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Posted: 14 years ago
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Armaan looked at rana

How many times we try and why the hell we failed'.

U know my father had given only 3 months of time'''''and in that I need to get geet,''.

Already'''''. 15 days are wasted''''''.

I need to do something''''..

Rana:we had already sorted the plan'we had kidnapped MSK 's favourite person''''''''''..he likes him'''..a lot'''''.

Now its my turn''''''''.

And he turned to find john '.which is a special person of maan''''and maan likes him a lot.

Oh john''''''.let us see if your boss is going to save u or not.

On the other hand''''maan is preparing''''.for the fight''..

Maan:this time rana you have crossed the limits''''''''.and you will going to pay the results''''''.

He turned to ahmed and say lets go''..

With out turning to geet.

Geet felt restless''.she don't know there is a weird feeling''.which is killing inside her'''''.she don't know.she sensed some danger''''''''''.

She wanted him to safe''cannot imagine her life without him'''.she closed her eyes'.

Babaji.i don't know why'''''''''''I always thinks of his safe from the first day we met'''I don't know why u always sent him to me when I was in trouble''''''''''..on that day''''''.at the shoot out'''he only saved me'''.

And on the day'''..in the water'''.he fight with the creature to save me

And yesterday he saved from the poision''''''''..why babaji''''..

Even he behaves with me rudely he doesn't care''''.

But still when ever he scolds'.she felt the care in his eyes''''''.

She remembers'.the incidents'

FB:she is cooking some food''''''''..chopping vegetables..preparing soup for him.as he likes it'''''..

At that time accidently she cut her fingers'''''''

Blood is oozing out from her hand'''.

Then suddenly maan came there'..he took her hand.

How many times I told u to take care of urself'''.what the hell ur doing here'''..

He is yelling

But all this geet feels is the hands touch on her soft hands'''''causing sensations in her viens

He blow the air''''''''..on her hand'''''''..his hot hair'''''''..is ''''''''''.blewing''..

She is completely lost''''''''''''''

She felt the pain for him''''''''

They share a eye-lock session''''''..

Ahmed comes in'..

Both jumps'''''''

And the end of flash back'''''

She looked at the direction'''''''''''''''''

On the other hand'

He knows this is going be the dangerous mission'''''''..

And he need tofight for die'''.

He can see the worry of geet''''''.

When ever geet comes close to him.he feels the danger'''.

The danger of loosing her

He rewinded the scene where he saw the body of geet falling on the floor''''..

His life is endless at that time'.

He became panic'.at the event''''''..

He didn't know '''..how he lift her and admit her to the hospital'''''.

He closed his eyes ,,,,,,,,,,,in pain''''''.

Today'''''.if he turn back.he has no guts to leave her'.again'''''

\

He reminded john'''..his promise to get back''''.

John don't worry'''.im coming'''''''''.

On the other.hadn

John:u don't know him.he will surely come and take me'.but listen rana''''''''.u will sure get '''huge loss afte r that 'and he will make sure'''''''''''..

Did u remember u had kidnapped martin''''''''..and what happened '''''then after''''

U lost ur brothe r''''''.veeru''..don't u'''

He laughed'''''''''.

This time he won't because all my important persons are at safe places''''''''.

And he laughed'''''''''.

Next moment'..

There is a silent'..

Then suddenly all re running around.

Where ahmed and others start attacking'''''''''the people'''''

Shoot out session''.

Then at the blew'''.

Armaan is hiding behind the pillar'

Suddenly he saw a strong'''.muscled person''''''''.

Coming from the fog'he weared a cap.

With two pistols in his hand'''''

And he is firing'..and all his fires at the places'''''..and he is shooting''''''''..at first shot are all down.

With in a fraction of second''''''''..

John felt his strings are loosing '

And he ran to the jeep'''''

And .rana came out''''and aimed at maan''''''''''.

Geet open her eyes'..

Tears ar e welling up.

She is in tears..

Maan smiles.at him'''a winning smiles'''.

As he got to jeep In one second'.

And smiling..he take a turn.

Armaan came out..

And shouted'''''''.

Why u didn't u shoot him''..

Rana:I can't'.

Armaan: why'''''''''

On the others are shocked.why rana'''.didn't shoot''''''''..

And what is the smile in his face..

His hand is hurt'''..

\but still he looked at john'.which is proud about his boss''.he know,,he will save from''''''''''..rana''''

At the middle of the road''''''..the'.jeep stop'''''''.

One of the followers''''''.shocked.

Ahmed reply: boss kidnapped'''''''''.rana's little brother munna''''''''''

Part ends

Edited by srilu_123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part
maan kidnapped.
pls cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update...........maan kidnapped rana's bro nice move...............cant wait for next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
maan kidnapped rano's little bro😳😳
brainy maan know wher to knock
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Geet is waiting for him
her mind is lot of confusion…..

Her eyes are welled up……………….she is……………..confused……………………

She is praying to god………….

Her lips are trembling

She heard a sound…………………..of the jeep.

She start running………..

To wards…..

She look at him………………….

At that time…………she turned back to him……….

And ran back to her room…………..crying………..

Maan looked at her confused…………

But his heart felt happy……on seeing her crying…………..he knows she is caring for him………but he cannot escape…………………

He enter into the room…………

John looked at geet in confusion………..

He has no idea.why geet is running…and crying………………………..

Maan enter into the room………………..

Geet came in……….

She did not want to talk…..

But at the time……………………………………
he remove the shirt…………………………………….

She saw the wound on his shoulder…………..

She start coming towards him……

Yeh babaji mein apne gusse mein yeh kaise bhool gayee……….inko kitne chot aye hay………………………

Aur mein ne………………….yeh mein ne kya kar diya.

She screamed.

And ran to kitchen.

And maan turned to find geet with water.

He made a arrogant anger face……

What is it…………

G:jee apke liye…

M:surprised…………and even..felt happy but felt strange……………..yeh ladki muje pagal karegegi……………….

No thanks mein……………………kudh karunga…………

As hevturned back to find …………….there is standing there

She didn't have moved……….

Instead………….

She caught hold of another hand……..and pushed back………………….

And he backed on the chair…………………..

And she bend forward….

She took a cloth………………..

And wipe with towel…..and started rubbing to his wound.

The pain is little when compared to the close promixity…………………….

Her hair is falling on his shoulder..

Controlling himself……………………………

But as the anti septic…………………touch his skin it burned causing……………him to hold her waist for support………………

It trembled her…………and she whimpered in pain………………………..

He looked at her………….

The lovely eyes……..

Both staring at them……….

She slowly finished……………..bandage……….

And as pretended tobe angry……………

With out seeing to him.she turned and walk away from the room………….

He is also blended with mix of emotions………………………..

He came outside…..

Geet in her room……………

Kya hay……..yeh pehlee batayaa nahii…aur chal pade…………………

And he came into her room

She turned her back towards him……..

His anger fumed out.

With in a second………..

He pinned her against the wall and the door Is closed…………………………

He just looked I nto her eyes…………..

As she is trying hard to escape..by hitting him hard………………………..by making her hand as fist…………but his strength is more…….and wingling hard………………………………….

He bend his head………

And slowly kissed the tears…………………..

She said stop………

He said no……

Leave me…………..

He said no……

Pls what are u doing………………………………………..

No answer…………contd in his kissing………………….

She know no use…………….

She stop protesting………

As he contd…his kissing…………….

Why don't u stop.\

I will stop.ifu…….

What me………………………………..

Stop crying…..i hate tears…………………………….

She suddenly stop crying……………………………..

Looking at him…….

He looked at her………

Some tears escaped her lips…….

He quickly bend to her lips…..

He brushed the lips with him……

A heat transmitted them both sides……………….

He closed the gap………..

Took the soft petal lips with his……………………

She didn't protest……………

As she is too weak………….to protest……………..

He started kissing……………………………..

They both kissed .for long time….

After sometime………..he took her into his hands………..

And placed her at bed……

Covered her with the duvet……….and looked at her lovingly…………

He also slid beside her………….

After some time……………he woke up to find……………………geet in his arms……

He touched the lips..

She smiled in her sleep…..

He too smiled………

Suddenly he feared…………….

He closed his eyes……

If he cannot see john in his………enemies hands…

Wha t happens…………………if anyone………..touches his geet,,,,,,,,,,he need to do something,,,,,,,,,,,,

He cannot see anyone touching geet,,,,,,,,,,,,

She Is too precious for him………………………………………………………….

He feare.d

………and he left the room……..and start practicing his thai chi……………………..

He is making moves….stroking………

Ahmed looked at the watche…………

What is this time sir is doing in his excerise time…………….

He didn't do at this time……….

Some thing is really worryinghim……

But he felt happy…………………..

Bcause….allah had made them……

She is so innocent………her own family is trying to kill her for property….

That is why she is with him…..

Who can fight for her world….

Destiny made a right choice for her is him……………………………………

He is the only one can protect her for …………………from this cruel world….

He smiled………………………..looking a this boss………………

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow kisses awesome update
pls cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
its awesome.......
fantastic.....
love maaneet kiss☺️
cont soon......
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi everyone
i met with accident.......................
so not possible for updates
pray for me............for get well................
i will update once i will get well
thanks

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