Mayur FF - Magical Complications.

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Mamoona

@Silent.Dreamer

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#161

Fantastic Update Kinza..

Feeling Bad for them...

Really Nice Update..

Both of them were getting ready for work, and thinking about the complications they had in their lives, unaware that these will bring them close ... because these were the MAGICAL COMPLICATIONS.

beautiful piece of writing...

Thnx for the PM...

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Mou.

@Mou.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#162

great going mahek...they both hv their share of pain & lonliness & together they can wipe them opf..looking forward to next update!

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.SA.

@.SA.

Trailblazer

Posted: 14 years ago

#163

loved the update Mehak , its so different from your earlier work. it yanks us out of dreams & puts us face to face with stark reality.
our Mayank Nupur though are made up of hardier stuff. Inshallah, they will over come all these complications soon.
thanx for the pm.

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RoohPay

@RoohPay

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#164

oh....di...................".magical.complications."...loved it,.......................

Both of them were getting ready for work, and thinking about the complications they had in their lives, unaware that these will bring them close ... because these were the MAGICAL COMPLICATIONS.

loved this lines.....

u r rockstar..............................

as usual ...amazing part...................👏

thnx 4 pm....

payal_

Edited by pearl10 - 14 years ago

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nerdndproud

@nerdndproud

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#165

its so complicated........tune ekdum sahi nam socha..........ye log milenge kaise.......😕.........waiting for next part.......cont soon

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kirti123

@kirti123

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#166

😊felt bad for mayank

he had suffered alot

loving the story

😊

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Jessie

@jes_jade

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#167

PART 4 & PART 5

Awesome parts !!👏👏

This line was really confusing & shocking.."we both don't travel on the same path.",
Does dat mean dat Mayank won't accept Nupur??😕

The Mayank's side of story was really sad...his convo with his mother..😭😭

U r just Excellent!! Superb!!👍🏼👍🏼

Cont soon...😊

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nanchie sharma

@mayur-ki-diwani

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#168

awesomeee part

poor mayur

hope they meet soon

continue soon

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Sania

@dynamic_doll

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#169

superb update Kinza!

feeling bad for Mayur 😭

waiting for the next update

continue soon

nd thnx for the pm 😊

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@Jenny..

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#170

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sorry for late 😳.....awwwww mehaku the part was wonderful....i loved every bit of it....the story line is very sad adn heart touching 😔 ...specially this line "we both don't travel on the same path.", .awwww they are suffering so muchh....me feelin sad for mayur 😒....it was amazing and u rocked⭐️..👏.thnx alot 4 pm...luv yaa 🤗

Edited by -Arti4ever- - 14 years ago