..Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai ![1] {A SaJan FF}

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sreelu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#121

hi joseph bhai😊.........xcellent work....................👏

really amazing.very interesting..............👍🏼

poor sam.......😭

rahuls character is totally different..........😕

very interesting concept bhai...............😉

plz cont soon.waiting for next part...............😍

luv u❤️..........🤗

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Joseph

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Posted: 14 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: RadhikaBhushan
hey josheph i told u i luvd d part n it was awesum agar muje pasand nai aata to awesum n luvd it kyu likhti? Pehle is ka jamab do. Or itna fabulas ff muje kyu acha nai lagta? N abt like button i didnt hit it coz i read ur part frm my cell. Computer pe bethungi to kar dungi. I realy luvd ur part dil se fabulas explain kiya hai sab. I still cant believe its ur first ff. Wel aise mat rona realy i luvd d part.

Hello Radhi,Yaa you told me😳 Sorry! Ok. now,aap 'like' press nahin bhi karogi to chalega😊 actually,I feel very nervous ,after my each update aur jab koi mistake Point-Out nahin karta to.... thoda confuse ho jaata hoon?? is it really OK ?? 😕 But,Now,I am happy after reading all positive Replies.Thanks for sweet reply.😊

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Joseph

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Posted: 14 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: ekta_monaya
awesum update yaar.......
luvd it 2 the core.....
m lovin evn dis samrat though hez a bit negetiv.....
omggg😲.....m scard....rahul ne bola he'l murder my samrat.....
hope ye sach na ho.....
richa se samrat ki shaadi samrat hi rok skta h.....wah kya attitude h....
gunjan k aane k baad to ruk hi jyegi.....samrat khud rokega😉....
princess se bettr chashmish h gunji k liye.....
& rahul upne dost ki GF ko vampire kehta h....lolz....😆.....
khud vampire ka role kr ra h....
awesum.....continue soon.....
w8in 4 gunji ki ntry.....
update soon & thnx 4 the PM....
PM me wen u continue.....
👏👏👏

Hello Ekta,Thanks a lot for your Reply and appreciation.By the way,here i'll not use the word of "Chashmish" because,its not suited on Samrat character , He is serious,hard core business men.Who is perfect for Gunjan? this is the biggest question for all😕 here,everything is very complicated.

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Joseph

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Posted: 14 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: sreelu.januable
hi joseph bhai😊.........xcellent work....................👏
really amazing.very interesting..............👍🏼
poor sam.......😭
rahuls character is totally different..........😕
very interesting concept bhai...............😉
plz cont soon.waiting for next part...............😍
luv u❤️..........🤗

Thanks Sreelu,for your appreciating reply.sometime,I am feeling very surprised ,is it really good? ya aap sab meri leg pulling kar rahe ho?😳 But,its Ok.😆 I am trying my best.very soon I'll post my next update.

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368758

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Posted: 14 years ago

#125

Awesome update..Can't wait to read Gunjan's entry & how she meet Samrat...Plz continue soon..

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-CreativeSoul-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#126

hey joseph

wow awsome update

loved the part very much

i feel bad for samrat his dad is sooo argghh

no wonder samrat is all arogent and rude all the time

anywyas lovely part

plese do continue sooon

will wait for the update

love

tanzeel

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Joseph

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Posted: 14 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: hiiiiiiiiiii
hey joseph
wow awsome update

loved the part very much

i feel bad for samrat his dad is sooo argghh

no wonder samrat is all arogent and rude all the time

anywyas lovely part

plese do continue sooon

will wait for the update

love

tanzeel

Thanks Tanzeel for your lovely Comment.I hope ,I justified the character of Samrat and reason behind his rudeness. I'll post my next part very soon.

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Joseph

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Posted: 14 years ago

#128

..Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai !
[-A Passionate Love Story]

Part 4 : Gunjan's Entry -

At the STATION -

RAHUL reached the station but,he was late.....he was searching to GUNJAN here to there ((Where is she? Oh God! Train bhi Right time thi aur main full 1hrs. late. SAMRAT ke bachhe ,tujhe koi aur din nahin mila tha meeting ke liye? aur JOY tu toh gaya...tu aur teri third class planning..pata nahin main bhi kaise iski baaton mein aa gaya? MUMBAI mein koi time par kahin pahunch sakta hai?? Yahaan toh Car ki hi population kahin zyada hai.

Oh Pata nahin kahaan hogi meri Princess? Itne crowd mein usse kaise search karoon?..Oh RAHUL!tu bhi duffer hai , Mobile se try karta hoon...ussi se poochunga kahaan par ho? (he made a call but,that cell was switched Off) Oh! GUNJAN! Please..! Please ! kisi tarah mil jaao....I promise life mein kabhi again late nahin aaoonga......Ghar par phone karoon?..shayad wo mera wait kar,direct ghar ke liye nikal gayi ho? No Dude! agar wo ghar par nahin pahoonchi hogi to?..aur Mom-Dad ko pata chala ki,main late ho gaya hoon toh? RAHUL tu toh gaya aaj)) "KYA KAROON MAIN?" He said loudly....

"Kuchh nahin...sirf ek baar turn karo ! " A sweet ,soft voice came in his ears... A voice of a Girl....a beautiful Girl...Sorry! Dream Girl of RAHUL..."GUNJAN" He turned and saw....she stood in front of him. "GUNJAN" A beautiful creation of God.....A Statue of Simplicity n Purity....A master Piece of Natural Beauty....GUNJAN.....He lost in his thought (( OMG ! I can't believe it..kya main kisi sapne mein hoon....? ya, its a Reality...? koi itna khoobsurat kaise ho sakta hai? Tum kyun itni khoobsurat ho GUNJAN?...ki,tumhen dekhne ke baad kisi aur ko dekhne ka dil nahin karta...tumhen feel karne ke baad..kisi ko feel karne ki khwaish nahin hoti... Saari duniya ke har sawaal ka jawab de kar unhen speechless kar dene waala RAHUL...tumhaare saamne khud speechless kyun ho jata hai...?? ))

"Hello ! Kya soch rahe ho? Hum ghar bhi jaayenge yaa saari raat yahin ..issi station par khade rahne ka iraada hai?" A silky,soft Voice n Cute Question broke his thought.

R : Yesss...wo..woh....

G : Yes ? Hum saari raat yahin rahenge ? (she asked very innocently)

R : No...I mean...Yes hum ghar jaayenge...abhi aur issi waqt.

G : Par tum late kyun aaye? Pata hai , pure 1 hrs. se wait kar rahi thi.

R : ((Aur main..? maine bhi to tumhara kab se wait kiya hai....)) He lost in his thought completely but,he controlled himself and said softly, " Sorry baba! Galti ho gayi...next time aisa nahin hoga..iss baar maaf kar do Please! " he holding his ears and smiled cutely.

G : Ok. Koi baat nahin...I know,you are very busy person. she smiled

R : Par tumhaare liye nahin.Agar aaj bhi woh urgent meeting nahin hoti toh...

G : I know,RAHUL, main yun hi keh rahi thi. I know,you are very caring n responsible person.

R : Thanks, waise I am very upset with you.

G : Kyun maine kya kiya? koi galti ho gayi mujhse? (she asked very innocently)

R : Woh sab baad mein, kya yahiin khade rahenge? Hum chalte hue bhi to baatein kar sakte hain.....aur,tumhaara luggage kahaan hai?

G : Ok. Luggage Waiting Room mein hai...(and,going to Waiting Room side) Woh jab maine tumhein nahin dekha to,socha Direct ghar chali jaaoon ,par socha agar tum yahaan aaye aur mujhe nahin dekha to,kaafi worried ho jaaoge...phir.....tumhare Office Phone kiya ...wahaan se pata chala ki,tum nikal chuke ho...toh socha Waiting Room mein hi tumhaara wait kar loon.

RAHUL was listening her each n every words very calmly.....he was enjoying her company a lot.He said in a very soft voice...." Thanks n Sorry "

G : Yeh kyun?

R : Thanks,mera wait karne ke liye aur Sorry, mere late aane ke liye.

G : Aaj Tum kuchh different sound nahin kar rahe?

R : Means? (He was trying to act Normal)

G : Means? hamare beech itni formality to nahin thi....Kuchh badal gaya hai kya...hamare beech?

R : ((Badla to kuchh bhi nahin hai GUNJAN! Haan hamari friendship ko ek naya naam dene ka time aa gaya hai..maine hamesha se chaha tha ki, jab tum apni study complete kar logi, to hi main tumhen ek proper way mein Propose karoonga. Ab tumhaare liye mere dil mein jo feeling hai...usse ek rishte mein badlna chahta hoon.ek aisa rishta jo sada ke liye ho...jise koi bhi tod na paaye..jiske baad main tumhein sab ke saamne apna kah sakoon.))

G : Hello! kahaan kho gaye? Kuchh hua hai kya ? Itne chup-chup se kyun ho?

R : Oh...Sorry! Wo.... woh main Oh woh main chup tha kyunki,tumne shayad notice nahin kiya par hum already,'WAITING ROOM' ke saamne khade hain (He point-out "Waiting-Room" Board) toh apna Luggage le len ?

G : Oh ! Sorry ! maine notice hi nahin kiya...wait , main luggage le kar aati hoon.

R : Chalo main bhi chalta hoon.

After taking her Luggage..they were going to 'EXIT' door side. Gunjan asked to RAHUL...

G : RAHUL tum ne bataya nahin...mujh se kyun upset the?

R : Woh tum itne dinoon baad kyun aayi?

G : Means?

R : Tumhara exam toh 3 month pahle hi khatm ho chuka tha,...phir tum itni der se kyun aayi?

G : RAHUL...exam khatam hua tha par Results toh nahin aaye the aur phir some other Documents n Certificates bhi toh college se issue karne the.aur exam mera khatam hua tha...mere students ka toh nahin.

R : Oh! Toh yeh 'Real' reason tha? Tumne apne tuition band nahin kiye the naa ?....aur maine Dad ke Bank Statement bhi check kiye..tumne uss mein se koi bhi amount withdraw nahin kiye ! Yeh sab kya hai GUNJAN...? Tum aaj bhi hamein apna nahin samajhti naa? Aur main?? main tumhaara hota hi kaun hoon? He said in a little loud and anger tone.

She stood.....silent...her eyes was numbed...2 little drops of water came in her eyes.....she said,very softly...."Tum jaante ho mera iss duniya mein koi nahin....par sirf ek Family hai jise main apni Family maanti hoon...aur.."

RAHUL just realized....what he said? he was yelling his GUNJAN....he felt a very hard n deep pain in her voice...He was filling guilty ((Oh God! Ye maine kya keh diya....? How can I forget...? she is very Sensitive n Emotional....maine usse hurt kar diya..?)) He said to her a very caring n soft voice, "Hey! Please ! Don't cry..Kya hua...? Ok..Ok..I am sorry..Baba..! "

G : (Her eyes was still numbed) Tumne ye kyun kaha ki.....main tumhen apna nahin samajhti.....aaj agar meri koi Family hai...toh woh...... Relatives kya hote hain...? Mujhe nahin pata...Mom-Dad ki death ke baad unke liye main ek stranger thi...(she was crying a very low vice) Uncle-Aunty nahin hote toh...unhone kabhi feel hi nahin hone diya ki.....ki...main ek ORPHAN...

R : Just shut-up (said a very calm n lovable voice) ! ...Agar tumne dobara yeh word use kiya toh...(his eyes was numbed too) ...main kabhi tumse baat nahin karoonga......I hate you...I hate You very much.....Tum meri GUNJAN ke liye ye word use nahin kar sakti....woh akeli nahin hai....Uski Family uske saath hai...main uske saath hoon....and hugged her tightly. ((Tum akeli nahin ho GUNJAN...tumhara RAHUL tumhaare saath hai.......Tum mere saath ho aur ye aansoo.....inhen main kabhi hamare life mein aane nahin doonga...main hoon naa....hamesha tumhaare saath ))

G : Sorry ! Phir nahin kahoongi. (said in very low voice)

R : Its better.Warna tum jaanti ho..koi meri GUNJAN ko kuchh kahe ye mujhe pasand nahin.

G : Ya ! I know, (She smiled but,still her eyes was numbed)

R : PINKY...ab toh chup ho jaao...Ye Station hai..! aur sab hamein hi dekh rahe hain...Unhen lagega..main ek akeli,bechari,innocent ladki ko mauka dekh kar chhed raha hoon....aur tum to jaanti ho ye India hai...Yeh apne ghar waaloon ki help kare na kare.....ek khubsoorat ladki ki help karne ko always ready rahte hain...tumhari help karne ki competition mein...ye sab mujhe 'Helpless' kar denge. RAHUL tried to cheer-up...after hearing his funny logic she smiled.

R : Thank God! Tumne smile to kiya....Thank You again. and wiped her tears.

G : Thank You kyun?

R : Mujhe inn logon se bachane ke liye...aur zyada roti to ye mujhe bahoot maarte...so,Thank You Pinky ji !

G : Tumne mujhe PINKY kaha? phir se...(She said with anger)

R : Haan ! aur aage bhi kahoonga...kunki,tumne aaj bhi Pink suit carry kiya hai.Waise, ek baat kahoon ? Pink Color aur PINKY name tum par kaafi suit karta hai. (he winked his eyes)

G : No way ! no more PINKY. I hate your Nick name putting habit. Ghar chalo..main again tumhaari complain karoongi Uncle-Aunty se..phir dekhna....!

R : Oh ! Aa gayi Dad ki Chamchi....Ok dekhte hain...Pinky (He teased her again)

G : Ek baar ghar to chalo phir batati hoon.

RAHUL was enjoying her anger....she was looking cute....((I want .... tum meri complain Mom-Dad se karo...sirf aaj nahin...hamesha....kyunki,jab tum iss tarah se mujhse naraaz hoti ho.....mujhe achha lagta hai...tumhen Sorry kahna...phir se manana ......aur phir woh pyari si smile.....It is enough for me....))

#Siggy Courtsey -Nice_Angel_Sana

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SAMRAT VILLA :

SAMRAT at his room........'Dai Maa' entered in his room and said, "Samrat Beta ! woh RICHA ka phone aaya tha..usne shayad koi Party di hai...Tumhen pooch rahi thi...tumhen shayad bulaya bhi tha..Tumhen yaad dilane ko kaha hai..woh tumhare Mobile par try kar rahi thi par shayad woh switched-off...

S : I know,Dai Maa...main bhula nahin bas mera mood nahin hai....I am busy in my work.Aisi Brainless aur useless parties mein mujhe koi interest nahin.

D.M. : Par Beta...woh tumhari hone waali wife hai...Tum donon ko zyada se zyada waqt saath mein beetna chahiye naa...?

S : Aur uss se kya hoga?

D.M. : Tum donon ki understanding develop hogi...Tum donon ke beech PYAAR...

S : (Samrat cut her) Phir PYAAR ? Dai Maa aap ka har topic issi word par aakar kyun ruk jaata hai? I think , yeh hindi filmon ka side effect hai, jo aap par ho raha hai...Main kaise samjhaaoon aapko aisa kuchh nahin hai...meri aur RICHA ki marriage ke liye "LOVE Interest" ki nahin "BUSINESS Interest" ki zaroorat hai. Hamare relationship ko LOVE ki nahin BUSINESS PROFIT ki zaroorat hai. aur hamari shaadi hum donon ke liye kisi "Profitable Venture" se kam nahin hogi.

D.M. : Tum aur tumhara Business! mujhe nahin samajh aate...main samajhna bhi nahin chahti....Main to bas apne uss Samrat ko dekhna chahti hoon...jise iss Businessmen SAMRAT ne hara diya hai...aur mujhe yakeen hai..ek din mera woh SAMRAT zaroor jitega...

S : Woh haara nahin mar chuka hai Dai maa.(His voise was rude but,he was feeling a pain during saying this line) Hamesha ke liye.Aur koi markar zinda nahin hota....usse koi zinda nahin kar sakta....and he left from his room.

D.M. : (( Tum galat ho SAMRAT....woh mara nahin hai...maine usse dekha hai...roz dekhti hoon...tumhaari aankhon mein...woh mara nahin sirf so raha hai.....aur mujhe yakeen hai...ek din woh jagega...koi na koi toh hogi...jo uss so chuke SAMRAT ko jagayegi......mujhe nahin pata woh,RICHA hai yaa koi Aur..? Tum badloge SAMRAT....main mahsoos kar sakti hoon ki,kuchh to aisa hone wala hai...jo tumhaari zindagi tumhaari soch...tumhaari nafrat ko badal dega........Par darr toh iss baat ka hai ki, kya tum uss change ke liye prepare ho..? aur,Kahin iss Businessmen SAMRAT ne mere uss masoom SAMRAT ko phir se hara diya toh...?)) She worried about her thought.....

every thing is looking Fine...Nice...n Calm.....But, Future?? Who knows Future??
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*Friends,hope you like it. I know,this part is not up to the mark(Sorry for Little Long Update).This part is very important for Rahul-Gunjan's relationship establishment.I Hope you enjoyed it. I try my best , thank you for bearing me.Sorry Friends ! if u disappoint 😳 I am still trying to improve. Please,Point-Out my mistakes.*
[JOSEPH]

Edited by Joseph_A - 14 years ago

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Swati

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Posted: 14 years ago

#129

Superb update...........Gunji's entry was just perfect.......You are doing a wonderful job............. everything is just so perfect.....waiting for SaJan's first meeting now.

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aashi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#130

hey joseph loved this part seriously loved gunjan's entry it was adorable and u described it wonderfully 👏 first time we saw other side of samrat deep inside one real samrat who is buried in some pain can't wait for next part do continue soon and thanks for pm