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@anufa

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

briilianT!!!

do continue to write moRE!!!!

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nishi

@Nishithini

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

it was different but very well-written. I loved it.

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

OMG! i really can't describe it.....i mean its just so wonderful....the feeling of "black" was beautifully described.....

i felt that she was raped, when i read these lines - "my arms and legs trying to hide what I couldn't protect."

and then these lines forced me to believe that she was for sure, raped. "I couldn't protect what I had to, for him. "

This was so melancholic that my heart was wretched with pain...all i could do, was to feel her pain...and his pain too....

I could feel his pain too.....even if u didn't explained, it was in his eyes....his action and in her voice....

It was really touching and i loved it.....LOVED it more than any of one-shots i have so far...

It was sad, but nevertheless, the most beautiful one....

P.S- i wanted to make my comment colorful like always, but i felt BLACK.

Love,
Mahak

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AWonderfulChaos

@AWonderfulChaos

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

awesome one!!

seriously gr8 writing!

thnx for d pm!

do write more!!

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Kankshita

@thegameison

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

*Edited*

I find myself speechless right now. What makes you write things like such, I dont understand. Not that I wish to learn that anyway, you keep amazing me all the time. There's so much contradiction in everything you pen down. You pen down comedy, at its very best. Mayank and Nupur in AYNIL make me ROFL and I adore the I Thee Wed couple to bits. And here again, I fail to understand what exactly I should say. The language used is very well, as always but everytime the essence of the story makes a lot of difference. Be it with the playful writings of yours or such heart-piercing wonders, you leave me mesmerized all the time. 😳

P.S. Thanks so much for posting this wonderful piece of writing on behalf of A, Jess!

Good luck,
Kankshita

Edited by -Kanky- - 14 years ago

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Gul

@DhanakZ

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Wonderful and so heart touching update.

Thanks for the Pm and All the best for your Exams.

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Swati

@SwatiBeanyBrown

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

hella.....wow!🤗 akansha..u rock girl!!! 👏always!! be it a happy or a sad one.. d flair of writing is in ur genes i guess..😎 d os was superb..d word "black" doesnt mean jst a colour 4 me frm now on..my gudness,..u manged so brilliantly 2 write such a poignant tale..hats off 2 u dear! simply outstanding!!👏..

m sure u'll rock in ur exams as u rock in i-f!! may god bless u hon..🤗

n thanx a lot jess...🤗 for posting dis os on her behalf..

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Sania

@dynamic_doll

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

nice OS Akansha!

very well written 👏

thnx jess for the pm 😊

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Radha

@rads14

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

amazing os Akansha!!
really beautiful and very well written!!
all the best for ur exams :)

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AmyArTiMayUr

@AmyArTiMayUr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Akki this OS made me cry...seriously....

It has been written beautifully...but then again all of your writing is😊

This one made me feel the pain to my bones.....great piece of writing😊 and great to know you attempted something different...you described everything PERFECTLY....😊

Best of luck for your exams...miss reading your updates😊😊