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Archana

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: kirti123
amazing os
😊

Thanks a lot 😃

Originally posted by: nikitasharma.
awesome one!!
seriously gr8 writing!

thnx for d pm!

do write more!!

Thanks you so much Nikita😃

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti
amazing os
wonderful

Thanks u so much😃

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur
lovely.................

Thanks

Originally posted by: DhanakZ
Wonderful and so heart touching update.
Thanks for the Pm and All the best for your Exams.

Thanks dear for lovely comment and your wishes for Akki's exams😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

comment edited pg 4 :D

sorry it took me so long.

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Archana

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur
OMG! i really can't describe it.....i mean its just so wonderful....the feeling of "black" was beautifully described.....
Hi Mahak, I'm Archana replying to your comments. 😃

Akki presented the feeling the black in many different shades, different meanings.... yet the at the end just the Black was so profound.

i felt that she was raped, when i read these lines - "my arms and legs trying to hide what I couldn't protect."
and then these lines forced me to believe that she was for sure, raped. "I couldn't protect what I had to, for him. "

Yes, the woman here was tainted and the OS presents that feeling of worthlessness, that she could not protect herself for him... and the lack of love in his eyes...

This was so melancholic that my heart was wretched with pain...all i could do, was to feel her pain...and his pain too....

I could feel his pain too.....even if u didn't explained, it was in his eyes....his action and in her voice....
Thank u for brining this different perspective Mahak. For me, her pain was so overpowering that I could not understand his pain. For me, he never loved her enough... never loved her enough to accept her. For me, she was expecting the love in her eyes that she has given him for past seven years... but he has nothing but darkness in his eyes... I felt her pain deeper...

It was really touching and i loved it.....LOVED it more than any of one-shots i have so far...
That's really sweet of you. I think every writer wishes to explore different subjects to write... and it's good to see people's appreciation for such different writings...

It was sad, but nevertheless, the most beautiful one....

P.S- i wanted to make my comment colorful like always, but i felt BLACK.
I made it colorful now...😃
Love,
Mahak

thank u so much Mahak for lovely comments....🤗

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Sabah

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

Archana,

Don't forget to reply to Jess' (your own) post too. That is a conversation I am looking intriguingly forward too. :P

Love Sabah

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Archana

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: -Kanky-
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I find myself speechless right now. What makes you write things like such, I dont understand. Not that I wish to learn that anyway, you keep amazing me all the time. There's so much contradiction in everything you pen down. You pen down comedy, at its very best. Mayank and Nupur in AYNIL make me ROFL and I adore the I Thee Wed couple to bits. And here again, I fail to understand what exactly I should say. The language used is very well, as always but everytime the essence of the story makes a lot of difference. Be it with the playful writings of yours or such heart-piercing wonders, you leave me mesmerized all the time. 😳

P.S. Thanks so much for posting this wonderful piece of writing on behalf of A, Jess!

Good luck,
Kankshita

Hey Kanky....🤗

I have heard a lot of good things about your writings from A... and I even though I haven't read all of your work yet, I have read a few and I must say you are a brilliant writer.

I think the writer understands why you write the stuff you write, correct? The topic like this one, just pops in your head, the idea starts flowing...and then automatically you sketch the whole thing like a perfect painting... then the writer has to pen it down. So that's exactly happens to Akki I guess!

She is good at everything she writes, isn't she? I really wonder how she does that? I could not believe first when she told me that she started writing only since April. She writes so easily, it seems writing is in her genes. She is a very talented writer, I agree.

(Sweetu... please don't look at me annoyed...I'm allowed to praise you here... We all are mesmerized by your writings Sweetu...)

Thank u so much Kanky for lovely comments... I'm sure Akki loves reading them...😃

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Archana

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: a little faith
Archana,

Don't forget to reply to Jess' (your own) post too. That is a conversation I am looking intriguingly forward too. :P

Love Sabah

Sabah...🤗

I think you should reply to my comment. It would be interesting, you know...😳

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Archana

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: AngelArTi1988
hella.....wow!🤗 akansha..u rock girl!!! 👏always!! be it a happy or a sad one.. d flair of writing is in ur genes i guess..😎 d os was superb..d word "black" doesnt mean jst a colour 4 me frm now on..my gudness,..u manged so brilliantly 2 write such a poignant tale..hats off 2 u dear! simply outstanding!!👏..
m sure u'll rock in ur exams as u rock in i-f!! may god bless u hon..🤗

n thanx a lot jess...🤗 for posting dis os on her behalf..

Thank u so much dear...🤗

Even I think Akansha is a rockstar...

Thanks for your support and wishes for her exams... she really needs her fans support. She misses you all and she is looking forward to coming back in April. Haina Akansha?

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Archana

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Favouriteofall
nice OS Akansha!
very well written 👏

thnx jess for the pm 😊

Thank u so much Sania. And you are welcome! 😃

Originally posted by: rads14
amazing os Akansha!!
really beautiful and very well written!!
all the best for ur exams :)

Thanks Radha for your comments and your wishes.😃

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Archana

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Posted: 14 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: amyluvsmayur
Akki this OS made me cry...seriously....
Hey Amy...😃
It has been written beautifully...but then again all of your writing is😊
Her writings are always beautifully written...
This one made me feel the pain to my bones.....great piece of writing😊 and great to know you attempted something different...you described everything PERFECTLY....😊
This OS was painful...and sad...but the surprising part was... how well she described each and every detail of pain... each and every feeling of black surrounding the girl...
Best of luck for your exams...miss reading your updates😊😊

Thanks Amy for your wishes for her exams....She misses you all too...😳

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Archana

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Posted: 14 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: tasfia123
hey akki 😃
it was really nice
different from your other ff or os
but too good
u r a great writer👏
awesome and all the very best for your exam😛

love
tasfia

Thank u so much Tasfia... your wishes are most welcome...😃