..Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai ![1] {A SaJan FF} - Page 15

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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update. Loved it. Perfect entry for our gunjan. Simple, Cute, Adorable just like her. I have to say, u have made it perfect with ur expressing skills. Gunjan is so sensitive and rahul is very caring to her. After reading this part i felt that he is a little similar to samrat in the show. Hope that samrat recover from the pain and hatred after meeting gunjan. U have potrayed gunjan-rahul's relation and their feelings for each other very nicely. Waiting for sajans' first meeting. Do cont soon. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Bro. I must say...I M speechless.U R biggest surprise for me.😲How to handle this story so smoothly??😲 RAHUL,SAMRAT and now GUNJAN....how to U present with a simply superb way..😲??

I M surprised after reading this Update......Its really Fantastic....First time,I saw U describe GUNJAN's beauty from RAHUL's view.Its extra ordinary presentation. U R most promising debut in IF.

Entry Scene is very-very important for Story strength.Its not necessary that, aap Entry scene ka screenplay right karo...usne yeh wear kiya...aise hair the.....aise move kiya.....Entry scene means Character related features show hone chahiye and U R real winner B'coz.Your all 3 characters entry is so clear and very sharply presented.

about,GUNJAN's entry scene....after reading this part,Its so clear that, She is Orphan,Woh Nanda's ke saath rahti hai...Self-respected girl hai so,tuition se apne expenses cover karti hai and she is very emotional person even abhi usne Pink suit wear kiya hai👏.And this is the Winning Point of Your writing style. Your Presentation Style is SUPERB.Its really Eye-Catchy, very clean and simple. and, I liked your Pic.Posting Sys. its looking very nice (Especially that particular SANA-VIVIAN siggy)👏 My RATING for your this part-

RATING - ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️/5 WITH 👏👏👏👏👏



-S O H A M.

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Joseph Wow!! What a Stupendous, fantabulous ,Excellent update...Just Superb 👍🏼👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏................Very well written Update....Ur story is very very beautifull and Fantastic story....The story is progressing very well.....👍🏼The story is so so fantastic that I am completey Hooked by ur FF----Mushkil bada yeh pyaar hai story .....and U are writing the story n dialogues n describing Ur each characters nature thru Dialogues and you r progressing ur story line very very well....U r doing a fantabulous and Amazing job joseph👏👏👏👏.............U r a very good writer dear👍🏼...and I am just hooked by your story and keep on thinking whats gonna happen next in Ur FF....😍......Ur FF is one of the Ff which I love reading the most......its one of My best FFsss.....................Well done joseph👍🏼..............

Gunjan's entry scene in this update was very well shown.👍🏼...the way u showed Gunjans entry was so cute and amazing. each n every dialogue clearly showed that Gunjan is a very sweet and lovely Girl and she is extremely caring and very very sensitive also and emotional too n wants 2 be independent in life......

These Dialogues of urs joseph -----------
"Tum jaante ho mera iss duniya mein koi nahin....par sirf ek Family hai jise main apni Family maanti hoon...aur.."
Uncle-Aunty nahin hote toh...unhone kabhi feel hi nahin hone diya ki.....ki...main ek ORPHAN...These Dialogue proved that she loves her Uncle-Aunty like her parents and she can do anything I mean ANYTHING 4 them....And leave anyone for their Happiness............Gunjan I feel is a very sweet girl..........very loving..............😊...................

These dialogues of Rahul n gunjan I feel prooves What I said about Rahul that His Love is ONE-Sided .....
1---
G--Aaja Tum kuchh different sound nahin kar rahe?hamare beech itni formality to nahin thi....Kuchh badal gaya hai kya...hamare beech? This proves that Gunjan is not in Love with Rahul ..she cares 4 him and loves him just as a friend....................

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((Badla to kuchh bhi nahin hai GUNJAN! Haan hamari friendship ko ek naya naam dene ka time aa gaya hai..maine hamesha se chaha tha ki, jab tum apni study complete kar logi, to hi main tumhen ek proper way mein Propose karoonga. Ab tumhaare liye mere dil mein jo feeling hai...usse ek rishte mein badlna chahta
. This dialogue proves that Rahul cares 4 gunjan yes he does care 4 her very much and 4 him she is family and the way he said to her Hum hain na ur family was sweet dialogue😊

BUt BUTBut His love is Completely one-sided and he loves her 2 the point of obsession......... he is Obsessed by her ........and His every thought Is about HIM n His Love ..he is always saying MAIN MAIN ie ME ME everytime ....His friendship his love his proposal........his feelings etc ...every thought is ME ME ME ...RAHUL may be selfish and
he never thinks for even 1 second that Gunjan May not love Him...

3--
Tum mere saath ho aur ye aansoo.....inhen main kabhi hamare life mein aane nahin doonga.
I feel rahul hiii gunjan ke ansoon ki waja banega......JUST THINK What if Gunjan never falls 4 rahul and Falls for some one else like Samrat Then WHAT HAPPENS??????????????JUST THINK ............Will rahul be able to take it????......

Samrat n dia maas conversation was also Superbly written..What a conversation which defined samrats character properly .. 👏👏


these diolgues 4--Woh haara nahin mar chuka hai Dai maa.(His voise was rude but,he was feeling a pain during saying this line)

5--Tum galat ho SAMRAT....woh mara nahin hai...maine usse dekha hai...roz dekhti hoon...tumhaari aankhon mein...woh mara nahin sirf so raha hai.....aur mujhe yakeen hai...ek din woh jagega...koi na koi toh hogi...jo uss so chuke SAMRAT ko jagayegi......mujhe nahin pata woh,RICHA hai yaa koi Aur..? Tum badloge SAMRAT....main mahsoos kar sakti hoon ki,kuchh to aisa hone wala hai...jo tumhaari zindagi tumhaari soch...tumhaari nafrat ko badal dega........Par darr toh iss baat ka hai ki, kya tum uss change ke liye prepare ho..? aur,Kahin iss Businessmen SAMRAT ne mere uss masoom SAMRAT ko phir se hara diya toh...?)
Thru these lines I felt and I think Samrat is not Heartless ..To protect himself from being hurt he acts as if he has no heart and noone can hurt him But infact he is more senstive and things touch him deeply and the pain daii maa sees in his eyes daily and the pain sam feels too proves it...he has Buried the lovable samrat and He NOW doesnt believe in love But WHEN HE FALLS in Love then I Think Samrats change will begin........But the Qs is will he let himself change .....and If he lets himself change will he change completely.....????????and what will happen after that change....if Samrat n Gunjan unite....will rahul let them live happily?

I May me wrong this is just my feeling and Thinking about the characters...............😊

Answer to this qs is only Known by Joseph so Dear friend Plss UPDATE soonnnnnnnnnnnn.......I am very curious 2 know what will happen next and i am very excited 2 read abt Sajans meeting ..............Plss Update soon😊......

Thanks 4 pm🤗..and Once again What a Rocking and Mindblowing Update👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏..........

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Superb Work👏
Love Gunjan😊😊..

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Posted: 14 years ago
good work Joseph........👏👏👏......... its very nice update.....lovely Gunjan's entry.............n still waiting for Gunjan's entry in Samrat's life...hope it happens soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
wonderful update...it was really goo...cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SwaNia_2

Superb update...........Gunji's entry was just perfect.......You are doing a wonderful job............. everything is just so perfect.....waiting for SaJan's first meeting now.



Thanks Swania for your reply here.Your opinion is very important for me because,I am biggest fan of your SS.😳 Please,Point-Out my any mistake,If I do.😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjali_12

Hey awesome update...Gunjan's entry was fabulous...The way you showed Gunjan & rahul's friendship & the bond they share was fantastic....Samrat's Dadi is so sweet...Really want to see her wish come true..Can't wait to read SaJan's first meeting..plz continue soon..thankyou for the pm..



Thanks a lot for your lovely Reply ,Anjali. The repo between RAHUL-GUNJAN is very important part of this story I'll clear some more things,very soon. Do you know, The character of 'Dai Maa' was not planned before but,now this is very important part of my story. Please,wait for SaJan meet scene.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: gnaneswari

Awesome update. Loved it. Perfect entry for our gunjan. Simple, Cute, Adorable just like her. I have to say, u have made it perfect with ur expressing skills. Gunjan is so sensitive and rahul is very caring to her. After reading this part i felt that he is a little similar to samrat in the show. Hope that samrat recover from the pain and hatred after meeting gunjan. U have potrayed gunjan-rahul's relation and their feelings for each other very nicely. Waiting for sajans' first meeting. Do cont soon. Thanks for pm



Thanks Gnaneswari , for your lovely Reply. Actually, I was very worried about Gunjan's entry scene....this was very difficult for me....I found, Entry at Station is little different so,I done it.Thanks for appreciation of this scene. RAHUL-GUNJAN repo is very important part of this story .Very soon,I'll clear some things.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: gunurlove

good work Joseph........👏👏👏......... its very nice update.....lovely Gunjan's entry.............n still waiting for Gunjan's entry in Samrat's life...hope it happens soon



Thanks buddy,for your Reply n accepting Buddy request.Please,wait for SaJan meet scene.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 1gunjan7

Hey Joseph Wow!! What a Stupendous, fantabulous ,Excellent update...Just Superb 👏................Very well written Update....Ur story is very very beautifull and Fantastic story....The story is progressing very well.....👍🏼The story is so so fantastic that I am completey Hooked by ur FF----Mushkil bada yeh pyaar hai story .....and U are writing the story n dialogues n describing Ur each characters nature thru Dialogues and you r progressing ur story line very very well....U r doing a fantabulous and Amazing job joseph👏.............U r a very good writer dear👍🏼...and I am just hooked by your story and keep on thinking whats gonna happen next in Ur FF....😍......Ur FF is one of the Ff which I love reading the most......its one of My best FFsss.....................Well done joseph👍🏼..............

Gunjan's entry scene in this update was very well shown.👍🏼...the way u showed Gunjans entry was so cute and amazing. each n every dialogue clearly showed that Gunjan is a very sweet and lovely Girl and she is extremely caring and very very sensitive also and emotional too n wants 2 be independent in life......

These Dialogues of urs joseph -----------
"Tum jaante ho mera iss duniya mein koi nahin....par sirf ek Family hai jise main apni Family maanti hoon...aur.."
Uncle-Aunty nahin hote toh...unhone kabhi feel hi nahin hone diya ki.....ki...main ek ORPHAN...These Dialogue proved that she loves her Uncle-Aunty like her parents and she can do anything I mean ANYTHING 4 them....And leave anyone for their Happiness............Gunjan I feel is a very sweet girl..........very loving..............😊...................

These dialogues of Rahul n gunjan I feel prooves What I said about Rahul that His Love is ONE-Sided .....
1---
G--Aaja Tum kuchh different sound nahin kar rahe?hamare beech itni formality to nahin thi....Kuchh badal gaya hai kya...hamare beech? This proves that Gunjan is not in Love with Rahul ..she cares 4 him and loves him just as a friend....................

2--
R :
((Badla to kuchh bhi nahin hai GUNJAN! Haan hamari friendship ko ek naya naam dene ka time aa gaya hai..maine hamesha se chaha tha ki, jab tum apni study complete kar logi, to hi main tumhen ek proper way mein Propose karoonga. Ab tumhaare liye mere dil mein jo feeling hai...usse ek rishte mein badlna chahta
. This dialogue proves that Rahul cares 4 gunjan yes he does care 4 her very much and 4 him she is family and the way he said to her Hum hain na ur family was sweet dialogue😊

BUt BUTBut His love is Completely one-sided and he loves her 2 the point of obsession......... he is Obsessed by her ........and His every thought Is about HIM n His Love ..he is always saying MAIN MAIN ie ME ME everytime ....His friendship his love his proposal........his feelings etc ...every thought is ME ME ME ...RAHUL may be selfish and
he never thinks for even 1 second that Gunjan May not love Him...

3--
Tum mere saath ho aur ye aansoo.....inhen main kabhi hamare life mein aane nahin doonga.
I feel rahul hiii gunjan ke ansoon ki waja banega......JUST THINK What if Gunjan never falls 4 rahul and Falls for some one else like Samrat Then WHAT HAPPENS??????????????JUST THINK ............Will rahul be able to take it????......

Samrat n dia maas conversation was also Superbly written..What a conversation which defined samrats character properly .. 👏👏


these diolgues 4--Woh haara nahin mar chuka hai Dai maa.(His voise was rude but,he was feeling a pain during saying this line)

5--Tum galat ho SAMRAT....woh mara nahin hai...maine usse dekha hai...roz dekhti hoon...tumhaari aankhon mein...woh mara nahin sirf so raha hai.....aur mujhe yakeen hai...ek din woh jagega...koi na koi toh hogi...jo uss so chuke SAMRAT ko jagayegi......mujhe nahin pata woh,RICHA hai yaa koi Aur..? Tum badloge SAMRAT....main mahsoos kar sakti hoon ki,kuchh to aisa hone wala hai...jo tumhaari zindagi tumhaari soch...tumhaari nafrat ko badal dega........Par darr toh iss baat ka hai ki, kya tum uss change ke liye prepare ho..? aur,Kahin iss Businessmen SAMRAT ne mere uss masoom SAMRAT ko phir se hara diya toh...?)
Thru these lines I felt and I think Samrat is not Heartless ..To protect himself from being hurt he acts as if he has no heart and noone can hurt him But infact he is more senstive and things touch him deeply and the pain daii maa sees in his eyes daily and the pain sam feels too proves it...he has Buried the lovable samrat and He NOW doesnt believe in love But WHEN HE FALLS in Love then I Think Samrats change will begin........But the Qs is will he let himself change .....and If he lets himself change will he change completely.....????????and what will happen after that change....if Samrat n Gunjan unite....will rahul let them live happily?

I May me wrong this is just my feeling and Thinking about the characters...............😊

Answer to this qs is only Known by Joseph so Dear friend Plss UPDATE soonnnnnnnnnnnn.......I am very curious 2 know what will happen next and i am very excited 2 read abt Sajans meeting ..............Plss Update soon😊......

Thanks 4 pm🤗..and Once again What a Rocking and Mindblowing Update👏..........

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ 1/2
------------------
5
Superb Work👏
Love Gunjan😊😊..



Thanks a lot GUNJAN for your Review.I am so glad after reading your Reply.

Ur FF is one of the Ff which I love reading the most......its one of My best FFs. -this is very Big compliment for me but,I don't think ,my work deserve it. Here,many writers are much better then me and they are experienced also.

Gunjan entry scene was very difficult for me.I don't know,how to describe scenes and all things.I want to present every thing in very simple and sober way. Gunjan is a very simple character of this story so,her entry was also simple.I am glad...if,you liked it.

I really work hard on my Dio. portions.It is very imp. portion of any story. and,If you noticed, this is very simple general conversation lines,very ordinary.

RAHUL is very sweet person. A "Happy Go Lucky" type guy.Girls loves him but,he is not Casanova. He is very caring and protective for Gunjan. His dream is very small. He is not ambitious person. He is very happy in his life and his Family. He is not selfish. He wants to marry Gunjan and lives a happy married life with her. Gunjan also believes in marriage..not in love before marriage if,Rahul is thinking same thing then, what is wrong?

And thanks for your Rating.😳 I wish 1 day,5 Star gain kar sakoon. Soham Bro. ne toh de diye😊

Edited by Joseph_A - 14 years ago

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