..Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai ![1] {A SaJan FF}

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Joseph

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: ammykhan
wowww amazing really nice
loved it

continue soon

add me to ur pm list

Thanks Ammy for your positive comment. yaa now,you are in my buddy list.

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Joseph

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: RadhikaBhushan
@ josheph yes baby doll ka jo sajan ff hai uska name kya muje pyar hai? Hai so change it.
N plzzzz dont b sryyyy
U didnt hurt any one mene to is liye bola tha cozzz koi aapse ye na bole ki aapne unke ff ka name copy kiy as u r new here.....

O M G !! Another similarity 😲 thanks for information.Do you know,first time I am thinking suitable TITLE NAME more then Story Line or update ,but,it is ok.I will change my Title again. Thanks a lot for point out these similarity.

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Swaatii

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

Hey Joseph i m swati. Luv to see 1 more sg fan. Congrats i have seen your name in wall of frame .
Please add me to your pm list . Waiting for next update
Luv u

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Joseph

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

First Look of Upcoming Part-
..Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR hai !
(-A Passionate Love Story)

.......She was crying very badly,her grip was tight.she didn't want to leave RAHUL. and,RAHUL? He was scared after seeing her situation.He asked with carrying voice,"Please! GUNJAN batao mujhe kya hua hai? Kisi ne kuch kaha kya ? aisa kya hua hai ? Please!tell me GUNJAN,Tum jaanti ho main tumhein aise nahin dekh sakta..kuch to kaho.!

G - Woh bahot bure hain,Main ab kabhi wahaan nahin jaaoongi.tears were not stopping from her eyes.

R - Ok nahin jaana..kahin mat jaana but,tell me hua kya? kaun bura hai? kya kiya usne tumhaare saath?

G - Woh SAM......SAMRAT SHERGILL . she wasn't able to stop her tears

R - What? SAMRAT SHERGILL ? kya kiya usne tumhaare saath,tell me.

G - Woh kal raat .......... she told every things with her teary eyes.

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SAMRAT in Office-

Samrat was angry...very angry and he was thinking only 1 thing (( GUNJAN! Tumne yeh sahi nahin kiya....Tumne SAMRAT SHERGILL ko naa kaha , Aaj tak kisi ne SAMRAT ko 'naa' nahin kaha hai,SAMRAT kisi ki 'Naa' nahin sun sakta. Tumne meri insult ki hai,SHERGILL Empire ke owner ki insult ki hai.Tumhen shayad nahin pata ki,tumne kya kiya hai? You will pay for this. Tumhen yahaan aana hoga GUNJAN....mere paas...mere saamne.))

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After,hearing all incident of last night,RAHUL was loosing his temper but,he knew that,GUNJAN was a soft Nature person so,he was trying to behave normal and said peacefully,"Please!chup ho jaao.Main hoon naa tumhare paas..tumhare saath. kuch nahin hoga aur tumhen kahin jaane ki zarorat nahin hai.so,Please rona band karo....aur agar tum ab bhi royi to main samjhonga you don't trust me."

G - Tum jaante ho main aisa nahin soch sakti.

R - I know. He smiled softly and said,"Toh phir No more Tears,you know naa -'I hate tears Pushpa....sorry! GUNJAN" he said in Rajesh Khanna style and he wiped her tears.She smiled...she was feeling better,now.she said softly,"Ok nahin roungi,wait abhi aayi" and she left-out the room.

But,RAHUL ? He was thinking only about GUNJAN..her pain..her tears ((GUNJAN!I can't say,maine khud ko kaise control kiya hua hai.Jo RAHUL apni GUNJAN ka sad face nahin dekh sakta usne aaj apni GUNJAN ko rote hue dekha un aansoo ki wajah se red ho chuki uski aankhen dekhi.Main tumhein nahin bata sakta ki,maine aaj kitna pain feel kiya hai GUNJAN! Main use nahin chodunga. SAMRAT SHERGILL Now,you dead. Tumhen nahin pata ki,tumne iss baar kis se panga le liya hai? RAHUL ke hote hue tumhen GUNJAN ke har ek aansoo ki keemat chukani hogi.Bas tum dekhte jaao main tumhara kya haal karta hoon.))

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Friends,This is the part of Upcoming UPDATE (approx.Part-10/12).I know,you are waiting for next update (SAMRAT's entry).Its almost ready but,still i am not satisfied with final result.so,give me some times for improve some portions. Now,friends ! actually,I am trying to show SAMRAT and RAHUL's character in 'Grey' shed.They both are un-expected.These characters are different from general 'HERO' concept. I hope U understand my point so,please! give your valuable Comments and Suggestions.I am waiting.

*And,yes this is my final TITLE (...Mushkil Bada Yeh Pyar Hai !).😊 [JOSEPH]

Edited by Joseph_A - 14 years ago