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drmaha

@drmaha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#141

it was gud mehak but lil bit confusing...........😔

do update soon.....want to know wht will hapen ?👍🏼

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Posted: 14 years ago

#142

AMAZING!! Kinza! ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!!.... 👏

Loved dis dialogue:

"people don't really mean what they say in simple words"

Very well written... And the ending that he felt happy looking at her in full senses for the first time! WOW

Great Job! 🤗

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kirti123

@kirti123

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#143

wow

loved the part

wating to read next

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zarfishanzahid

@zarfishanzahid

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#144

i just read the 4 parts and they are mind blowing and sry for replying late i was busy

thx alot for the pm

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#145

Last line sounds so good...
Lovely update...The first interaction ws positive and i fully enjoyed it...
Cont soon...

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Mulan.

@mulan.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#146

kinzuuuuuuuu i have only one word for what u r writing in this ff: WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

as usual i cant help wondering if this is going to be ur best ff after all!!!!!!!!!!! 😳

beautifully writn yar!!!!!!!!!!! its amazing!!!!!!!!! u ares such a fabulous writer!!!!!!!!!!!

and as u already know m in love with this mayank!!!! 😍😍

nupur is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!

and this part was just too good!!!!!!!!!!1 it actually had magic in it!!!!!!!!!!!!!

to cut it short kinzuu u r making ur bestie proud!!!!!! 😆

*hugs*

*now i m off into the sighing mode*! !! 😛

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#147

beautiful update

luved their convo....n the bus stop scene was really mindblowing

nupur felt disappointed bt mayank felt happy 2c her in full sense...interesting

beautifully written

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crazymayurian

@crazymayurian

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#148

wow it's osom superb mindblowing...

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neetu

@mayurg2010

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#149

i didn't get a pm😭😭😭😭😭😭
please do pm me next time
i was waiting for your update
and as usual the part was amazing and fantastic
if i were in mayank's place then even i would do the same........

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ginny munjal

@ginny09

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#150

lovelyyyyyyyyyyyy part :D

loved it mehak :D

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