..Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai ![1] {A SaJan FF}

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Joseph

@Joseph_A

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: karantakiar
Hey dear awsm updt yar.
it ws vry vry nice.
fantastic,fablous,superb yar.
luv d updt.
plz cnt wid nxt part soon.
luv u
vritika

Hello Vritika,Thanks for your sweet Comment here. I'll send next part very soon. Part-4 is Gunjan's entry part. Love you too and thanks again for your regular reply.

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gunjan

@1gunjan7

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#82

Hey Joseph Dear U said in the last that U think That Ur This update about Samrats entry part is not that good and is not upto our Expectations..I am SHOCKED Why do u think like this😲😲😲😲............As U couldnot be more wrong Joseph UR Samrat entry Part Update is just completely Superb, Rocking, fantabulous and completely Mindblowing............👍🏼⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏👏👏👏👏..........................Its Simply Excellent......Very very very Good work dear...........Fantastic dialogues ..each n every dialogue was Amazing and awesome......................👍🏼⭐️⭐️👏👏👏👏👏....................

Ur Ss story is so so good and amazing that I am completely Floored.........I donot have words to express and write how good Ur Ss is and how awesome your each character which u have introduced uptill now is and U r writing the story and dialogues really really well....ur work is Awesome 👍🏼.............U r a good writer joseph dear👏👏....

Samrat entry part is Rocking.......Samrat is really a grey shade character But But after what he suffered in childhood bec of that he became like this.........😭But I think when true love will come into Samrat's life then samrat will change.......and become a lovable Samrat..................................And I think that true love with whom samrat will fall completely and passionately in love is is Gunjan😊😊.....RIGHT Joseph😉.................................

Once again Fantabulous and Rocking Update and Samrat entry part was Wow!!...........😍👏...................

Love Gunjan😊..............

Edited by 1gunjan7 - 14 years ago

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SIZZZLER

@SIZZZLER

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#83

Rocking Part Bro.👏 👏 👏.Fabulous Entry.👏 U presented SAM character so well. Fantastic entry.Simply SUPERB.Actually,I M shocked how can U presented him in a so systematic way.😲 It was not easy.....U used only 2-3 characters and sketched all SAM's Characters so decently??😲 must say......Superb Debut in IF.

and most important thing I M impressed with your Story telling system.It is Amazing.After reading your CS and Intro Part...I must say Your story is powerful. Buddy! Story is more important part of any FF/SS without story ,only cute n lovey-dovey scene kisi bhi FF/SS ko carry nahin kar sakte. And,I M feeling your story is main strength of this FF so,keep it up. and,Do Continue soon. THANX 4 PM.

-S O H A M.

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Swati

@SwaNia_2

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#84

OMG..........Rocking, Dude....what an amazing update...........loved Samrat's intro........you are doing fab 👏

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aashi

@aashizin

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#85

hey dear it was very nice part hon loved the way u presented samrat it will be treat to know his story ahead with gunjan can't wait for next part do continue soon and thanks for pm 😳

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ammykhan

@ammykhan

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#86

awesome part.samrat entry was fabulous.u write very well,keep it up.continue soon.Thx 4 the pm.

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shafia Akhtar

@IISHAFS

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#87

tht was soooooooooooooo awesomeeeeeeee love it

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368758

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#88

Awesome ......................fantastic update...Sammy's inner turmoil was portrayed so beautifully..You can really feel the pain & hurt ..Dai Ma was so sweet!!!Wish her prayers come true soon...Please continue soon...Can't wait to see Gunjan's entry..

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Joseph

@Joseph_A

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: 1gunjan7
Hey Joseph Dear U said in the last that U think That Ur This update about Samrats entry part is not that good and is not upto our Expectations..I am SHOCKED Why do u think like this😲............As U could not be more wrong Joseph UR Samrat entry Part Update is just completely Superb, Rocking, fantabulous and completely Mindblowing............👏..........................Its Simply Excellent......Very very very Good work dear...........Fantastic dialogues ..each n every dialogue was Amazing and awesome......................👏....................

Ur Ss story is so so good and amazing that I am completely Floored.........I donot have words to express and write how good Ur Ss is and how awesome your each character which u have introduced uptill now is and U r writing the story and dialogues really really well....ur work is Awesome 👍🏼.............U r a good writer joseph dear👏👏....

Samrat entry part is Rocking.......Samrat is really a grey shade character But But after what he suffered in childhood bec of that he became like this.........😭But I think when true love will come into Samrat's life then samrat will change.......and become a lovable Samrat..................................And I think that true love with whom samrat will fall completely and passionately in love is is Gunjan😊😊.....RIGHT Joseph😉.................................

Once again Fantabulous and Rocking Update and Samrat entry part was Wow!!...........😍👏...................

Love Gunjan😊..............

Thanks for your lovely reply Gunjan. Its just like Review for me. I am glad after reading your Comment and some points about my mistakes (jo tumne edit kar diya😳.thanks).I can't use lappy more because,bhai permission nahin dete😡😭 so,I write Updates mat. on papers during College free periods (or some time, during boring lectures😆).But,during typing some times full lines (or full para) change kar deta hoon. In EXECUTE error, The Original Line was "Main LOVE jaise useless word ko apni life mein execute nahin karna chahta,kyunki nafrat hai mujhe iss word se." But,ye long thi so,short karne ke liye current line wright kar di and words ko change hi nahin kiya. Sorry for that and Another mistake (Get) is my fault.Its not a excuse,Thanks for point out my mistakes.

Thanks again for liking my story subject and Samrat's entry part.I said that because,I was not satisfied but,If other likes it then now,i am happy for result. Still i am confused about Gunjan's entry scene. sorry in advance ,if I'll disappoint you.😳

Edited by Joseph_A - 14 years ago

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Joseph

@Joseph_A

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: Anjali_12
Awesome ......................fantastic update...Sammy's inner turmoil was portrayed so beautifully..You can really feel the pain & hurt ..Dai Ma was so sweet!!!Wish her prayers come true soon...Please continue soon...Can't wait to see Gunjan's entry..

Hello Anjali,Thanks a lot for liking latest Update. Samrat's entry presentation was really difficult for me.This is very hard,rude n tough character ,totally opposite of Gunjan's character because, she is very calm,sweet and soft spoken person. Part-4 is Gunjan's entry part.