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saanjh11 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#91
👏👏👏👏👏👏 liked it very much waiting for next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ bharkha
Nice update yaar . Sayed aisa kuch ho jai . I loved it .
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Posted: 14 years ago
#93
Hi Barkha, absolutely loved it. Especially when maan goes hmmmm, drives me nuts, imagining him do that. Again, brilliant conversations. I was smiling throughout it!!! 👏👏👏
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Thank u all for ur support..... comments n criticism are welcome..if u like it.. do click the like button..
Part 4:

Maan n geet in their room.

Maan ' tumne dawai liiii

Geet ' woh main lene hi jaa rahi thee..

Maan ' tum apna khayal bilkul bhi nahi rakhti ho..pehle dawaiyaa kha lo'packing toh hoti hi rahegii'

Geet has her tablets and starts packing stuffs..

Geet ' woh maine aaj aapke liye aur mere liye yeh kapde kharide hain'

Maan is happy but den pretends'

Maan ' dikhao toh..

Geet ' yeh dekhiye' pasand aaya..

Maan ' theek theek hai

Geet ' mujhe maloom tha aapko pasand nahi aayega aur main bhi' mujhe yehi cheej milli thee lane ko.. aur kuch nahi laa sakthi thee' tu bhi na geet ek number ki jhaalii hai..

Maan ' baap re baap' ithna kuch keh dala' aur bhi kuch kehna baaki hai

Geet - wahi toh' mujhe kharidna hi nahi chahiye tha..mein aur aap jeans' mera mathlab hai' mein jeans mein' na baaba na.. toh phir ye kapde camping se aane ke baad mein return kar doongi.. aur koi accha sa salwar kharid laaongiii..camping mein aur kuch pehen loongi'

Maan ' geet' tum lao aur mujhe pasand na aaye.. aisa kabhi ho saktha hai kya'

Geet ' aapko pasand aaya'

Maan ' haan geet' mujhe pasand aaya'aur tum jeans mein bhi uthni hi khoobsurat lagogiiii'. jaisa mein socha hoon'

Geet ' thab theek hai'ab mujhe packing karne dijiye.. kal jaana jo hai'saara samaan dal lethi hoon.. kahin kuch bhool na jaau'

Maan staring at geet and thinking how happy she is.. woh bhi camping ke liye..den he pulls geet closer to her.. both r lost in each others arms..

Next day:

Dadi and annie waiting for maan n geet.

Annie ' dadi' jabse bhai ki shaadi hui hai tabse bhai late aane lag gaye hain'. Time ki toh'

Dadi ' a'. a''woh dekhiye.. maan aur geet bhi aa gaye'

Maan n geet coming downstairs..

Dadi ' aacha hai aap dono aa gaye.. aap hi ka intezzar kar rahe they'

Maan ' nakul' dekhna toh office ke sabhi staffs aa gaye kya..

Nakul ' abhi dekhtha hoon..

Annie ' ye jeans toh tum par bahooth aacha lag raha hai geet.. hai na bhai..

Maan ' (looking at geet) hmmm'.smiling'(murmurs to geet) meri mishti jo bhi pehenti hai' usmein char chand lag jaate hain'

Nakul comes meanwhile and says sab aa gaye hain. Aur 15 seater waali gaadi bhi khaadi hain.. aap logo ko le jaane ke liye'. picnic mein'

Dadi ' nakul.. aap bhi humare saath chal rahe hain.. humne aapse kal hi kaha than na'

Nakul ' ji dadi' main abhi aaya'

Annie ' 15 seater (shocking expressions) waali gaadi mein jaayenge'

Dadi ' maine maangvaayi hain' hum sab office staff ke saath usmein jaayenge'.aur haan maan betey aap geet ko lekar car main aa jaayega..

Maan and geet feeling happy that they gonna come alone in the car'

Now annie understands y dadi had arranged for the vehicle'

All the office staffs ( adi. Pinky, tasha. Romeo. Pandeyji, manisha and sasha) join the khurana family at KM.

Everybody wishing maan and dadi gud morning..

Dadi ' toh der kis baath kii' chale.. nakul' zaara saman gaadi mein laga do toh'

Adi n romeo help nakul in loading the luggages' romeo busy with tasha and manisha busy with sasha (sasha irritated) ' pinky' chips khane se usse fursaat hi kahaan hain'

Maan ' dadima' aap log nikaliye hum aapke peeche peeche hi aatey hain..

Dadi ' theek hain maan betey' jaldi aayega..

Dadi, annie leave with the staff for camping..

Maan and geet standing near the car at Km.

Maan ' ye gaadi ko kisne puncture kiya'. Jarror kissi ki shararath hai..

Geet is laughing out loud'

Maan ' .. oh'ab samaj mein aaya' ye car ke saare tire tumne puncture kiya hai na geet'

Geet ' haan maine kiya hain'par aapko kaise malooom chala..

Maan ' aisa kam tumhare siva aur kaun kar sakta hai...waise bhi kal hi car service se aayee hai...

Geet (giggling )

Maan - Ab hasthi hi rahogi ya madath bhi karogii..

Geet ' aapne mujhe paagal samajh ke rakha hai.. kudh hi saare tire puncture karoongi aur aapki madaath bhi karoongi.. tire puncture karne mein toh aapne meri madaath nahi kii'''toh phir''... kud ka kam kud karna chahiye'woh kahavath hai na'" jiska kam ussi ko saajhe, dossro ka kam thenga bajey"..

Maan ' kya' tum aur tumhari'khair..chodo'

Maan murmurs in his mind ' aaj isse kya hua hain'..jaroor kuch gadbad hai'.ye toh bolne se rahi.. lekin paata toh karna hi padega..

Maan ' toh ek kam karte hain geet'.hum camping cancel karte hain.. kahi aur jaane ka program banate hain..

Geet ' camping' cancel''. nahi'..hey babaji... meri madath karna

Maan ' haan cancel'baaki gaadi bhi sahi condition mein nahi hai...aur car ko toh tumne puncture kar hii dii'. Woh bhi saare tire..'ek tire bhi nahi choda' tum toh meri madaath bhi nahi karna chahthi ho'.toh ab kaise jaayenge'isliye cancel

Geet ' cancel nahi karenge'aur baaki gaadi sahi condition mein hi toh hai'

Maan ' tum kehna kya chahthii ho'..

Geet ' jeep hai na''

Maan understands now' ( remembers.. geet jeep main hi toh bethi thee wen they met during HP days).. he smiles..

Maan ' toh geet tum pehle baata dethee mein jeep mein tumhe le chaltha.

Geet ' main toh aapko budhimaan samaj rahi thee' lekin nahi.. aapne toh car hi nikaal li na' isliye puncture kiya maine'.. yaad hai.. jab hum dhaba gaaye they' tab car ke charo pahiye gayab they'toh ab camping ke liye aap car kaise le jaa sakte hain.. jungle ke beech'pahadoin mein

Maan ' geet.. car mein safety belt hotha hai.. bahooth se suvidhayein hain..he continues..aur' pahadoin mein bhi jaa sakthi hain'

Geet ' haan haan malooom hai''.car toh dhaba bhi jaa sakthi hai.. lekin kya hua dhaba mein...... pahiye gayab they na'.'chodo in baathoin ko.'..late ho raha hai'.. agar late ho gaaye toh''dadima chinta karegi'.. jaldi chaliye.. jeep nikalye..

Maan got all his answers.. he is blushing now.. adores geet to the core'

Maan ' yeh sab tumne mere liye kiya hai na' pehle camping'. Ab jeep''mujhe tumhara yeh khayal accha laaga..

Geet blushing now as maan is happy'.

Maan n geet leave for camping'

All reach camping site including maan n geet.. everybody decide to set their tent..

On the whole 6 tents r built.

1 ' maan n geet

2 ' dadi

3 ' annie and pinky

4 ' sasha and tasha

5 ' pandeyji, nakul and manisha

6 ' adi, romeo

precap : camping..

i hope i dint disappoint u guys...please do comment...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#94

thank u sanjh, mona, fairyeyes_zizi, roch and kahkashansakina...

thank u guys

Edited by bharkha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#95
hmmm... no you didnt dissapoint us at all...waiting very eagerly for the camp romance..hehehe... and ofc geet and maan are at their bickering and romancing so its going to be fun...please update sooner...
good work keep it up!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi barkha............

loved the update😊😊😊
loved " pinky… chips khane se usse fursaat hi kahaan hain"
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
and bechare nakul aur pandayji ki izzat ka kuch to khayal kiya hota????????????😡😡😡😡
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

hi barkha............

loved the update😊😊😊
loved " pinky' chips khane se usse fursaat hi kahaan hain"
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
and bechare nakul aur pandayji ki izzat ka kuch to khayal kiya hota????????????😡😡😡😡

thanks aash... nakul n pandeyjii ki izzat ka khaayal hai yar... u need to wait for the next part....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#98
ur a excellent writer, all the dialogues were so natural for all the characters..........it felt like i was reading the written updates of the episodes. Keep writing and do pm me. i will be waiting.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#99
thanks dia and khushi...khushi ll defnly pm u for further updates
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks alot for the sweet update yaar
love
Sana

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