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Posted: 14 years ago
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He closed his eyes in frustutation

His life

He is the elder son of a business man………………..

But he loves his grand father

Who is retired major………………

He exactly wanted to be like him…………………..

His pride and honour……………

But his father wanted him to be business man………………….

His mother left him when he was young………….

Make him to hurt more

His father …remarried……………

He has two siblings……………

Dev and his merciless………wife naintara……….which is after his money.

And another brother Vicky…………who always with his friends.

The only person……………..

Which he listens is his dadimaa………………

No women around him………..

He didn't hate them………..but he is not used of them………..

His biggest dream…………to become a army officer………………………is shattered…

As being a angry person……….chance of mis –conception…………….

And the other person………………….

Spoiled the dream…………………

He is frustuated……………

He is alone in pain….

He is disturbed……….

So decided to stay alone…………..

Then a person…….came to light……….giving him

And his direction has been changed……

But one incident…………………….had changed his life……………….

He is feeling something for geet….

She changed his life

His emotions a re coming back…….

He came back to the room……………………

His eyes are red………………..

He looked for geet………

He need to do this thing for geet.

Ahmed came to the room….

Sir…every thing is ready……………………………………….

Ok…………..

Get the lugguage………………..

All are looking them selves

And you…………..

I will bring her……

He knows that geet is asleep…………….

He came to the room………..

To find…………………….geet in deep sleep……

She didn't have her food…even though she is cooked………..

Even he is also not eaten anything…….he is madly missing the smile and naughtiness of geet……which gives him instant strength………unknowingly……………….

He goes to the bed……………

He once again lost in her face………..

He picks her up…….and he watched she is holding something…….

Opens he find………………….locket…………………..

The beets………..

He smiled…………..

And he took her to the jeep………….

They reach the individual house…………

Which is far aways……………………

It is a new place………..

He enter into the house……….

Geet is his hands……………

It is like gruha pravesh rasam…………….

He smiled………………………..unknowingly…………………

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Posted: 14 years ago
#72
wow that was really nice update can u plz add me in pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
trishap]nice loved it add me to pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
hi iloved the ff..............loved the dialogue when geet says to the rabbit abt maan being the sher..........it was hilarious....................

can u pl add me to ur pm list and pm me when u update......

thnks
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
awsome story................beautifully narrated.....................plz add me in pm list..........................nd cont. soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
so nice.. dear.. add me ur pm list...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awsome story................beautifully narrated.....................plz add me in pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78

Geet wake up in the morning

And she find herself in a bed room

She again…………..

Rub her eyes

The room is just like a bedroom…………..

It is not wood house ……………

She used to stay with them……………

She looked around

And she came out…

It is a individual house

Which is sourrounded by garden………….with flowers she loved the scene

Where im i……is it a dream

No it can'tbe

Where is kadoos……………………..oh no……………………..is he taking the marriage serious………………….what 's wrong with her…………..

She turned round……and start running for escape…….

And she didn't find……………………………………….

Anyone…………no ahmed, chintu………….oh no…………………..

Geet there is something wrong…..

Without seeing she bumped with Maan………with a jerk…………..the tray he is carrying………….fell on ground………………

Geet looked at him….

Where rr u running……………………..he yelled at her…………

She saw the tray……

It is breakfast………………………………..

She…………………..

Maan looked at her confused………………………………

As she is in horror……………………………………….

I was…………………………

At that time………………

She runs into the room……

No geet don't get panic…………….

You think………………………..twice..be careful.

And maan observes geet behaviour…………………..sweird………..

She tries her trails to avoid him………………….

He goes out…..

He comes out and go to the wash room……

As geet aware of the fact…..

They came opposite sides….

And bumps……….

And geet is above to fall………….

He catches her……

Eye lock session……………

She looks at the tall handsome person…………….

He is like greek god..

He only in jeans…………………….

And towel on shoulders………………………….

And he came from a shower……so droplets on his face falling ……………….

Now on her face…………………………………………………………………….

His curved arms……………………………..his six packs………………

He is looking at her..lost……………

Her hair is loose……………..

A different view………………………………….

His arms around her waist……………………………………………………

He is so handsome………………………………………..

She came to senses………..

She came to the room…………………………

she is thinking………………..

how can he is so handsome……………………..

she close her eyes…………………………………………

he is handsome……………his arms………his toned body…………….

So……………………..

Yeh geet…what the hell im thinking………………………

Is really…………ur taking serious………………………………………..

And she looks around

Tofind………..maan is looking at her…………………..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb yaar but soooooooooooooooo short plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice update...................just a req can u write the page no on the topic when u update so that its easy for us thank u

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