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bharkha

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Posted: 14 years ago

hey all maneetians

wrote an ff... stating maneet moments. Me very optimistic about maan n geet s wedding. Guys plz do comment. Its first FF..

thanks to hima (dewdropred) and deepti (maneet 1985)...

read down... the first reply...

Par1 : scroll down

Part 2 : updated pg 6

Part 3 : updated pg: 10

part 4: updated pg: 15

part 5: updated pg:20

part 6: updated pg:26

part 7: updated pg:31

part 8: updated pg 35

part 9: updated pg 40

part 10: updated pg 45

part 11: updated pg 50

part 12: updated pg 55

part 13: updated pg 61

part 14: updated pg 67

part 15: updated pg 71

part 16: updated pg 78

part 17: updated pg 84

part 18: updated pg 89

part 19: updated pg 94 last part

Edited by bharkha - 13 years ago

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bharkha

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Posted: 14 years ago

AT Khurana mansion:

Next day after the SR, maan n geet sleeping on the bed facing each other. Geet wakes up early and just stares at maan. She notices how innocent he looks when he sleeps varna toh yeh drust danav hain. Smiles again n den goes to take bath. Maan is still asleep.

Geet comes out after taking bath and starts drying her hair. She is standing in front of the mirror. Maan wakes up and stares at geet. He says kitni khoobsurat lag rahi hain meri mishti ( in his mind). Geet calls maan and says utiye maan aapko office jaana hain na utiye. Maan now in playful mood and pretends to be asleep. Geet comes near maan and calls his name - maan utiye and she couldn't stop herself staring at him. She kisses maan on his forehead and wakes him up utiye aapko office ke liye der ho jaayega.

Maan in his notorious mood pulls geet by holding her waist. Geet falls on maan and her tresses on her side face. Maan moves her tresses and geet feels shy and asks him iska mathlab aap sone ka natak kar rahe they. Aapko toh hamesha se hi maaza aata hain mujhe pareshaan karne main aura ab mein aapki ek bath nahi sunooongi. Dadi ma mera neeche intezaar kar rahi hai. Aaj sabke liye mujhe meetha banana hai na. aap jaldi taiyar hokar neeche aa jaaye.

Tum apne hosiyarpur express mein bath karna kab band karoogi' thoda saans lelo. Aur haan aaj office jaane ka mood nahi hai (he just tells for fun).

Geet says aapko sayad koi kam nahi ho par mujhe bahooth saara kaam hain. Main eya viya nahi baithi hoon. Maan gets irritated. And decides to go to office and is angry with geet. Geet goes down. Geet along with dadima decides to prepare gajar ka halwa and pudding as maan is very health conscious.

She decides to check whether maan is ready for office or not and still finds maan in the bathroom taking bath. Maan tries opening the door but in vain. He calls out geet and says mujhe paatha hain ye harqat tumhari hi hain. Darwaza kholo geet main office ke liye late ho jaaonga.

Geet ' kuch hi der pehle toh aapne kaha tha ki aapko aaj office main koi kam nahi hain.

Maan ' us samay kuch nahi tha lekin haan ab kaam hain. Darwaza kholo geet varna tumhari khair nahi.

Geet ' bathroom mein band hain phir bhi akad nahi gayii'waise bhi maan maine bathroom ka darwaza band nahi kiya hai. Lock kharab hain main aapko bolna bhool gayi thee..

Maan ' geet jhoot bolna band karo and darwaza kholo.

Geet ' tehriye main nakul ko bhejthi hoon and she leaves.

AT Dining table:

Geet and dadima waiting for maan. Maan arrives.

Dadima: maan aapne der kyu laga di. Aaj tak aap office ke liye late nahi hue hain aur shaadi ke pehle hi din.

Maan stares at dadima and geet.

Maan: dadima woh geet ne mujhe bathroom mein band kar diya

Geet: yeh aacha hain aap late hain toh iska ilzaam mujpar dal diya woh bhi yeh kehke maine aapko band kar diya. Dadima woh bathroom ka lock kharab ho gaya tha na isliye'isse accha toh yeh hota ki nakul toh bhejthi hi nahi. Thodi der aur bathroom bathroom khelthey toh maaza aatha. saari akad chali jaathi

Maan : geet.

Geet goes into the kitchen to bring in the food.

Dadima: aap inhe kyun daat rahe hain. Apke bathroom ka lock kharab hain maan betey. Aapko yaad hain na jis din geet ko hospital le jana pada woh hot steam ke karan'dadima reminds maan about brij s attack. Maan realizes.

Geet enters the kitchen and says to dadi ye lijiye gajar ka halwa.

Maan: kya gajar ka halwa.

Geet : trying to test maan kyun aap mere haath ka baana hua gajar ka halwa nahi khayenge.

Maan: haan geet kyun nahi. Tumne banaya aur main nahi khayoo aisa khabhi hoga.

Geet : maine aapke lilye chocolate pudding bhi banayee hain.

Maan feels happy hearing this and geet is also happy as maan eats her gajar ka halwa. Maan asks wer is annie. Dadi says she left to office very early. Usse kuch kam khatham karna tha aur haan aaj main bhi office jaaongi. Toh chale.

Maan geet and dadima leave to office.

Hey guys do comment..

also wud u llike me to continue

Edited by bharkha - 14 years ago

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sweetntasha

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Dear, Nice concept..Keep it up

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dewdropred

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: bharkha
hey all maneetians

wrote an ff... stating maneet moments. Me very optimistic about maan n geet s wedding. Guys plz do comment. Its first FF..

thanks to hima (dewdroped) and deepti (maneet 1985)...

read down.... the first reply...

u r welcome dear ... but what did i do ... 😊

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dewdropred

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Posted: 14 years ago

thnks bharkha ... nice beginning... cont soon ... thnks 4 the pm ...

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ixxu

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Posted: 14 years ago

very nice dear... i can just imagine those scenes... very well done... keep it up...

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Durga

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Posted: 14 years ago

nice part yaar...loved it please do add me to ur pm list ..waiting for the next update

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maaneet2010

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Posted: 14 years ago

That was just great , pls continue and do pm me 😊

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VirIka4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

Interesting and Amazing ... Can you please add me to your PM list ... Please and Thank you ... Can't wait to find out what is gonna happen next :)

Please do Continue. 😊 😊

Edited by GEETOdhaniLover - 14 years ago