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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice update but too short.......
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Geet is shocked……..but maan observed some tension …….

She is nervous…………….

He didn't understand what is going on……………….

He also feel that there is something which is disturbing her………………………inside……

As soon he want to move to her side

He gets the call………………..…

He sees the number it is from anwar………………….

Sir there is something…………………………wrong………

Maan:what anwar……………

Anwar:Sir police informer had informed us………………..

There is a big planning from rana……he had tieing up with some evil forces……….and there are planning for blasts………………………………..

There isa big plan…..we need to do something………………………………

Maan:ok anwar…………collect all the information………………………I will be there in few minutes.

He cut the phone……

He saw geet is fidging with her duppatta……….

She is so cute……………….again his heart is pumping out…and saying to hug her……he smiled…………

But geet is not looking at him.finallyshe lifted her head up……………………………..

To look at him………………..

Maan:turned back and said kuch kehna hay kya……………

Geet:haa……………..

But as soon as he approached to her………….she started steppingback………….

As he is moving forward………………………..

There are moving in motion………..

Suddenly maan came to her and it is like he is going to hug her………………..

But he pick up the shirt on the hanger……and also his pouch from the closet…………

He smiled…….

But geet is confused.

What 's wrong with me..when ever he comes in front of me..why I always numb…………infront of him,,,,,,,,,,,,

Chod do na,,,,,,,,,,

She moves into the room……………………….

She moves into the kitchen………

\she surprised to see everything is placed….

And when she came here…she didn't see ahmed or anwar…………………or chintu……………then who arranged them all……………………

Her closet is remembering wardrobe………………..

All dresses………..

She surprised for his taste…..

All kinds of color of dresses……..

But she always sees him either in white or black,,,,,,

She got the idea……

She slowly moves to his room……………………

The room is very neat………………………

And she open the closet………………………….

She didn't find anything………except a photo…………………..

A photo of a 10 year old child with a two other people

One of features resembles……………….maan…………

And other is a lady………………………..his wife…………………..

Maan is very cute boy…………………….

She felt very happy on seeing this photo…..yeh kaun hay……………..

Mother and father……………………….

Ya….who are they……………..

At that time……………….

She listens to the sound of his jeep.

She comes back to her room..

And runs to her washroom………………….

Maan opens the door…..

He comes back to the room…………….

He checks for geet…………

He sees she is not in kitchen.

Geet:oh no yeh mein ne kya kiya…..mein washroom mein agaya……………

And she accidently putson the tap………

And she is completely drenched ………….

She opens the door………to find out…that no one………………………..

And she comes …………………….

And tries to reach the outlet…….as maan comes without knocking the door…..

He freezes…………….on seeing geet……….again in wet clothing…………..

The dress is reviling her curves………and he is seeing her without a blink…………….

Part ends

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Posted: 14 years ago
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What wrong with him

Every time fate decides him..

He tries his best to avoid the situations…….but everytime it miserably fails…………………………….

She is so pretty..water drop lets on her cute face……….again he is in world…enjoying the sight of the beauty………causing him to loose control……………

On the other hand..geet is shocked…………with his gaze completely on her from top to bottom……………………………

She is shocked………………she is not in this world…………………….

She is completely………………………lost…………

She completely forgot everything………….

The same with him also………………………….

On the other hand………………..

Armaan……….planning to get back geet..

He lost as they got information.and they attacked the cottage……..

But they found empty……as maan sensed the danger…………and he vacated the place…………………….

He shifted geet……….to other place………………..

Safest place…………………………………………

Maan is very clever……….

But armaan aware of the fact that he also got information regarding……….armaan and his plans………now he will sure make ……………that he never reach geet……………………..

Maan about to touch the locks on her face……

He got a call………….

He came back to senses……………answered the phone………………………….

Without even seeing the number…………

It is a call from unknown number……………………………….

Sir……….need to be alert…..there isa danger signal.

He understood the situation………….and feel awkward…….for facing geet…………………….

He closed the eyes ………..

But he didn't miss the confusion in her eyes………………………

He tried his level best to avoid her………….untill she came in front of the door…and showed the photo…………………..of his and grandmother and grand father,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

he looked away from her………..wanted to yell………that make her cry……….and he didn't want tears in his wify…'s eyes…………..

what wify………..what 's wrong with him……………she is his wife……………………………

and typical………….she is behaving like wife also………………………..

she is doing all the typical things.like cooking food for him………and she also..taking cloths for him…………..as before he could ask……….she is avoiding him…………….

He is totally confused……………………………..

He thought she will ask questions……………but instead……..she

G:it is fallen from ur closet…………………………..M:ohh………….

G:it must be you right………………………………….

M:yes……….

G:is thisur mother and father

Msuddenly his eyes turned anger listening to her words…………….he hands are became fists……………………………and he move from there…………………………….

G:got annonyed…………she want to make clear……………………between……………………them.what 's wrong with her……she is just behaving like his wife…………and her husband……………..

Her anger busted out…………she is searching,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,for him………

He is in his gym………………………….trying to forgot………….his bitter past……………….

But his anger is busting……….and he is showing on the boxing………….rind………….

He is sobbing…………………………………

Geet saw.him………..focus……………………donot on his mascular body……………………………….

No way……………………donot look into him………………………………

As she is going back….he heard the noice of the payal…………………………………………….

Within a fraction of the second………………………..he reached her…………………

As she is shocked….and above to fall……………

He caught her……………………………………….by waist………

Tum chalna kab sik paougi geet………………………………..he smirked……………

Geet got dumbstuck..he smirked…………………………………noo………..geet donot loose on his hypnotic dark brown eyes………………………………

He is damm handsome no doubt…………………………

Even hot..no geet ………….ur loosing………………..no ways…………………….

As on the other hand………..maan is also same thing……his anger vanishing after seeing her……………………………

What the hell are u doing here……………………………………

And what the hell ur running away from me…………………

My name is maan singh khurana.and I m not a person who runs………………………and fear……………..

Those are not my types.then why ur eyes are not met………………………….

Means……….i aksed u one question…………….

That is…………

He knows……………….

She will not leave………………………………

As she is so stubborn……………………………………

And donot show ur anger on these poor ………….furnaturee……………………….they can't complain because there ar e dumb………….

For a fraction of second………….ican also make ur numb……………without………………………………..a answer……………………….

He came forward and geet took steps backwards……………..

As she reached the wall………………..she is at corner……………………….

And he make a move and cornered her to the wall…………………………she is struck…………….

She felt his breathing near her neck………………………

He smiled the effect on her………

As she closed her eyes…………………………………….

He is so close………………….

Her heart is beating loud…….unknown tension and fear occupied ………………

As he start kissing her eyes…………she felt something on nerves…………..

She is shivering……………………….

Speak………miss handa……………

She knows she is dumb…………….

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She is completely lost…………………………

And he is kissing her noice

Speak miss handa…………………..

Some how she is not enjoying……….handa anymore………………but she felt tickling at her senses…………but she cannot stop……him….but maan is enjoying…………..

And suddenly sorry….miss handa nahii……mrs maan singh khurana……..remembered we are married……………

As he looked at the lips and…….above to kiss……………………..

Suddenly he come back to senses……………..as geet closed her eyes……………………………..

He left her………..

Geet opened her eyes………

Geet……………………….something is terribly wrong……….why u cannot control your senses when he comes to you…….when he holds u…………..what is going with u…………his scent,his body……his arms……….so protective………………..so much safe….as she feels .without him there is no life…

She close her eyes……………remember all the incidents………………….her first encounter with him……………………………

Everything……………………….she is feeling something different……..she know that her marriage is going to happen with armaan it is decided by her uncle…………her anticipation……….why armaan,,,,,,,,,,,,,is not part of her life………..when ever she close her eyes…………

He slapped her,…………she didn't felt bad…instead she felt good…………for his concern………………………what's wrong with her.what is happening to her………………………….

Maan……..self talk…..

What 's wrong with me……im trying my level best to avoid her.yelling at her…….but her behaviour.is also changing……………………………….why he can't control……………he need to do something……he need too something……….thistim e he managed to control…………next time…………may be he cannot……………

Next day morning…………………..

Geet wokes up In the morning……..

She didn't find maan……….

She prepare lunch……………but he refused to eat……………

This is happening……………………….two days…even she is not willing to eat…………………………

There is a bell rang…she didn't know her happy had no boundaries…..she run and open the door………to find ahmed and chintu at the door…….with a girl…………………………..look like a maid……….but she is silent…………………………

Geet:are aap log yeha…………..she is still looking for maan……………………..it is jeep sound..but only…………ahmed and chintu.came……..they………came…………….and they at the dinning table………………

Geet:are maan kaha hay…

Chintu choked the food.where ahmed ,,,,,,,,,,,looked at her disbelief……………….

Geet:I mean ur boss………………

Chintu:are kabhi sher,,,kabhi……kadoos,kabhi akodoo.bolne wali ladki……….maan……………………………….yeh kya ho raha.yesa kya kiya boss in dinoo mein…kee ladki kitne badal gayee……………..

Geet is worried.she is fidging her duppatta…..as she is dying to see him……………

But ahmed looked at her………he is out of town for some work……he know it is lie………………..bcause..there is something wrong with his boss few days…………his face is dull…..lost in his thoughts..he never seen him……he always a lion ……………………………..strong person..which can fight with the whole world….never lost any battle……………………..seeming lost his life himself……………………………..he knows that his boss feels something for this girl…but why he is avoiding her……………

Even on seeing geet's eyees………are also different……………………….she is also acting………………..first she is a chatter box….used to bore ahmed and all his members……..with her non-stop blabbering…………………………..she will always keep quit…..when his boss around there………but now she is in her thoughts…………….

Ahmed:geet…this is nalini………she is going to be with u 24 hours…………..and she will do all the work………………………….never less things………….so don't bother………………………………….

And they left her with nalini……………………………………….

Nalini is completely opposite……….to…………………………geet….

She is less talkative…………………………….if she is before geet.then she can speak…………………………………..but now…………………she is at her room…………….

She hardly speaks……………………..

She is looking at the window waiting for him……..

It is upto 2 days…..she is feeling like……………………………….she is away from him……..tears……..coming away from…….

Does he feel nothing for me……………………why….she is looking at the moon………………..

On the other hand…….maan open the eyes…………………………….

How can he forget her…………………..

The time he tries to forget………..he can't ……

Because she is his life……………………………………..

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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
this part is amazing dont wait for next.....
plz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
nice update...................nicely portrayed their restlessness................
hopefully they will realize their love and confess
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Posted: 14 years ago
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this part is amazing dont wait for next.....
plz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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pls update an other part can;t wait
plsssssssss dear
superbbbbbbb update....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Geet is in her thoughts

Nalini used to prepare her break fast and lunch''..but she is not intend to take''

She brought water''''''

But geet is still in anger''''

On the other side maan is restless''

Ahmed got back'''''''''''

He is explaining everything .he told he arranged maid to geet''''''.all'''''''''.

But he is immensed in thoughts

Atleast geet would not feet alone.

With this.he closed his eyes''but inside he felt danger''.as he trust ahmed completely.but still '''''''''''''''.

On the other side'''geet''''is feeling something weird''.just like something weird'''''''''''as'''''she feel like maan is calling her''''''''''

She want maan''''''.to be her side''.

She turn back and find two hands on her waist'''''

Missing me..she smiled and turn back.maan is not there'''''''''''..

It was a dream'''''''.

Even maan was feeling the same''''''''

As he turns towards..she is missing''''''''''''.

On the other hand.he felt something is going to be bad''''''..he close his eyes'as geet is screaming for help''''.and'''''.there is darkness..he open his eyes.why I feel geet is in danger'''''''.

On the other hand'..a lady over the phone'''''''''

Why it is late.im expecting your call''..why is the work over'..

Almost.sir.but part from 2 days she is not eating anything'''''''''''..

Do something.other''''before anyone finds out''''''''''''..other wise ur killed''..donot forget that'''''''''.im 10 yrs in this field'''and donot forget im a nurse too''so it is bitter easier for me'''''''''''''

And she cuts the phone'''''''

On the other hand'''maan receives the phone'''''''..he picks up on listening to this''''''''..

He runs a sif his life is in danger'.ahmed.stops'.sir'''''''

Ahmed''''geet is in danger'''..words coming out of his mouth''.he started his jeep'and drive..he is not seeing the road''''.he is driving like mad'''''''''

But ahmed and others following him,''''''''''..

He knows he is very much aggressive''..but today he is nervous'.as if someone is after him'''''''''his life is oozling out''''''''.

Next thing''''..

The lady enter into geet room''..

Geet looked at her'''.

A juice in her hand''''''''''''''''''''''

Geet looked at that '''''.as she move towards'''..the lady stops and says'that ''''''''show her the juice'''''.but geet thinks why''..im avoiding her''''''..she is doing her job as given to her''''..she knows about maan''''''''''.why she is behaving so stupid.

And without hestitate.she tooks the juice and sips''''''''''..with in few sips''''.geet fell on ground''''''''.and she runs..from there''''''''''''''''

Her head is spinning''''''.her body is becoming cold''''''.her legs,and hands''''''''aching in stomach'.she hold her stomach and fell on ground'''''''''blood is coming from her mouth'''''''''''''..

She wanted to see maan''''''''''''.

She saw a flage image of maan''..aheading towards'her in ''''''''''.hurry'''.

She knew that she is lifted by the arms''she looked at maan with faint smile and fellinto his hands''

He cried geet''''''''

He drove her to the hospital''.

Geet open ur eyes'''''pls'''''''.

Geet''''donot loose'''''''noo.talk to me'''''''geet'''.talk to me'.open ur eyes'''''''''''.

In between'''''.

Ahmed.and other s shocked'''..

They saw.is maan droving her to the hospital''''.

Maan carried to the corridor'.he is not listening to anyone.doctor saw her body,,,,,,,,,,,checked her pulse''''.

He immediately took her to icu''''''''''''''''.

He instructed..

Maan closed his eyes'he is not ready to leave the hand'

He remembered the woth'''.he taken at the time of pheres'''''.that he will take care of geet until death'''''''''he is so careless'''..why he left geet'alone'''it was'..god grace that the person called him to inform that the lady he want to send as a maid was ill.so he is sending the lady''''''''''today'that means .the lady which enter as geet maid..is a duplicate.she is sent by someone..to ''''''''.kill geet'''''.

His trains of thoughts was stopped when doctor open the door''''.

Maan ran towards him and asked for the postion.

Mr khurana''''she is in danger.

The drug edicted into her''''''is dangerous slow poison'''''''''.im afraid'''she need to come to senses before tonight'''''''.untill then she is under complete''''observation'''''''''''''''''''''.

Have patience'''..we can hope for the best''''''''''

Maan looked at her'.

She is in bed'.

she is notgood like that.he liked her playing like a child'''''.

He closed his eyes'''''''''..

He felt like somebody had stabbed him '''.inside.his heart is arched''''''''''''''''.

He is in intense pain''''''.

Ahmed looked his boss at shock..

It is like pain is with him not her''''.

Edited by srilu_123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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supreb.
i hope geer recover soon.

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