..Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai ![1] {A SaJan FF} - Page 12

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Posted: 14 years ago
What an Awesome Update Joseph..........Just Superb, Excellent, Outstanding and Simply Mindblowing.............👍🏼⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏👏.....................................

.Very well written Update ......U Established Samrats and Rahuls character very well....................👍🏼 I think Samrat is at the Negative character with little shades of Grey ...who can go 2 any lengths to get what he wants in life.......But When love will enter his Life N when he starts feeling love 4 someone special After that he Can turn into a grey person and ultimately Positive person.........

And I came 2 a Conclusion about Rahul's character After these dialogues between Rahul n His friend----
1---
Hello! Mujhe 'Ladkiyon' mein nahin sirf 1 ladki mein interest hai....samjha...? Aur woh aaj aa rahi hai evening ki train se...woh jiska maine kab se intezaar kiya hai.He is talking about Himself his feelings What about Gunjans feelings........??

2---
Oh GOD! Yaar! I think,He is the main Villain in my Love Story.Iski apni toh koi Love-Story hai nahin...meri bhi Love-Story set nahin hone dega.Aabhi lovestory Start bhi nahi hui and he is dreaming.......What if Samrat becomes a real Villian in his love story ?? and if gunjan falls 4 samrat then How will he react??

3---
Right? Tu dekhna, ek din mere hi haathon iska MURDER hone wala hai.after this Dialogue I felt If Gunjan is taken away from him he can turn negative and do that ................
4---
No Way ! Usse sirf main hi receive karne jaaoonga , chahe uske liye mujhe yeh meeting chhodni pade yaa ye company.
R : Itna-Utna main nahin jaanta ..I know,she is mine and uske liye kuchh bhi ...meri GUNJAN ke liye kuch bhi...everything for my Princess.
this dialogue shows he can do anything 4 her ...Anything ....and these dialogues show that he is Over-possesive also and I know she is mine ..He is Assuming she is His But What if she falls 4 someone else ...What will he Do then??????😕😲Just think😲...................
5---I knew it...(he smiled) This is the most favorite n popular statement of both parties after "Dumping" 😉😆 case. I understand your situation Dude! He chuckled again. His friend was Dumped and he is laughing.😲.....A best friend never laughs ..he didnt even think By his laughter his friend must have felt Bad....
6---J : Dekhta ja Bachhu! 1 day tujhe bhi pata chalega.
After his friend said these words I thought Kahin one day Rahul ke sath agar asa hua toh....??
7----R : Isme cheap kya hai? Mujhe unke name yaad nahin rahte toh unki personality ke points se hi unke Nick name rakh deta hoon. Simple!
(He says with innocent face) Yaa I feel also this is cheap .....ladkion ke asey wasey Nick name rakna....😲.......

I FEEL after reading the conversation between Rahul n his friend That Rahul is a Grey character But Selfish also and
I feel he is a Grey person with Different Shades 2 his Personality..Sometimes he is Nice n Loving Like with His Family and Gunjan n close friends Sometimes he can be negative n sometimes grey ...What I mean is That I Feel n Think Rahul is a Chameleon and He can Turn Negative even Violent in Future...............As he is in love with Gunjan.......and If his love turns 2 be One-sided love then and if Gunjan gets married 2 Samrat then he can turn fully negative .......As he is possessive about her ..........He will never Hurt Gunjan But can hurt someelse.who tries 2 take her away from Him......Rahul is a complete mystery as he can react in different ways 2 different situations.....

Samrat though is a Rude n Arrogant person but he is Not a Chameleon---Woh Jo hai woh Dikta hai ..............He is Same with everyone.......and Samrat is grey n Negative because of What happened with Him in childhood So he has a reason .....and...If I have 2 trust someone I will trust Samrat because what he feels inside his heart he shows ..............

This is what I feel n Think But I CAN be WRONG ALSO...........


But I must say this JOSEPH Dear All Dialogues were Amazing and fantastic👏👏....................they were Rocking actually they Described properly Both Rahul n Samrats Characters...............Well Done .👏👏👏👏👏👏...SUPERB WORK👍🏼..............

Thanks 4 pm 🤗and DO update Soon 😊as Really excited 2 read about Gunjans entry....Update Soonnnnnn Plsssssssssssssss...

Gunjan😊😊...........
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved sam's character a lot.plzzzz update soon............
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part
loved it
cant wait 4 the next part
continue soon
thx 4 the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
tht was nice wasa rahul ko samrat ko aya nahi khaana chaiya kisi ko jana ka bhar ius ka hurting name dhana
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: RadhikaBhushan

hey josheph its fabulas part haiiiii yaarrre
Loved ittttt cant wait for sajan's meetingggg
Plzz do cont asap....



Hello Radhi,Thank you so much for your sweet comment. Please,little wait for SaJan meeting scene. SaJan meet scene is very important part of my story so, I am working hard for that spl. scene.Thanks again for your fastest REPLY and Sorry for my very late Reply😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: karantakiar

Hey dear awsm updt yar.
totaly mindblwing.
luvd part yar,it ws superb.
plz cnt wid nxt part soon.
luv u
vritika



Thanks a lot Vritika for your sweet comment.I'll post next part very soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 1gunjan7

What an Awesome Update Joseph..........Just Superb, Excellent, Outstanding and Simply Mind blowing.............👏.....................................

.Very well written Update ......U Established Samrats and Rahuls character very well....................👍🏼 I think Samrat is at the Negative character with little shades of Grey ...who can go 2 any lengths to get what he wants in life.......But When love will enter his Life N when he starts feeling love 4 someone special After that he Can turn into a grey person and ultimately Positive person.........

And I came 2 a Conclusion about Rahul's character After these dialogues between Rahul n His friend----
1---
Hello! Mujhe 'Ladkiyon' mein nahin sirf 1 ladki mein interest hai....samjha...? Aur woh aaj aa rahi hai evening ki train se...woh jiska maine kab se intezaar kiya hai.He is talking about Himself his feelings What about Gunjans feelings........??

2---
Oh GOD! Yaar! I think,He is the main Villain in my Love Story.Iski apni toh koi Love-Story hai nahin...meri bhi Love-Story set nahin hone dega.Aabhi lovestory Start bhi nahi hui and he is dreaming.......What if Samrat becomes a real Villian in his love story ?? and if gunjan falls 4 samrat then How will he react??

3---
Right? Tu dekhna, ek din mere hi haathon iska MURDER hone wala hai.after this Dialogue I felt If Gunjan is taken away from him he can turn negative and do that ................
4---
No Way ! Usse sirf main hi receive karne jaaoonga , chahe uske liye mujhe yeh meeting chhodni pade yaa ye company.

R :
Itna-Utna main nahin jaanta ..I know,she is mine and uske liye kuchh bhi ...meri GUNJAN ke liye kuch bhi...everything for my Princess.
this dialogue shows he can do anything 4 her ...Anything ....and these dialogues show that he is Over-possesive also and I know she is mine ..He is Assuming she is His But What if she falls 4 someone else ...What will he Do then??????😕😲Just think😲...................
5---I knew it...(he smiled) This is the most favorite n popular statement of both parties after "Dumping" 😉😆 case. I understand your situation Dude! He chuckled again. His friend was Dumped and he is laughing.😲.....A best friend never laughs ..he didnt even think By his laughter his friend must have felt Bad....
6---J : Dekhta ja Bachhu! 1 day tujhe bhi pata chalega.
After his friend said these words I thought Kahin one day Rahul ke sath agar asa hua toh....??
7----R : Isme cheap kya hai? Mujhe unke name yaad nahin rahte toh unki personality ke points se hi unke Nick name rakh deta hoon. Simple!
(He says with innocent face) Yaa I feel also this is cheap .....ladkion ke asey wasey Nick name rakna....😲.......

I FEEL after reading the conversation between Rahul n his friend That Rahul is a Grey character But Selfish also and
I feel he is a Grey person with Different Shades 2 his Personality..Sometimes he is Nice n Loving Like with His Family and Gunjan n close friends Sometimes he can be negative n sometimes grey ...What I mean is That I Feel n Think Rahul is a Chameleon and He can Turn Negative even Violent in Future...............As he is in love with Gunjan.......and If his love turns 2 be One-sided love then and if Gunjan gets married 2 Samrat then he can turn fully negative .......As he is possessive about her ..........He will never Hurt Gunjan But can hurt someelse.who tries 2 take her away from Him......Rahul is a complete mystery as he can react in different ways 2 different situations.....

Samrat though is a Rude n Arrogant person but he is Not a Chameleon---Woh Jo hai woh Dikta hai ..............He is Same with everyone.......and Samrat is grey n Negative because of What happened with Him in childhood So he has a reason .....and...If I have 2 trust someone I will trust Samrat because what he feels inside his heart he shows ..............

This is what I feel n Think But I CAN be WRONG ALSO...........


But I must say this JOSEPH Dear All Dialogues were Amazing and fantastic👏👏....................they were Rocking actually they Described properly Both Rahul n Samrats Characters...............Well Done .👏...SUPERB WORK👍🏼..............

Thanks 4 pm 🤗and DO update Soon 😊as Really excited 2 read about Gunjans entry....Update Soonnnnnn Plsssssssssssssss...

Gunjan😊😊...........



Hello Gunjan, I am very glad,after reading your REPLY. and i am shocked also... because,you noticed all things very sharply. I really work hard for each n every dialogues of all characters because,i personally feel conversation is very important part of express your feeling.Thanks a lot for your compliment for Dialogues.

SAMRAT n RAHUL characters are Grey,I can't deny but,they are totally different from each other.Their POV,Nature and thought about LOVE is totally different and this is the main point of this story.

And, NICK NAME of girls thing, I want to say sorry,If you feel its wrong. But,Its only for perfection of RAHUL's character , He is 'Happy Go lucky' nature type person. Boys aisa karte hain and I think girls bhi karti hain😆.I am guy so,i understand their view very well.


Thanks again for this very beautiful Reply.I am working hard for next part,I'll post very soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Shafoo

tht was nice wasa rahul ko samrat ko aya nahi khaana chaiya kisi ko jana ka bhar ius ka hurting name dhana



Hello Shafoo,thanks for appreciation.Actually Rahul is an employee of SAMRAT , generally,Boss ko aise hi nick name diye jaate hain and if Boss SAMRAT jaisa rude ho toh woh to kahenge hi.
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey josheph i told u i luvd d part n it was awesum agar muje pasand nai aata to awesum n luvd it kyu likhti? Pehle is ka jamab do. Or itna fabulas ff muje kyu acha nai lagta? N abt like button i didnt hit it coz i read ur part frm my cell. Computer pe bethungi to kar dungi. I realy luvd ur part dil se fabulas explain kiya hai sab. I still cant believe its ur first ff. Wel aise mat rona realy i luvd d part.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesum update yaar.......
luvd it 2 the core.....
m lovin evn dis samrat though hez a bit negetiv.....
omggg😲.....m scard....rahul ne bola he'l murder my samrat.....
hope ye sach na ho.....
richa se samrat ki shaadi samrat hi rok skta h.....wah kya attitude h....
gunjan k aane k baad to ruk hi jyegi.....samrat khud rokega😉....
princess se bettr chashmish h gunji k liye.....
& rahul upne dost ki GF ko vampire kehta h....lolz....😆.....
khud vampire ka role kr ra h....
awesum.....continue soon.....
w8in 4 gunji ki ntry.....
update soon & thnx 4 the PM....
PM me wen u continue.....
👏👏👏

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