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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
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awesome yaar as usual.....
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Sorry for typoo

All kids are watching them……..with their eyes……….

As geet is looking at him in awe…………..she is completely lost………………..

Maan also lost……in her eyes……..

He carried her in his arms..

he ……….mummur…..yeh ladki.nahii musibat.abhi abhi mautke moo mein bahar aye hay.aur ab.yeh.uchal khud rahii hay.hamesha koi na koi chaheyee…..isee samal n eke liye..

eng translation : wishpers………..yeh man this girl is nothing but trouble n ow itself she escaped from the death…………….and now she is jumping and playing around………………….always there must be one to handle her…………………..

His heart said tu hay n na………….(u are there na)

He answered shut up……………………………….

His heart:are wah…………….tere haat…usko choo ne ke liye bekarar rehte hay……………tere eyes…………………………….ussee dekikar…………………uchal khud tha hya…………………………..

Tere har nerves………………………..entertain hota hay…aurtoo..muje shut up bhol raha hay…………yeh mere tera dil hoo.aur usmein tu ne issi ladk I koo.beitakar rakha hay…………………….tere soch……tere dhadkhan……………………….iss ladki ke liye hay.aur toh muje tere mann ko………….chup rehne ke liye keh tee hoo………………..

Himself:chup kar.dil se nahii dimak se soch tha hoo mein…………………..

(Yeh..ur the one who get entertains when she is in your hands………….u feel happy if u touches her………………..ur nerves ,eyes are feast for u………….and ur the one who bought the girl into heart….and thinking about u.now ur saying me to shut up……..

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He is still in confusion between………………

On the other hand……geet also the same……………

Her heart:dekha…………gussa nakh pe.chehra yesa bana huwa hay…jaise abhi………..volcano pategaa………………..lekin.iska gussa bhi kitna pyarra hay………..zindagi bar isse bahoo mein rehna hay……………………..iska chillana…………kitna adadat hogayaa hay.ki jab tak iskaa…chillana………………………….shuru nahii hota…khana hasab nahii hota…………pls babaji.mere dust danav ko mere pass rehne dena please……

Both are in the land.

Kids felt borring….

Oyee hero…yeh kya kar rahee hoo.didi ko chod do……………..aur ghorr kyon reha hoo mere didi……………..ko.haa………..pulled his………….hand…………………………..

Theey felt some danger…..to his sister……who is playing with them in this boring hospital……………………

Theyffelt he came to steal their happiness..

Maan turned back to the little 10 yrs old boy.tryin g to stop the strom………which will blow the entire hospital…………………………….

He is so timid infront of his mascular …..structure………………………………………..

He looked at him………………….

But he remain still

Where geet got the point.

She told him.pls put me down..

First time he was shocked.what she said………………………….please………………oh my god.what 's wrong with here……………….pls why she is creating more difficult for me……………..my heart is not listening to me.and now if she starts melting..then my god…………

He want to cover.her.

And again became the angry young man…

Chup bilkul chup…yeh hospital….hay…………tere dadaji ke jagidhar nahii…………tum uchal khud rahii hoo…har waqt khel ne alawa kuch aur atta hay kya tu m ko.tumari wajah se mere kaam ruche padi.hay aur tume…..khel ne ke padi hay……………………

And he continues and put her down………………………

She turned her back towards him.and said kids bye..and moved from there……..

He turned back.he know he hurte dher…………………………………..

Again he stroke his head.

His heart…tere kuch nahii ho saktha…………………….

And he run behind her……………….

By that time he got a call…

Sir………emergency………one of our person caught hold by rana………………………………

Who………………….jonny………………………….

No………………it can't be………jonny on leave.as his mother is ill in hospital…

Yes sir…………….he is kidnapped from the hospital……………………..

He got angry……………….his hand turned to fist………………………….

And he forgot about geet.and told ahmed………instructions……

Later on .geet is discharged from the hospital………………………..

She felt bad……manta hook e gussa hoo………..lekin.kam se kam .bata toh saktha hay.na……………………………………why he behaving like this……………………for one time.when I was hurt he will be side of me….helping me……on the other hand…..he behaves rudely…………….why ………………….

She is sad……………

But she is shocked after listening to the conversation……………….

As he is headed for his dangerous mission.to save one person from his………………………

More interesting concepts coming………………………………..

So get ready

Part ends………….

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Posted: 14 years ago
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nyc update. . . .add me ur pm plz... 😊
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