur coment n shouted

lov ya

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: vampire_girl
hayyeee allah..!!😳
kya update hai
it was really nice part api...😛
loved the relation between adhi and nups..
it was really amazing bond😊

haan sach kaha nupur ne
aise kaisi kisi ke saath bhi shadi hosakti hai😔

waise ek baat kahun..y do i feel ki yea story me thodi thodi truth hai😉
mujhe sachai...nazar arahi hai😳😆
itna chota update mat diya karo
aur jaldi update karna😳

love
tasfia

hello janu

hay Allah tum bhi......yeah hay Allah kuch zayada hi comon hai.....

thnku so much dear for liking

oye hoay dekho zara asay kasay shadi.....hmmm...tu kiya irada hai janab k

u made me laugh tasu

yeah kam as kam meri kahani nhi hai plzz...hain sachi islyan hain k sab k gharo mein shyad asa hi hota hai

oki baba ....jaldi kero gi

lov ya

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: -moona-
BeautiFul Part Fiza, Really Liked it..

thks dear

yeah mona darling k coment shrink kyun hotay ja rahy hai ....

mongabo bulkul khus nhi hoa...nt to worry abhi exams horahy hain kya tumhary?

lov ya

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556195

Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed
hello janu
hay Allah tum bhi......yeah hay Allah kuch zayada hi comon hai.....

thnku so much dear for liking

oye hoay dekho zara asay kasay shadi.....hmmm...tu kiya irada hai janab k

u made me laugh tasu

yeah kam as kam meri kahani nhi hai plzz...hain sachi islyan hain k sab k gharo mein shyad asa hi hota hai

oki baba ....jaldi kero gi

lov ya

haan common hai😆
arey mera bada kahatarnak iradahai..🤣..mai apne abbu ammi ka pich nahi chodne wali🤣
acha tumhario nahi hai..koi baat nahi kabhi na kabhi to hojayegi na..🤣
kash me hi ladka hoti to abhi ka abhi sach kardeti🤣🤣

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Naina

@sumonetolub

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#58

nice update....i loved the relationship nupur and adhiraj share....cant wait for the next one where they meet this suitor haha.....naina

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur
nice1 dear..........

par sare mislim family itne conservative nahi hote........

love nupur's charector

thnks dear

i know dear...mein khud ek muslim ..kafi modren family se belong kerti hoon....but story k kuch asy essence hai jin ke wajha se mein ny asa rekha hai

thnks for liking

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: DhanakZ
Masha Allah Bohat hi Pyari or Achi kist thi
Bohat hi Nafees andaz ma likha ha ap na

Humma npur Ka halat or Ahsasat ka bakhobi andaza ha K ka

Hamara Muashra ma her Larki ki zindagi ma ye Dor atta ha or usa is napasandida amal se guzarna parhta ha

Humma Bohat pasand aya

Pegham bhejna ka bohat Bohat Shukria

kahani ko aga jaldi Barhaie ga hum imntezar kara ga😊

thnku soo much

sab se acha ep k jawab hai is tareer k lyan...ap ko moo se urdu parh k buhat maza ata hai

hay Allah...nafees....thnku so much itny baray complemnt ka..

hmm yeah waqi kai napasanidida ammal hai..per zindagi k buhat bara hisa bhi

khus hoi yeah jan ker k ap ko parhna acha laga

hum khoshish keray gay ...ap ko itna intezar na keray