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Aishwarya

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Posted: 14 years ago

Res.

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It was a wonderful OS, Akansha. You're a brilliant writer, and you ought to know that. The pain, the agony, the sadness were so seemingly real, that it wrenched my heart. Also, that is the mark of a good writer. Keep up the great work. Will miss you till APRIL. *Sighs*

Take care.

Loads of love,

Aishwarya

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Nirvrithi

@Nirvrithi

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey CN...

I know Im late to edit this comment.. You know sometimes I need enough time and peace of mind to digest this genre of stories.. I have to re-read multiple times to grasp whatever you would have meant by each line..I didnt want to miss anything, any emotion..

Now that I completely understand ,I dont know what to comment.. Seriously..

You explained everything in so detail.. The numbness, the pain, the feeling of worthlessness - everything.. And the true meaning of the colour BLACK..

Good job CN.. I don't mind even if it was a sad story -but it was a different style.

Will wait for April when you will come back. Till then ,concentrate on your studies.

Nivi Di.

Edited by Nirvrithi - 14 years ago

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Archana

@a-little-hope

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

RES

🤣.... you owe me a new tax bill for this....🤣

Now what should I comment?

Shall I say something like your friend? 😉...🤣

Okay, now seriously, since you are not supposed to reply on comments, I can write anything I want....🤣

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Sweetu..... I seriously don't know what Im gonna type here.

I know you like trying writing of different genres. But this was shockingly different from your usual style! First of all you chose the dark topic for writing... (that too in the middle of your studies... when you hardly get time to write)... and then you wrote it so powerfully that it was heart wrenching.

The worthless feeling of rape victim, the numbness to the pain, the wish to end it all... the force pulling towards the black.... the illusion of light which truely is not light... but its the medium to end it all, in the hope of seeing light at the end of the darkness.... and then meeting the eyes of the lover...acknowledging the loss of love...blankness in his eyes... and the call of the hollow... the decision to end it all.... fade it all to BLACK....

Simply BRILLIANT Akki.... you once again proved that you are best at whatever you do. You decribed the pain, the numbness the act of suicide in freaking awesome way. After all, you are my Sweetu... *smug*

I'm really proud of you. And I'm sure you are gonna make us all proud in your exams too.

But madam, send the writer in you on vacation for sometime...😆

Okay, I really do not support suicide as a solution to any kind of sadness.... so I would not leave my comments without saying this.... I did not like the line... Don't save me if you love me. In fact, it's the opposite that I always believe in.... that if you love, your love and warmth can save a coldest heart.... Love has an ability not just to save a life....but to heal any deepest wound inside and outside our body and soul. I believe in love.

No one is ever worthless... there is always someone who cares for our existance. Here is the song which conveys my thoughts on suicide.... It's by Good Charlotte.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eioI-E3GHbc[/YOUTUBE]

This does not mean I don't like you writing on this subject. As I said, I'm glad that you are trying new genres. And you are mindblowingly good at it.

Bless You Sweetu!!!

p.s. I hope you appreciate the efforts I put into posting your OS... setting correct font size and alignment as madam suggested... LOL ... you bossy monkey...I love you...!!!

Edited by -Jess- - 14 years ago

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Mou.

@Mou.

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

nice os akki...i m glad to c u r attempting for different genre...it is a sign that u r growing as a writer!!!!!!!!!!!! all the best for exams!

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Annie

@annie07

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

Wonderful OS Akansha.........

u are a gemof a writer.............with a very diff but amazing style

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Wings-of-Fire

@Wings-of-Fire

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

ok it was something i cant ever support doing.but i guess literature always doesnt reflect the proper attitude. i can feel the pain in my skin though......great work.
april? its so far yaar!!!!!! try to update your ffs plz.

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

Lovely OS akshi
though it was a sad OS but it was really very touchy
waiting for ur ff's update
oh GOSH we have to wait a long period.
hmm no problem.

All the best 4 ur exam