..Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai ![1] {A SaJan FF}

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Joseph

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hello Friends,My name is Joseph and this is my first post on India Forum.Actually,i m big fan of SaJan/MoNaya😊 and after mjht ending,i m missing them very badly😭 This is my first FF. I hope,you will enjoy it. and if,you want further update information, please ! add me to your Buddy List

..Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai !
[-A Passionate Love Story]

CHARACTER SKETCH 'n' LOOK :

SAMRAT SHERGILL - A Business Tycoon.Very rude personality.He is very Ambitious person. He hates his parents.He was only 12yrs. old,jab usne apne parents ka divorce n apne Mom ki death dekhi.Step Mom ke rude behaviour ko feel kiya.he nothing knows about LOVE so,he doesn't believes in LOVE.

*What is LOVE ? -
"LOVE is wastage of time. LOVE the reason of all weakness.I hate the word of 'LOVE'.A useless n priceless word of Universe..."

RAHUL NANDA - A handsome guy with Heart of gold.He is MBA topper and now,working in SHERGILL INDUSTRIES as a Product Analyst.Very hard working person.He belongs to a Middle Class Family.He is very happy with his life...1 loving parents and 1 friend...No,I think more then Friend...OR may be,his Love..??

*What is LOVE ? -
"LOVE is pure feeling,I know about my LOVE...Jiske saath main full life spend kar sakta hoon...without any complain because,I know...woh,sirf mere liye bani hai. I love the word of LOVE because,I love...?

GUNJAN BHUSHAN - A very beautiful Girl.Very shy,simple,innocent and soft spoken personality.No complain No demand nature girl. She is orphan. After her Parents death,in the age of 8...she was alone and that time she realized the meaning of the word "ORPHAN". but,she was lucky because,Mr.& Mrs.NANDA was ready for her take-care as a Guardian. now,Mr.& Mrs.NANDA and their son RAHUL is every thing for her. She was very brilliant student.She got Scholarship and now she is studying in DEHRADOON. She just completed her Graduation.

*What is LOVE ? -
"LOVE...? Kabhi think hi nahin kiya...Jab marriage hogi...Woh bhi ho jaayega..."

MONISH KHURANA - A another Business tycoon.College friends of SAMRAT n RICHA. Just return from LONDON. A Casanova...totally crazy about Cars n Girls. His past was not good...He wants to hides his pain n his emptiness of life...with his 'Bad Boy' image. But...now,he wants to settle-down...with a simple,family oriented girl...Jo uski Status n Bank Balance se nahin...sirf usse Love kare...Actually,he is searching a 'True Love' in his life.

*What is LOVE ?-
"Pyar aur Car..Time to time change karte rehna chahiye...warna,life boring ho jaayegi...But,...'True Love' woh kabhi change nahin ho sakta... uske liye toh main khud ko change kar sakta hoon...because,I know...uske bina toh life hi boring ho jaayegi..."

RICHA SAXENA - Very rich personality. Daughter of Business Tycoon , BALDEV SAXENA. She is owner of "RAINBOW COMMUNICATION" (On Paper).She doesn't know "B" of BUSINESS. Very obsessed for Party,Latest Fashion trends n SAMRAT...The name of her Class mate, First Crush,Prince Charming... etc..etc..She is very exited about her marriage with SAMRAT SHERGILL.Her approach for life is very different.Her living standard...her Class...her attitude is different...She is not Negative character.but,she is out-spoken n immature. She doesn't knows the reality of 'life'.

STORY IDEA - Friends,Actually,I am trying to show a very different Love Story.It is Love Triangle/rectangle. Generally , A Love Triangle based on [1.]1 good guy n 1 bad guy n good guy wins his lady love😊 OR, [2.] 2 good guys n 1 guy sacrifice his love 😭 I am totally fade-up with this routine Love Triangle concept😡 .So,I want to do some very different experiment in this Love Story. Here,all Male Leads are 'GREY', they are totally practical persons. They can do anything for his LOVE. Its not a 'routine' or 'traditional' Love Story concept. My story based on this line -

"Everything is fair in LOVE n WAR"

Friends,i hope,you like the C.S. 'n' Story Idea , thank you for bearing me i would love to make new friends here. and,everyone who wants me to PM them please add me to your Buddy List. thanks.

**LINK of ...Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai ! [2] :-
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1706959/mushkil-bada-yeh-pyar-hai-2-new-link-add

**LINK of ...Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai ! [3] :-
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2184467/mushkil-bada-yeh-pyar-hai-3-new-link-add

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Posted: 14 years ago

INDEX:
Character Sketch- Page 1

Part 1 - Page 2
1st Look- Page 6 (Imp. Part)
Part 2 - Page 10
Part 3 - Page 14
Part 4 - Page 18
Part 5 - Page 23
Part 6 - Page 27
Part 7 - Page 30
Part 8 - Page 37
Part 9 - Page 42
Part 10- Page 47
Part 11- Page 52
Part 12- Page 59
Part 13- Page 64
Part 14- Page 71
Part 15- Page 78
Part 16- Page 85
Part 17- Page 92
Part 18- Page 97
Part 19- Page 105
Part 20- Page 112
Part 21- Page 120
Part 22- Page 127
Part 23- Page 134
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LINK of "...Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai ! [2] " :-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1706959/mushkil-bada-yeh-pyar-hai-2-new-link-add

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Joseph

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Posted: 14 years ago

PM LIST :- (Revised😊)

1)-mysterygirl-
2)1gunjan7
3)358674
4)ammykhan
5)Anjali_12
6)deepti_mohit
7)saduf
8)mohit_rockstar
9)monaya_sajan
10)preety88
11)RadhikaBhushan
12)SajanRox11
13)SHAMSHIR-MJHT
14)sreelu.januable
15)aashizin
16)SwaNia_1
17)SwaNia_2
18)MoNaYaRoX
19)gnaneswari
20)shafoo
21)swatii
22)nishi_sajan
23)hiii
24)karantakier
25)amira_saeed
26)sajanzvital
27)rupal.sri24
28)monaya_MS
29)Love_Anant
30)koolgurl
31)ArShSaJan
32)ekta_monaya
33)gunurlove
34)ruvy
35)sweetsurbhi94
36)snowwhite28
37)princess_sara
38)rupal.sri24
39)ambikamuskaan
40)MohitSanayaDrug
41)miriam2
42)sashazmohit
43)SaJanRox
44)kamakshigupta
45)saidivya
46)kins103
47)Kritianya
48)geetika_263
49)rokstarz_mjht
50)cool_tuli
51)lakshmi_SG*
52)pragya_luvsajan
53)sexyMoNaya.
54)amira_saeed
55)arpsin
56)Priya94
57)-meera-
58)hbkumar

* New PM LIST on P-112. Friends,If You want further details...please Add your name there.😳 Thanks.

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gunjan

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Joseph dear first Welcome to IF🤗..........................

Now I must say this Superb Story line.....👍🏼..............Very well written Character sketch👍🏼⭐️👏👏.....U described each n every character properly...........👏........Good work dear👏...........I feel Ur FF story will be very exicting and rocking 2 read...........U have taken nice characters Samrat , gunjan n rahul👍🏼...Each character looks interesting..I have started Drooling already about Sajan in it ...............😍...............

Do update soon dear and Once again Welcome 2 IF🤗...........

And Please Add me 2 Ur Buddy list..............😊 and Plssss do Pm me whenever u update😊....

Gunjan😊😊...................

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deepti

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Posted: 14 years ago

hi welcome to IF🤗

awesome CS

totally loved it

looking forward to the first part

do continue soon

-deepti

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SIZZZLER

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi JOSEPH ! Dude Totally Fantastic CS. Actually,I imagine all Characters in my front. And,Superb Casting ....I liked all 3 Characters. Dude,I M eagerly waiting 4 your First Part. And,If U adopt our Presentation Style.....Its big owner 4 us.

-S O H A M.

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Joseph

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Posted: 14 years ago

Thanks friends for your sweet comments. i will update near soon.

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Joseph

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey friends,thanks a lot for liking CS.this is my first update.I am new so got lots to learn.please keep correcting me.so,here starts the Updates-

..Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai !
[-A Passionate Love Story]

PART 1: Rahul's Entry

NANDA HOUSE -

Mr.Nanda(RD):Sharda ji...Kya irada hai ? Aaj morning tea milegi bhi yaa nahin??

Mrs. Nanda(RM):Aap bhi naa....thodi der hui nahin ki bachhon ki tarah shor karne lagte ho..

RD :Thodi der? Aapne shayad time nahin dekha? pure 8 baj gaye hain aur main aapke bete ki tarah toh hoon nahin ki,9 baje tak...

RM :Bas aapko toh koi chance milna chahiye aur start ho gaye mere bete..

RD :Sorry! Sorry! Oh main toh bhool hi gaya tha yahaan toh main use kuch kah bhi nahin sakta warna.!

RM :Warna..?Aapko pata bhi hai..kal office se aane ke baad kaafi der raat tak GUNJAN ke room ko thik kar raha tha.pata nahin kab soya hoga?

RD :Oh!GUNJAN ke room ko thik kar raha tha..??(He shocked) kabhi aapne uske room ko dekha hai??Uske stuffs use mil jaaye yehi bahot hai..par woh hai kahaan? aapke "Youth Minister" ? kahin PM ne bula toh nahin liya?

R :Good morning Dad..Good Morning Mom! A voice came,He was RAHUL ,son of Mr.& Mrs.Nanda.A young dashing handsome guy."Itni subah meri itni taarif kyun ho rahi hai? Maine aisa bhi kya kar diya..jo aap sab..

RD :Bete!woh kya hai na ki,aap ho hi itni taarif ke kaabil..main hi kya aapki taarif toh puri duniya karti hai..

R :Jaise..?

RD :Jaise? waah kya question hai,jaise inhen kuchh pata hi nahin!Jaanti hain,Sharda ji kal inhone kya kiya..Mr.Sharma ki car ki back headlight tod di...apni ussi Bike se jis par yeh udte rahte hain...aur jab unhone isse kuch kaha to,sahebzaade ne 500 ka note nikal kar de diya aur kaha..change karwa lo,purani ho gayi thi aap ki tarah !! yeh bhi koi manner hai..? No Sorry , No maafi ??

RM was smiled and slowly said,"Oh rahne dijiye naa.aap bhi kya subah-subah..."

R :Its Ok Mom!Dad jab tak mujhe subah-subah lecture nahin de dete,unki practice incomplete rahti hai...Full day college mein yehi toh karte hain

RD :Kya main lecture de raha hoon??

R :Its ok Dad!waise bhi aaj university student kaafi khush honge.

RD :Kyun aaj aisa kya special hai?

R :Kuch nahin Dad woh 9 bajne waale hain aur Prof. Nanda abhi tak ghar par hain? college student khush nahin honge kya? ab tak toh unhen apni GF ke saath hona chahiye tha

RD :Sharda ji!aap isse samjha do...warna yeh bahot pitega...abhi bhi aur iski shaadi ke baad bhi,isne yeh harkatein band nahin ki toh kah deta hoon...iski wife ke saamne bhi main isse pitoonga...

R :Dad!not again..ab yeh meri shaadi and wife kahaan se aa gayi? main toh aapki,GF ki baat kar raha tha

RD :Sharda ji!Isse kaho,yeh 'use'kuch na kahe! Tujhe pata bhi hai college mein sabse pahle woh mere paas thi aur ab bhi hai..

R :..Aur aakhir tak rahegi,Jab tak government use BAN nahin kar deti,aapki GF...aapki 'MARUTI 800' ko.

RD :Oh!Toh tujhe kyun jalan ho rahi hai?

R :Jalan aur mujhe woh bhi uss 'khatara' se? what a joke Dad!

RM :Oh chup bhi ho jaao tum donon , koi kahega..?? yeh baap-bete hain? Bilkul chote bachhon ki tarah ladte ho tum donon.Oh God! aap toh bade hain,aap hi kyun nahin chup ho jaate..?

RD :I knew it.yehi hoga.last mein tum donon maan-bete ek ho jaaoge aur main hi alone rah jaonga but,koi baat nahin yeh sirf aaj tak, kal se aisa kuchh nahin hoga.

R :Kyun?kal kya special hai?

RD :kal !! kal meri beti mere saath hogi,meri princess my GUNJAN ,phir dekhta hoon kaun mujhse argument karta hai?

R :Ha Ha Ha!But,aap bhool rahe hain ki,aapki princess meri best friend hai,jo mujhe...

RD :Rahne de rahne de..baad mein dekhenge.mujhe college ko late ho raha hai,main chala..evening mein milte hain.ok bye!

R :bye dad n take care.

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RM :Tu bhi na,kyun unhen pinch karta rahta hai?aur tune Sharma ji ki headlight kyun todi?

R :Sharma ji ki nahin Mom..unke car ki.. he smiled naughtily.

RM :Haan Haan wohi..pata hai woh,apni beti ka rishta tujh se karna chahte hain.

R :Chahte 'hain' nahin mom chahte 'the'!aur mujhe pata hai,woh aisa chahte the tabhi to sirf headlight todi warna main apni Bike se aur bhi kaafi kuch tod sakta hoon.next time unhone dobara socha bhi naa toh main..
waise,Yaad hai na mere sixer ne uss 'Dimpi-chimpi' ke kitne window glasses tode the?can u imagine Mom? main aur woh 'batata pau'??Yakkkkk.He is laughing

RM :Chup kar,yeh kya baat hui? aakhir tujhe shadi karni bhi hai yaa nahin?Jo bhi rishta le kar aata hai tu kuch na kuch aisa kar deta hai jis se woh bhaag jaate hain.hamari toh tu sunne se raha ab to tujhe GUNJAN hi shadi ke liye manayegi.

GUNJAN the name of his dream,the name of his love,He was thinking..((GUNJAN !! Mom usse mujhe manane ki koi zaroorat nahin,manana toh mujhe use hai,aapko to pata bhi nahin ki,woh mere liye kya hai? aur use maine kitna miss kiya hai? main kab se sirf uska intezar kar raha hoon Mom,par yeh 6 kab bajenge?))
6 ! OMG!! Mom aap bhi naa hamesha mujhe apni baatoon mein phansa deti ho aur main late ho jaata hoon.aaj GUNJAN aa rahi hai,aur main ab tak yahin hoon? I have to go. he left his chair and moved on.

RM :Arre kya hua..?sun to, uski train to 6 baje evening mein hai,abhi se kahan ja raha hai?

R :I know mom,par evening mein usse receive karne ja sakoon iske liye pahle mujhe apna pending work compelete karna hoga..warna aap jaanti nahin hain ki,mera Boss kitna strict hai..total 'Khadoos'. Sorry!'Khadoos' word bhi chota hoga uske saamne. actually,he is president of 'khadoos'..none another then SAMRAT SHERGILL.
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⭐️Friends,hope you like it. I know,its not very good as its my first try.Hope you enjoyed it.I try my best , thank you for bearing me.sorry! if u disappoint 😳 I will try to improve.⭐️

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