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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

hey akki 😃
it was really nice
different from your other ff or os
but too good
u r a great writer👏
awesome and all the very best for your exam😛

love
tasfia

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Beet

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Akki-kins 🤗

Ohemgee! What have you written?

I swear I don't know how or why , but I could feel it, see everything in front of my eyes, playing like a movie. Be it my over active imagintion or what, but I felt pained on reading it.

The amount of pain and suffering you described wasjust heartbreaking. I was crying with all my heart. And especially where he enters and she looks at him, and in a moment ot two slits her wrist, gosh that just broke my heart.

And that last line was just more painful than you can ever imagine. I can only imagine as to how you must have penned this down.

But as always, I am so glad that you picked on a different genre and took it to perfection! After all you are a brilliant writer!

All the very best for your exams sweety 🤗

Love ya <3

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

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EDITED

Akansha...

This OS is Brilliantly written. The way you brought out the protagonist feelings...it was exceeding well. I could see all this happening infront of my eyes ...thats how close to real it felt. Your words were chose to the notch and they gelled along with what you were trying to portray here but it was also very thought-provoking.

And her pain indeed very painful to read as a women myself....her thoughts were put out so painfully that i feared for her ....

You definitely have a gift for writing and i hope you pursue because this world needs writers like you. I'm just so overwhelmed after reading this OS.....its engaging..enlighting and very real.

Sorry it took me so long to edit. :D

Sajjal

Edited by -Sajjal- - 14 years ago

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prerna_agrawal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

lovely os dear!..... but plzzz don't write these depressing os!!..... write ur usual ones!!... romantic ones!!!...... but do focus on ur studies too!!.... all the best for ur exams!!!........

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daniella

@daniella05

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

lovely os!!!

thanks 4 the pm

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362035

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

awesooooome......

superb.......

fab.

loved ur OS to the core......

thanx for the pm.......

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Kankshita

@thegameison

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Edited =)

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Alisha2887

@Alisha2887

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Beautiful OS 👏 You're an amazing writer Akansha.

Thanks for posting this Jess and thanks for the pm.

And Good luck for your exams Akansha 😊.

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zarfishanzahid

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

awesome OS

thx alot for the pm

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Archana

@a-little-hope

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Posted: 14 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: -Aish-
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*Edited*

It was a wonderful OS, Akansha. You're a brilliant writer, and you ought to know that. The pain, the agony, the sadness were so seemingly real, that it wrenched my heart. Also, that is the mark of a good writer. Keep up the great work. Will miss you till APRIL. *Sighs*

Take care.

Loads of love,

Aishwarya

Hi Aish....🤗

I'm replying Akansha's OS comments on her behalf. It feels weird... but I think I know most of her fans... so it does not feel awkward.... and I'm happy to see you here...😃

Thanks dear for reading... and for appreciation.... She is inded a remarkable writer, isn't she?

Wait until April... she would come back with a bang.... !!!

Until then, even I will miss her.

Loads of love from me and Akansha,

Archana