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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: luvdhrishti

me w8tng
plzzzzzzzzzzz update soooooooooon

hey luvdristi.. me ll update in few mins...thanks yar...
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Posted: 14 years ago
few mins? few mins?? few mins???? its been 2 hours??? u knw how long that is???? bolo bolo
thoda jaldi karo naaaaaaa plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz my breakfast is waiting on it
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Tishuu

few mins? few mins?? few mins???? its been 2 hours??? u knw how long that is???? bolo bolo

thoda jaldi karo naaaaaaa plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz my breakfast is waiting on it

hey tishuu,...... extremely sorry yar.....all of a sudden had to leave.. my ff was ready just cudnt update it.. sorry once again yar...maaf kar do plz...
here is the update...
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Thank u guys for clicking like button and reading my ff and commenting on it...luvd reading ur comments....

Part 12:

Maan: is waqth dadima ki dhamki ka mujhpar koi asaar nahi hoga''.

Geet: sach mein'.. abhi bulathee hoon dadima ko'

Maan: bulaao'.main bhi zaara dekhu'.

Geet: dadima''.dadima''

She calls dadima again n again but in vain'..

Maan smiling..

Geet: aap has kyu rahe hain'..

Maan: kyunki dadima ghar par nahi hai'isliye

Geet: aree haan.. dadima toh kuch dinno ke liye delhi se bahaar gaayee hui hain'.

(dadima and annie left to gurgaon as one of dadima s friend wanted to see her)

Geet: aapne dadima ko phone kiya' pahooch gaayee kya'

Maan: haan geet.. meri annie se baath ho gaayee hain' dadima ke friend ke rishteydar unka khayaal rakh rahe hai.. waise bhi annie hain na dadima ke saath toh chintha kii koi baath nahi hain'.

Geet nods her head in reply' and she leaves to the rest room to change'..

She comes back and finds maan asleep''

Geet: shayad maine maan ko kuch jyaada hi thang kar diiya'.

She also goes to bed and covers the blanket on her'.

Suddenly'Maan turns around and keeps his hand around her waist'..

Geet ' yeh maan ko aaj kya ho gaaya hai.. pehle toh kabhi aisa nahi karthey they'shayad aaj maine unhe ithna thang kiiya' isliye'

She takes his hand and keeps it on the bed and holds his hand'and plans to sleep..After sometime.. maan keeps his head on geet s pillow.. they both share the same pillow now'..Geet sits on the bed and sees maan s sleeping posture'

Geet ' ab main kya karru''.. inhe utha bhi toh nahi sakthi'.poora 3/4th bed occupy kar rakhey hain'.

Geet decides to sleep in sofa'.. as soon as she is about to leave.. maan keeps his head on her lap'.

Geet ' (she looks at maan and tells )aaj toh hudh ho gaayee'. Yeh ithna ghoom kyun rahey hain' baby bhi ithna nahi ghoom raha hoga'.

She notices maan s expression being changed'.

Geet ' (telling in her mind) accha ab samajh mein aaya'..

Geet takes her phone and starts fidgeting her mobile'.

Maan opens his eyes and sees what is she doing'.

Maan ' ithni raat ko yeh kisko phone laaga rahi hai'

He pretends to be asleep and geet keeps maan s head on the pillow and she goes to the rest room..

Maan thinks that she left the room and he goes out of the room in search of her'. but is unable to find her'.

Maan ' geet geet'.

He searches her everywhere possible but is unable to find geet'he calls her in her mobile' geet attends her call'

Maan ' geet tum kahaan ho'

Geet ' main toh kamare mein hi hoon.. aap kahaan ho'

Maan ' tum kamare mein' main abhi aaya'

Maan enters the room'.

He finds the room decorated with candles'..

Maan stares at the room'. He cudnt believe that geet decorated it in short notice..

Geet ' kaisa laaga'

Maan ' he smiles and replies bahooth accha hai geet'.mujhe aacha laaga tumhara surprise'

Geet is happy to see him happy.. he den remembers that geet was over phone

Maan 'geet.. ithni raat gaaye tum kisse call kar rahi thee'..

Geet ' pehle aap baathaiye.. mujhe ithna thang kyun rahey they.. yeh sone ka acting kyu'

Maan ' wo'' wo''pehle maine sawaal kiya' isliye mera jawaab pehle'

Geet - mujhe paatha chal gaaya tha ki aap soney ka natak kar rahey hain.. aapko rangey haath pakadne ke liye maine apna cell utaaya aur washroom mein challi gaayee' lekin aapko laaga mein bahaar gaaayee hoon'aur aap meri jal mein phas gaaye'

Ab aap baathaiyee aapne aisa kyu kiiya'

Maan ' tum jo dadima ki dhamki dethi rehthi ho.. baar baar' uska compensation toh karna padega na'''''

Geet ' baby ke papa ko kithne baar samjhana padega'. Yeh thang karne ka natak unke bas kii baath nahi hai'

Maan ' jab baby aa jaayega na.. tab main aur baby milke tumhe thang karenge'

Geet ' tab ki tab dekhenge'..

Geet decides to sleep.. she goes to bed'

Maan ' agar sona hi tha toh room decorate karne ki kya jaroorath thee'.

Geet ' is room mein candles ki wajah se kitni khusbu aa gaayee hai' aakhir aroma candles jo hai.. kithne acchey acchey flavours hai

Maan ' kya

Geet- waise aapko sardi (cold) hai.. yeh toh maine apne liye kiiya'

Maan ' toh phir tumne mujhse yeh baath kyun poochi ki kamra kaisa laga..

Geet - mere poochne ka yeh mathlab tha ki candles sahi jhagah mein rakhey hui hai na'Gud nite maan'

Maan is too irritated' he turns on the other side and sleeps..Geet comes close to maan n gives his gud nite kiss on his cheek.. before geet could move.. maan pulls her'

Next day'

Maan leaves to office and even geet accompanies him as dadima n annie are not in town.Geet goes to meet adi and maan calls pinky to his cabin..

Pinky ' maan sir aapne bulaaya..

Maan ' pinky.. tumne geet se yeh kyu kaha ki maine tumhe adi aur geet ki jealousy waali baath baathaiyee..

Pinky ' maine kuch bhi nahi kaha'.

Meanwhile adi and geet enter'.

Geet ' ismein aap pinky ko kyu daat rahey hai'pinky ne mujhse kuch nahi kaha..

Maan ' turning towards geet.. kya.. pinky ne tumne nahi baathaya...

Geet ' mujhe yeh baath toh pehle hi samajh mein aa gaayee thee. .pinky ko adi sir ka kuch bhi asar na hona aur aapka aur pinky ghanto baithke baathein karna' kuch toh gadbad jaroor tha.. bus aapke muh mein sunnna chahthi thee'.

Maan ' looking here and there'.. adi aur pinky' aaj office ka kam jaldi khatham karke park plaza resort mein chaley jaana.. maine tum dono ke liye seat reserve kar rakhi hai.. enjoy guys aur haan.. yaad rakhna' apni dil ki baath keh dena aur mujhe aur geet ko ab aur thang math karna'

Adi and pinky staring at each other'.geet looking towards maan' she realizes how maan has changed' earlier pyaar shabd koi mayene nahi rakhtha tha.. and as pinky and adi are close to her.. he took the responsibility of theirs too'.

Adi and pinky leave'..

Geet ' yeh dekhkar aacha laaga aapne adi sir aur pinky ko resort mein bhej diiya'..

Maan busy with his work and nods his head in reply

Geet ' chaliye na.. aaj hum bhi kahiin bahaar chalthey hai'.

Maan ' hmmm'.(he doesn't hears her words properly and replies yes to what ever she says)

Geet ' toh hum kahaan jaayenge'

Maan ' hmmm'

Geet ' yeh hmmm hmmm kya kar rahe ho aap' aap meri baath sun rahe ho ki bhi nahi..

Maan ' hmmm..

Geet ' theek hai,'. Aap apna kam khatham kar lijiye hum boota (corn , makka) khane challenge'..

Maan comes back to his senses'geet now fidgeting her mobile'.

Maan ' kya'yeh makkey ki baath kahaan se aayee'

Geet ' hmmm'

Maan ' kya hmmm' mere sawaal ka jawab do..

Geet ' hmmm'

Maan understands that geet is doin the same which he was doin it earlier,'. But geet is doing this on purpose'..

Maan ' geet' hum makkey khane nahi jaayenge..

Geet ' hmmm''kya'..

Maan ' hmmmm'.

Geet irritated.. she walks out of his cabin' maan smiles and continues his work'.geet ka apne aap se baathein karna shuru ho jaatha hai..and she wants to tell her story regarding this to pinky n adi sir' but in vain.. adi sir and pinky are least interested in hearing her story'.she again goes back to maan s cabin..

Geet ' meri baath koi bhi nahi suntha'..

Maan ' kya hua geet..

Geet ' adi sir aur pinky apne aap mein hi busy hai.. ab mein kya karu..

Maan ' tum meri madaath karo.. aaj sach mein kam ka pressure kuch jyaada hai.. kam khatham karke hum butta khaane challenge'.theek hai..

Geet helps maan in his work'

Adi and pinky after their work gets over.. go to their respective homes and decides to get ready'.Pinky thinks of callin geet to ask what dress she shud wear.. but thinks of maan s words.. ab mujhe aur geet ko thang nahi karna.. she thinks like its better if she chooses on her own'

Geet and maan go to the corn shop'Maan takes her to proper place which is famous for various varities of corn'

Geet ' yeh kahaan le aayee aap'

Maan ' tum hi toh keh rahi thee ki tumhe makeey khaana hai.. wahi lekey aaya hoon..

Geet - mujhe yahaan nahi khaana hai'aur mujhe desi makka chahiye.. nimbu mirch hari chatni laagaiiii huii..

Maan ' kya.. makkey mein nimbu mirch chatni lagaayee huiiii'.geet'.

Geet ' chaliye naa aur kahii chalthey hain'

Maan ' mujhe nahi laagtha hai.. tum jis tarah ki makkey maang rahi ho.. wo humein kahi milega'

Geet ' mujhe paatha hai.. kahaan milegii' main aur pinky aksar jaaya karthey they makeey khaane ke liye'

Geet takes maan to that place.. and maan is astonished lik.. how pinky and geet found such place in delhi. Geet asks maan to eat.. but he is like no..geet forces him to taste and take a bite.. maan eats and he enjoys eating it'..

Its next day' maan decides to call adi and pinky to their home.. so that he can seek their help in telling rajji the truth about rahul'..

thank u guys for patiently reading the update....thank u all....
i hope u guys liked it...

Edited by bharkha - 14 years ago
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Varshu …. darling ....tere PM milne se pehle hi maine pad liya 😊nice update ......cont soon .......

Maan ko ithna … ghumaya hain tu ne ki baby bhi geet ke stomach main ithna nahin ghumtha ….🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Wohi tho main bhi soch rahin thi agar geet ko sona hi tha tho room ko decorate kyun kiya ….🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

maan sending pinky & adi on a date so that thy don't disturb them ...😆😆😆

Bechari geet no one there 2 listen to her story …😆😆😆
Edited by dewdropred - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wonderful update. thnx 4 d pm.
Edited by maanluvsgeet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: dewdropred

Varshu '. darling ....tere PM milne se pehle hi maine pad liya 😊nice update ......cont soon .......

Maan ko ithna ' ghumaya hain tu ne ki baby bhi geet ke stomach main ithna nahin ghumtha '.🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Wohi tho main bhi soch rahin thi agar geet ko sona hi tha tho room ko decorate kyun kiya '.🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

maan sending pinky & adi on a date so that thy don't disturb them ...😆😆😆

Bechari geet no one there 2 listen to her story '😆😆😆

thanks hima dii.. i m glad that u likd my update...
enjoyed readin ur comments n me was rofl...🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update
thnx for PM
continue soon .....
sonali
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks dia... maanluvsgeet and sonali..
thank u guys...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: bharkha

thanks hima dii.. i m glad that u likd my update...
enjoyed readin ur comments n me was rofl...🤣🤣🤣

u r welcome dear .... i liked those lines the top two specilly .....
I was really ROFL whn i read those 2 lines specially ....... tere tone main pad rahin thi ........ so me could not control my self .......😆😆😆

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