Mayur FF - Magical Complications.

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Hey sweets!! šŸ¤— šŸ¤—
missed me??. 😳 😳..i missed u all too! 😊 😊 , i am sure cricket fever is taking over all of u!, May the best team win!, i know all of us consider our own team as the best! šŸ˜†, but still MAY THE BEST TEAM WIN!
so here i am back with my new story.
Magical Complications
hope u all like this one, and i am really thankful to all of u for the immense support u all show me, there is no way i can return the amount of affection and kindness u all show.
Happy reading!!
God Bless
Kinza Arshad
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INDEX

1. Complications - Pg 1
2. A try of moving on - Pg 7
3. Moved on - Pg 12
4. Strangers - Pg 18
5. Lightened despair - Pg 22
6. We Collide - Pg 27
7. Is this really me?? - Pg 34
8. Way Out - Pg 40
9. I am there - u want or not! - Pg 45
10. Paving Ways - Pg 51
11. She reads through me - Pg 56
12. Budding wishes - Pg 61
13. Knowing YOU. . - Pg 66
14. I can't live without you - Pg 70
15. You are unbelievable - Pg 76
16. Sealed forever <3 - Pg 82
17. Bliss - Pg 87
18. Being husband and wife - Pg 94
19. Pillow talk - Pg 99
20.Life is beautiful - Pg 105
21. Speaking Silence - Pg 109
Edited by -Mehak - 14 years ago
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1. The Complications..

"One more drink",

this was the 15th time nupur was asking for another drink., "di plz bas karo, let's go home, for God sake look at u, u are totally drunk", gunjan was trying push away the glass but nupur didn't let her do that, "u go home gunjan, u have a husband waiting, to whom will I go?, u go go!", she started patting gunjan's cheek, her eyes were getting droopy and her body movements showed the lack of coherence, but before gunjan would further continue with her pleading her phone rang, she hurriedly reached for her phone in her bag and her throat dried seeing the name flashing on screen , "haan samrat?", she tried to sound normal.

"gunjan where are u?", the strictness in his voice made her more scared, "samrat main yahan'wo.."

"nupur k sath ho ..right?", he knew his wife very well, and gunjan got embarrassed, stealing a glance at her sister, who was now trying to pour the last drop of the drink in her throat, "samrat listen..i.."

"gunjan I just called u informing that rohan and araav were asking about you", he hung up the phn leaving gunjan with teary eyes, samrat's voice had such disappointment and rage, he was strict but he was not rude,, which made gunjan feel very guilty and her tears rolled down her cheeks,

"one more drink", nupur's voice made her rage boil to its limits, "di bus karo!", her voice this time was broken due to tears but very strict, she held her from her shoulders and made nupur face her, "di tumahin meri jaan ki kasam hai, for my life's sake lets go home plz, I almost abandon my family for u., u and u don't even realize, di plz, my kids are suffering, plz lets go home", in spite of her anger, she couldn't be strict and said to nupur in an almost pleading tone.

Although nupur was drunk but her sister's pleading voice struck her last bit of senses left. She could tolerate everything but not the tears of her darling sister, which was daughter like for her, she blinked her eyes twice, to see gunjan was now crying, even in that night club, and even in midst of all the rock music, she could only hear gunjan's sobs, she tried getting up from the chair, but lost balance and gunjan supported her, again making her sit, "gunjan u go home, I told u na..u go home"

"di u know I won't leave u here, plz chalo na", she tried making her stand again with her support but this time nupur was not interested, "gunjan what is the use, I will return here after sometime, u go na"

She started revolving the last bit of ice in her glass, even that was about to melt, just like her life..

"di..plzzz", nupur looked at her , she knew she won't agree, nupur smiled with droopy eyes and holding her arm, she slowly started walking, they had reached the exit of the club when nupur screamed, 'OMG!"

She stopped with shock, "kia hua di?", nupur removed her arm from her hand, "I didn't say him bye!!", she ran back to the counter and gunjan ran behind her.

She almost ran towards the counter and leaned over to other side, he was standing facing the shelf,,"oye hello,..", she patted his shoulder and he turned, his deep dark eyes, met hers', the stern look on his face was not new for nupur, "aj bhi u made fabulous drinks", she leaned a bit more on the counter, wheras he was standing rock solid on his place, not at all being affected by her leaning, she looked back at gunjan, who was waiting, she leaned closer, almost whispering, "gunjan ko pata nahi chale, but I will see u tomorrow", she looked into his eyes smiling and he made sure no part of her body touched his',"bye..umm", she again forgot his name, so she bended on the badge on his shirt pocket, "yess..bye mayank Sharma!!"

Edited by -Mehak - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Okay so another FF to the "magic" series....šŸ˜‰......although I havnt read ne of the ffz b4.........bt vil catch up on thz one since I found it riliiiii interstinggg.....
Me nd my dukhyarapan bt kya karun I love such storylines....i love brk upz......šŸ˜†........
Awsm work Mehak.....ur a wonderful writer.........keep updating.....

Sunshine😳

Edited by Sunshine Girl - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome ff mehak 😃
too coolllllllllllllll šŸ˜†
Edited by ...Mitali... - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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So Kinza After taking long break,u comeback with another Fantastic FF...
Loved this Part..
and Soon wanna Know the Reason behind Nupur's Behaviour..
And Fab Part...
eagerly waiting for next updates..
All the Best for ur FF...šŸ‘šŸ¼
Edited by -moona- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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it seems to be interesting one mehak........😊

gud start......😊 but its really surprise to see nupur drinking..........😲
Edited by drmaha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yay you started another FF! 🄳 thank you so much Baji I missed your writing a lotšŸ¤—
OMG Nupur's a drunk 😲 really hard to believe, poor gunjan having to leave her kids behind and all. I wonder what happened to nupur i'm pretty sure she didn't start out that way. It'll be interesting to see MayUr fall for each other. 😳 as usual, it's really different from all your other work, a brilliant start. šŸ‘ thanks for the pmšŸ¤—
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesomeeeee

loved it

lolzzz mayank a bar tender n nupur is a talli

continue soon

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