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Posted: 14 years ago
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Update Soon!!!! and PM me as well
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it was amazing..
plz cont soon as possible...
eagerly waiting.......
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Geet is in the icu

He donot know why it is like someone stabbed his heart

He wants her to talk to him

Curse him….

A nurse came and handover some papers…..

He asked what for

She replied the relation……….

Without a thought…………he said she is my wife

Mrs maan singh khurana………….

And he came out………

He sit in a jeep..

Suddenly rain fall………..

He want to scream……why it always happens to him…………..

He is again in his flash back…………………

He is touching……………..his grand father's dress………………………………to become military officer

Why everytime u will always try to take away people ……..who are close to me…..

First my mom………and then grandfather………

And now ………………………………….

He cannot speak a words……..

Why he feel…that she is a part of his life……

Why every minute he always think of her safety.she is his mission….to protect her………….and why……………he is pain…………

He saw the temple..it is after so many years.he is climbing the temples stairs……………………………….

He got there

Why want to take……………………the innocent .creature life…. d

Why so many hurdles in her life….

Then why u bring her to my life

im ok in my life

my missions……….my life everything…….then why………………………..

why….he is crying…………………….tears in his eyes.

Ne never cried when he saw his mother 's dead body……………………………………….

And he never shed into tears.when…………………..his grand father's dead body………………..he is in shock…………….

But today…………………………….he is crying for geet..

On the other hand……………………there is a moment in geet…………….

She felt someone is calling………………………………….

She tilted.

Nurse see the response………………..

She want to see maan……

She just wanted to see maan.

So much of strength she called………..maan………………

And nurse came out…………….

She informed to the doctor.

Just then.ahmed.and others saw her.

She is murmmering……………………………………………….

She is uttering only one name…maan………………………………….

With closed eyes….

Maan open his eyes………he felt geet is calling him.

He felt relieved……….

He ran back to his jeep………………

He drove to the hospital……………………….

As he enter into the hospital.

He ran towards geet's room

Geet open her eyes……….

She hugged him……………………

He was shocked……………………

But he was happy.that geet is safe.but she felt dizzy and fall into his hands.

He made her lie on the bed…..

He rushed to call the doctor…….

Doctor…………..

As she is so week.but mr khurana…..i think ur love and affection ,care had reallymad eur wife to return back to her life….

She is a strong woman………………

And he left them.

Maan looked at his wife……………..

She is sleeping……………………………..

Hair strands on her face.

He removed and tucked behind the ear………..

Her touch made him alive………

He felt like………………………….it is like years………………………

He felt relived…………

He came out..and called ahmed….

And give some details………..

He just want to trash the person into pieces with his hand…..who is trying to hurt geet…………..his geet…………….

Yes……she is his geet…………………..

And ahmed…nodded his head……ok……………..

He felt relieved that boss Is back…………

He is missing…………….his msk………………………

Now it is turn to find.the person who wanted to cheat his boss…..

He also felt……………..that there Is a different relations..

She is like a sister..to him.

She calls him ahmed bhaiyaa.he likes her sweet talk……………..

He don't know what the 18 yr girl do magic on all of them.she called all the relations…chinto………….ahmed…………..jeorge….and others…………………………………..

With his relations……

Kaka….she is so friendly………………………………………..

And on the other………………..hand…the person is very happy as his plan is succeded…………………………….

As geet is going tobe killed……………………….

He looked at the mirror…

It is armaan……………………

Maan……who ever is the person going to pay back soon..bcause now u had touched maan singh khurana………………………………

Let us get the information confirmed……………………………………

I will show what is the hell……………………………………….

Geet open her eyes…………………………………

She looked at the nurse…

The nurse….informed everything……………………

Dusht,,,,,,,,dhana,,,,,,,,,,,,,pehle chod kar chale jaat ahay……….aur muje uss dainee ke pass chod diya tha……….aur yeha…………………………….

Muje usse………………baat nahii karnee hya.

She twisted her nose………………………….

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nice update can u plz tell me when r u updating the nxt part plz reply to this post
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great update...
maan to much love geet .
pls cont soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#96
just read ur FF... its awesome..

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Thanks and update soon...:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely part ab maan ko geet ka gussa bhi dhekna hain
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Awsmm ff dear.plj ad me 2 ur pm list
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awsome update.
geet i sso cute.
love her.
do continue plz
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Geet looked at the door……..

She didn't want to give up………..

Geet:tu pagal hay……………who tere parva nahii kartha

Just then nurse..enter into the cabin……………………….

She just looked at her,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Are aap jag gaye…..aap ne kuch kayee………..pls jalde………khaleejee………………..

Warna apke husband gussa karenge…………………………..

Husband………..geet gave a surprise look…

Haa……he even shouted at the work person…who didn;'t put…………water in your………………..room.

He is so much worried……..

Geet is flattered…….

She felt happy…………….that …………………maan feelings….

She don't know why.but she felt she is in top of world….

Her face is blushed……………………..

On th other hand..

Maan enter into the hospital.he was angry………………..

He cannot see geet………

Bcause….he cannot hide his feelings…his urge of hugging her………and hiding her in his chest………and assure that he is not going to loose her in his life time……..as now his life revolves round on her…………….

His fear of loosing her………….is killing inside…………………

He peep into her room…….to see her sleeping beauty.

Hair locks on her face…………

She is amazingly beautiful…………………………….

Moon light on her face………………………………looking her more beautifull…………

She is like angel from the out side world.

Her smile makes feel like life ……………….

He missed her blubbering……….continous………………non-stop…………talking……………………..

There is a frown in his face………….

He got a call……….

He came out……………………………

Next day morning……………maan woke up………and saw geet is not in her bed…………

He got worried………..

He started searching……..for her………………….

But………..she is no where…………………….

He is out side the room……………………

he felt scared……………………………..

at that time……………………..

geet is at mandir……………..

pls babaji..aap ko thanks kehne ke liyee…….mere liye………………maan ko bejaa hay apne..

us din apko khosa.ki apne mere shaadi.maan se kyon..shaadi koo…………..lekin.babaji……………………….thoda kadoos hay…………..lekin muje bachaya hay usne.par babajii…kaun hay joo muje marn ne koshish kar rahe hay.mein ne kiska kya bhigadaa…………………….lekin.mamazi…………………..armaan….maami.sab log hay……………….leikin……..maan se important nahii……………

jaanta hoo……..babaji.maan koi galat kaam nahii karhta………..lekin………………..kya who muje.pyar kartha hay…….jaisiki……..main usee….before she could say something..

she turns around to find…………………………..maan is standing there at anger.

On seeing her….he starts firing.

Yeh tu pagal hay……………………kaha chalee gayee……….hoo abhi .maut ke moo se bahar aye hoo…….aur hospital…mein chakkar kar rahii……….hoo.he is fuming in anger……………………

His angerness……….is more.as he felt restlessness when he did not find geet in her bed….he is terrified……….he felt heonce again lost………………………..

Geet looking at him awe……but first time.she is seeing his eyes……………………….

His dark brown eyes………..his eyebrows……….weild up……….in anger………..is jaws tightened……………….cheecks….welled up………….

His moustache……………….he is so cute……………for instance..she wants to pull his cheek and says…..so cute…………

And give kisses to his cheeks……………..but she blushed……………….and she……………………ran away from there..

Maan confused..

First time .she didn't reply…….orgot scared…………….

Or given back.

And what that………..she blushed…………….

Before he could say something……………..ahmed….enter………..

he give information………………….saying…….that the person is armaan………

maan:armaan get ready for blow………………………….

This time………………….you are going to pay back.

And the girl…………..did u got the information………………..

Yes sir.tracing out..her name is nimmy and she is a nurse…………………………………..she has a brother………….

Can we kidnap him……………….

No……….donot hurt any innocents………………..it is not part of mission……

She is just………………….part of the plan.she is just a step….

We need to find……………….the major……………….person………….

How they got the information regarding………………………

Are they…..bribed someone.that means,…………….they had a eyes on their every moment.

With that he wanted to get to the geet's room……………..

She is not in the room………………

He heard her giggling sound.

Yeh ladki.pagal hay.sach mein pagal…………………………….

And he turned to find the children care room.

He gone to find………………..geet is blind folded.and her anklets..are …………….making sounds………….and kids are running.away from her……….and she is trying to catch…………………………………….

As she is roaming around.

Her duppatta is flewing……………..

Her leg is tied with the edge of bed……….as she above to fall……………………..

Maan saw this aand catches her………….

Eye lock session………………….

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