..Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai ![1] {A SaJan FF} - Page 7

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Joseph_A thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: monaya_sajan

excellent part......finally u settled on dis name ryt??????? hope dis is final.........



I hope this is Final.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: hiiiiiiiiiii

hi joseph!

hey im tanzeel
first welcome to IF
i just read this ff of urs
omg loved the first part very much
i have to say i love ur writting style
and then wow the promo is amazing
really loving it
waiting for next part
continue soon
love,
tanzeel



Thanks Tanzeel for your lovely Comment.I am trying my best for upcoming parts.please wait.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: SajanRox11

Hii Joseph! anotherr AMAZING PROMO!

Superbly written... But im dying to read the next part!
!! What happened? Im sure something pathetic!
Plz continue soooon!
and ITS OK! if you have two FFs of the Same name!! lol!
many ppl have it! u dont need to worry!
Gosh!
Anywayy.. Nice name!
Love,
manjari



Thanks Manjari,your comments is very valuable for me because,i think you are YASHRAJ or KARAN JOHAR of IF- FF portion. and,yaa i was suffering from Title related things but,finally its sort-out.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
hey joseph!! awesume storyy read the both parts....its just midblowing.... monaya n viviann!!! wohh!! my favourites..plzz plzz continue soon n pm me..add me in ur pm list..!!! plz plz plz...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: ArShSaJan

hey joseph!! awesume storyy read the both parts....its just midblowing.... monaya n viviann!!! wohh!! my favourites..plzz plzz continue soon n pm me..add me in ur pm list..!!! plz plz plz...



Thanks for Comment here.hey,actually i am a regular reader of your FF as a silent visitor.😉 i like your all concepts especially new 1 (sajan-armaan triangle). thanks a lot for liking my first attempt.😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
Bro ! U surprised me again,😲 what a Rocking concept.👏 👏 👏 No 1 guess ,kya hone wala hai??😲 And, Both male lead in Grey shed ?? 😲 My expectations is very high. and,Yes your Presentation Style is also very impressive. B4 reading,If,Character face clear ho toh,aap uss face ko Character mein assume kar sakte ho.And,i loved your Pic. posting sys. B4 update (in CS,1st Update and PROMO) and I think,aapne SAMRAT ke liye S-2 look select kiya hai..M I right? VIVIAN selection for RAHUL,is very suitable. Dude! Good going. Please,Do continue soon. I M waiting and Yes maine aapke PM ko bhi answer kar diya hai😆

-S O H A M.


*And,yes Your Siggy Pic. is nice also.😉They R my favorite too.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
heyyyyyyyy dear justt read urrrrrr updtttttttttttt,it ws awsmmm ,supprb yaar.
totally different cncptttttt.
luv d parttttttttttttt.
plzz plzzzzzzzzzzz add me to ur pm listttt.
plzzzzzz cnt wid nxt part soon,n dunn 4get to cm meeeeeeeee.
luv u
vritika😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: SHAMSHIR-MJHT

Bro ! U surprised me again,😲 what a Rocking concept.👏 👏 👏 No 1 guess ,kya hone wala hai??😲 And, Both male lead in Grey shed ?? 😲 My expectations is very high. and,Yes your Presentation Style is also very impressive. B4 reading,If,Character face clear ho toh,aap uss face ko Character mein assume kar sakte ho.And,i loved your Pic. posting sys. B4 update (in CS,1st Update and PROMO) and I think,aapne SAMRAT ke liye S-2 look select kiya hai..M I right? VIVIAN selection for RAHUL,is very suitable. Dude! Good going. Please,Do continue soon. I M waiting and Yes maine aapke PM ko bhi answer kar diya hai😆

-S O H A M.


*And,yes Your Siggy Pic. is nice also.😉They R my favorite too.



Hello Bhai, now,you embarrass me.😳 Actually,i am trying to show a very different Love Story.It is Love Triangle. Generally , A Love Triangle based on [1.]1 good guy n 1 bad guy n good guy wins his lady love😡 OR, [2.] 2 good guys n 1 guy sacrifice his love 😭 I am totally fade-up with this routine Love Triangle concept😡 .So,I want some different in this Love Triangle.Here,both Male Leads are 'GREY', they both are totally practicle person.In my view, this is interesting concept but,I am not sure about others view.😕 I hope,woh ye LIKE kare.

Yes,Maine SAMRAT ke liye S-2 look hi decide kiya hai.Thanks for liking RAHUL look and my presenting sys. Thanks for answering my PM.😳 I am big fan of Hrithik-Katrina.😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: karantakiar

heyyyyyyyy dear justt read urrrrrr updtttttttttttt,it ws awsmmm ,supprb yaar.
totally different cncptttttt.
luv d parttttttttttttt.
plzz plzzzzzzzzzzz add me to ur pm listttt.
plzzzzzz cnt wid nxt part soon,n dunn 4get to cm meeeeeeeee.
luv u
vritika😊



Thanks Vritika, for liking my concept (Story idea on p-1). I am trying my best for execute my thought in words.its my first attempt so i am very worried about reader's reaction. I hope,Joote nahi pade😉.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
..Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai !
[-A Passionate Love Story]

Part 2
: SAMRAT's Entry -




'S'VILLA -

A sprawling Bungalow...in a posh locality of MUMBAI...'S' VILLA...[SAMRAT VILLA] the residence of SAMRAT SHERGILL...a hardcore businessman...for whom, emotions mean nothing.He has only goals in life to be achieved. For this young, suave businessman, dreams are a waste of time. It is just success that counts and with money, anything can be brought... and that should be perfect. And this is just where SHANKER, his house help has erred... inspite of being paid a hefty salary,this mere mortal had dared to make a mistake... and now, he deserved a punishment...

SAMRAT's Room-


As he was pacing in his room, anger was easily seen... his stride, his bloodshot eyes... SAMRAT was angry... he clenched his fist as he picked up his in house phone and made a call to Mrs THAPA... the caretaker of 'S' VILLA... as the call was received at the other end, SAMRAT bellowed...

S - Mrs.THAPA ! Kya main pooch sakta hoon...Aap ko Yahaan kyun appoint kiya gaya hai?

Mrs.THAPA - Sorry Sir! But,Kya hua? Mujhse koi mistake ho gayi kya?

S -
Nahin aapse nahin Mistake to mujhse hui hai...Jo tum jaise useless staffs ko appoint kar liya hai.

Mrs.T- Sorry sir ! Mujhe koi Idea nahin ,Please tell me hua kya hai?

S - Tumne time dekha hai?? 8:03 ho gaye aur ab tak mere room mein mera ENERGY DRINK nahin aaya? Kya yeh tumhaari responsibility nahin hai ki,check karo ki,sabhi time par apni duty kar rahe hain yaa nahin ?

Mrs.T - Sorry sir ! Main abhi check karti hoon.

Just as SAMRAT banged the receiver in its hook and turned around, he saw SHANKER enter the room with an energy drink... he was looking downward, scared to meet his master's gaze... as SAMRAT yelled at him, he looked up startled...

A thin and young person enters in room ,with ENERGY DRINKS
He is SHANKER...!

S -
Oh ! Hello Mr. ? what's your Name..?? Anyway,jaane do..par tum aaj ke baad iss ghar mein yaa iss ghar ke aas-paas bhi nazar nahin aaoge.

Sha.- ( his voice low and filled with fear, he managed to gather some courage to speak)... Sir! Please forgive me...aaj pahli baar late hua hoon...Aap nahin jaante subah meri wife fever ki wajah se..

S - Mar Gayi?? Hello !Maine tumhen yahaan tum aur tumhari wife ki story sunne ko nahin rakha hai , woh zinda hai yaa mar gayi?Ye tumhari problem hai..meri nahin.

SHANKER looked downwards, his eyes brimming with tears... he never expected any sympathy from his master... but to even think about the death of his wife was torture for him and to hear his master say it so easily shattered the poor man... he was startled as he heard SAMRAT yell...

S - Ab khade kyun ho? jaao yahan se...Mrs Thapa se mil kar apna dues clear karo aur kabhi yahaan dobara nazar aane ki zaroorat nahin hai.

Though his eyes were pleading for mercy, he knew it was futile... he kept the tray on the desk and turned to leave...his shoulders drooping... totally dejected... eyes moist. As he was walking away from the room, he stopped as he heard a lady call out his name... " SHANKER suno...! "

He wiped his tears and turned around to face the lady... a smile on her lips and warmth in her eyes, the older lady was DAI MAA... the only person who was important for SAMRAT... the only person, he considered his family... she looked at SHANKER and asked him...her gentle voice soothing SHANKER...

D.M. - Kya hua...? Dekho tum uski baatoon ka bura nahin maano.Wo aisa hi hai...Woh apni ROUTINE ko strictly follow karta hai...so,Routine break karne waalon ko punish karta hai that's it.

Sha. - Main jaanta hoon Dai maa , yakeen karein, maine jaan boojhkar nahin kiya...woh aaj Sarita ko Hospital mein admit karana tha so,late ho gaya...aap jaanti hain mujhe iss job ki kitni zaroorat hai...bina job ke kaise guzara hoga...? Burying his face in his palms, he sobbed... DAI MAA patted his back as she said...

D.M. - Mujhe pata hai,Tumhen Tense hone ki zarorat nahin hai,Maine Mrs. Thapa se baat kar li hai...wo tumhen SHERGILL MANSION mein shift kar dengi aur wahaan se kisi aur ko yahaan appoint kar lengi. Tum jaao...aur haan Sunita ki care karo...

Sha. - (He wiped his tears and folded his hands in gratitude... relief lacing his tone, he said...) Thanks Daai maa.Main jaanta tha sirf aap hi meri kuchh help kar sakti hain. Thank You ,main aapka yeh ehsaan kabhi nahin bhooloonga.

D.M. - Achha ab jaao yahan se...SAM ne dekh liya to problem ho jaayegi.

SHANKER scurried off after thanking DAI MAA... She sighed as she saw him rush off... and then turned towards SAMRAT's room...

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As she entered his room, she saw SAMRAT busy reading a file. he did not notice her presence. She smiled as she saw him buried in his work. She walked over to him and moving her hand over his head, she asked him... " Ye sab kya hai SAMRAT? "

SAMRAT did not look at her and nonchalantly asked her...

S - Kya ?

D.M. - Tum jaante ho main kya pochh rahi hoon? Tumne itni zara si baat par usse job se nikal diya , yeh bhi nahin socha ki job jaane ke baad woh kya karega?


SAMRAT shut the file as he looked up at his DAI MAA... and then he spoke in atone that he spoke to only with her...soft and gentle...

S -
Dai Maa aap jaanti hain ,mujhe irresponsible persons pasand nahin...aur naa hi main apne decision ko re-think karta hoon. Usne mistake ki aur usse punishment milli .that's all. maine yahaan koi consultancy Agency nahin khol rakhi hai jo main sabki fikr karoon ki kaun job jaane ke baad kya karega..? Kya aapko kuchh aur bhi kahena tha..?

D.M. - Nahin kahena nahin tha ,kuchh poochna tha..agar tumhaari permission ho?

S - Aap jaanti hain, aapko mujhse kuchh bhi poochne ke liye aapko mere permission ki zarorat nahin hai. Aap jo chahe pooch sakti hain.

D.M. - Woh Main...

But before she could complete her sentence, SAMRAT's cell buzzed. He saw the name that was flashing on the screen and looked at DAI MAA as he said... before receiving the call... "1 min. Dai Maa..."

He then spoke to the person who had made the call...

S - Hello ! Mr. AHUJA ,Maine saari required details and figures E-mail kar diye hain.Check it and i don't think aapko new Deals Paper prepare karna mein aur koi problem hogi.

A -
Yes,Mujhe woh saare details mil gaye hain...but, 55% ?? Kya aapko lagta hai ? Mr. SHERGILL iss deal par sign karenge..? I mean ab tak toh 50% ki Partnership thi .kya unhen 55:45 ratio acceptable hoga?

SAMRAT lost his temper when he heard this... his voice harsh, he spoke...

S -
Mr. AHUJA ! Shayad aapko pata nahin ki,SAMRAT ko questions pasand nahin. Mr. Shergill sign karenge yaa nahin..? ye meri problem hai aapki nahin. Aapko jitna kaha gaya hai , utna hi kijiye. Thanks ! Office mein milte hain. Bye.

As he finished talking, he softened his tone before he spoke to his DAI MAA... "Aap kuchh poochh rahi thin?"

But DAI MAA knew better... so she changed the topic a s she asked SAMRAT...

D.M. - Woh abhi rahne do...pahle ye batao yeh tum kya kar rahe ho..? apne hi Business mein Partnership?? woh bhi apne father ke saath? Yeh sab kiska hai Samrat? tumhaara hi naa?

SAMRAT laughed sarcastically... as he looked at her and said...

S - Haaa...Haaa...haaa... [laughed badly] Dai Maa , What a Joke? aapka sense of humor bhi kaafi good ho gaya hai.

D.M.-
Kyun maine aisa kya kah diya? Aakhir tum SHERGILL Empire ke waaris ho.

S - Aur aapko lagta hai ?ki Mr. Shergill apni death ke ke baad yeh saari property mujh ko de denge? Dai Maa...Ye khushfahmi aapko hai mujhe nahin.

D.M. - Khushfahmi...? To yeh sab kiska hai?

S - Mrs. SHERGILL and unke laadle bete VIKRAM ka aur main apni puri life unki company mein as a Employee work nahin kar sakta..so,Partnership Is Best Option for me.

D.M. - But,apne Dad ke saath Partnership?

DAD... this word did not go down well with SAMRAT...this word never went down well with him...there was something about this word that made SAMRAT angry... very angry... his voiced filled with hatred, he said...

S -
Wo mere 'Dad' nahin hain...mere dad ki death ussi din ho gayi thi jab unhone meri maa ki first barsi ke din hi apni second marriage kar li thi...mere dil mein unke liye saari feeling ussi din khatam ho gayi...jab unhone mujhe sirf iss liye Bording School mein bhej diya . kyunki,unki new wife ko mere saath 1 house mein rahna acceptable nahin tha. I am an ORPHAN Dai maa...A REAL ORPHAN.
He could feel a stabbing pain in his heart as he uttered these words... his eyes threatened to release the tears that were brimming in them... but SAMRAT controlled him self as he moved his fingers over his eyes... he looked at her and simply uttered...

Dai Maa...!! Like a mother can feel the pain her child is enduring simply by hearing his voice, DAI MAA could feel the pain her ward was going through... his eyes looking for solace from the pain as he looked at her... but there was nothing she could do...or say that would calm him down and ease his pain. So she decided to change the topic... and she asked him... "Oh main bhi ye sab kya baatein karne lagi...mujhe toh kuchh aur hi poochna tha?

SAMRAT looked away as he asked her...

S - Kya poochna tha?

D.M. - Woh main Tumhaare aur RICHA ke baare mein jaanna chahti thi...Kya yeh sach hai ki,Tum donon shaadi karne waale ho? aur very soon tum donon ki official Engagement hone waali hai?


Speaking very casually as he looked at her...

S - Haan..Dai Maa...Yeh sach hai. Hum donon jald hi shaadi karne waale hain.

D.M. - Oh! Tum nahin jaante aaj main kitni khush hoon. Aakhir mere bete ko Pyar ho hi gaya..ab sab kuchh thik ho jaayega. Dekhna RICHA ke tumhaare zindagi mein aate hi sab kuchh badal jaayega.PYAR sab kuchh badal deta hai...sab ko badal deta hai.

But all this happiness vanished into thin air as SAMRAT cut her off... picking up the file and opening it, SAMRAT spoke as he started reading the file...

S - Dai Maa ...aisa kuchh nahin hai.hum donon shaadi kar rahe hain..iska matlab yeh nahin ki main usse PYAR karta hoon or aisa kuchh . SAMRAT un batoon mein believe nahin karta jo reality mein exist nahin karti hain. Ye LOVE...PYAR...ISHQ... ye sab Films and Novels mein hote hain...real zindagi mein nahin.Yahaan koi kisi ke liye apni jaan nahin deta..agar aisa hota to Mr.SHERGILL meri mom ke marne ke baad again apni life re-start nahin karte.1 year bhi nahin lage unhen meri maa ko bhulne mein,apni uss wife ko bhulne mein jiske saath woh 'PYAR' ka daava karte the.

He shut the file and looked at DAI MAA.. his voice still a little harsh, his hurt reflecting in that harshness, he continued...

Yahaan sirf ek rule hi acceptable hai,aur wo hai, 'GIVE n TAKE' ka rule. Main RICHA se marriage kar use 'SHERGILL' ka surname aur apni wife hone ka status doonga aur Mr.BALDEV SAXENA , "RAINBOW COMMUNICATION" ke 60% share mere naam kar denge..,jiski RICHA owner hai. Aur iss 'merger' ke baad SHERGILL ka name COMMUNICATION sector mein bhi No.1 hoga. This is pure Business deal, Dai Maa. No Ishq-Vishq...No Pyar-Vyar !! Main bhi Khush aur RICHA bhi khush ..agar aap isse PYAR kahti hain to Yes mujhe RICHA se pyar hai.

He banged the file on the desk and stood up... he continued talking... " Anyway,mujhe kaafi der ho gayi hai.mujhe abhi shower bhi lena hai. Baad mein milte hain...

He walked to the bathroom and shut the door without giving DAI MAA a second look... DAI MAA simply kept staring at the closed door... she was lost in her thoughts as she sat on the chair...
((Yeh tumhen kya ho gaya hai SAMRAT ? Itna Dard...Itni Nafrat...Itna Anger...Itni Rudeness...ke saath tum kaise jee rahe ho ?? Tum kahte ho , tum Khush ho...RICHA ke saath?? Par woh Khushi mujhe kyun nazar nahin aati...nahin mere bachhe tu khush nahin hai...tu ek dard mein jee raha hai...ek aisa Dard jiska saamna tu akele kar raha hai...tere saath koi aisa nahin jo tere dard ko share kar sake...

She removed her specs and wiped them and then wiped her tears... a smile flickered as she remembered the SAMRAT... when he was a kid...

Kaun kahega Yeh wohi masoon SAMRAT hai jiski hansi...jiski Muskurahat se saara Ghar Muskurata tha...jiski choti-choti masoom shaitaniyon se sab pareshaan ho jaate the...par Jo kisi ko hurt karna toh door hurt karne ki soch bhi nahin sakta tha.

She shook her head as she placed her specs over her eyes... keeping her palms on her knees to support her to stand up, she stood up and looked at the closed bathroom door...

Aaj tumhen kisi par faith nahin..kisi se sympathy nahin...kisi se pyar nahin... LOVE n MARRIAGE jaise words ko tumne apne business ka part bana liya hai...Ye ek aisi darkness hai,jisme tum khote ja rahe ho SAMRAT...alone...with out any hope...with out any expectations.

She looked upwards as she questioned the supreme power...

Oh God! Aap to sab jaante hain...sab kuchh dekh rahe hain...Aapko mere bachhe ka dard kyun nahin dikhta...uski takleef kyun nahin mahsoos hoti she was unable to stop the tears..they flowed down her cheeks... Aap uski zindagi mein koi Angel kyun nahin bhejte. Jo sirf uske liye aaye...usse iss darkness se nikale...jisme woh gum ho raha hai...use LOVE ka meaning bataye...Jo usse ye bataye ki, LOVE ki life mein kya importance hai...Uski zindagi mein khushiyaan laaye...Usse SAMRAT se LOVABLE SAMRAT banaye. Kya...aisi koi nahin jo sirf mere SAMRAT ke liye bani ho...??))

Her fingers entwined, she prayed to the almighty to grant her this wish...just this one wish which she wanted for her child...SAMRAT. Sighing, she wiped her tears and turned to leave...

{>>>>>>}



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⭐️Friends,This is SAMRAT...SAMRAT SHERGILL .

I hope you like it. I know,its not very good.I mean,not match to your Expectations.(Sorry for Little Long n Boring Update). But,I Hope you enjoyed it. I try my best , thank you for bearing me. Sorry! if u disappoint 😳 I will try to improve.
⭐️


Joseph.



Edited by Joseph_A - 13 years ago

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