'Intikhaab' A MaYur FF -Completed (Epilogue pg103) - Page 39

Originally posted by: princez_94

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Kuch updates aise hote jho parh kar baad main munh say alfaz nahi nikalte. Shayad yeh waisa he update hai..

Do dilon ka milan, aisa lag raha tha ke ek mulaqat main woh 10 saal ki dooriyan mith gaiy. Shayad jab dil jhurte hai toh aisa he lagta hai.

Mujhe Mayank ki proposal bilkul bhi shocking nahi lagi, jaise woh khaton main apna pyaar ka izhaar kar raha tha wahan say he pata lag gaya tha ke kuch aisa he hoga. Waise kitne khush kismat hai na yeh dono jisse pyaar karte hai usse shaadi ho rahi hai. Jitna bhi yeh sab ajeeb lag raha hai na lagta nahi hai ke kuch hoga in ke ehsass toh bare khalis lagte hain, saaf dil say baat kar raha tha Mayank toh phir itni jald bazi kyun? Yeh ek baat humein samjh main nahi aiy. Aur filhaal samjhna bhi nahi chahte, waqt ke saath aap bata he dayn ghi...

Waise aap ne bohat achcha likha, hamesha aise he likha kijiye... Bilkul aisa nahi laga ke in dus saalon mai pehli baar directly baat kar rahe hain.. Jis naye bhi aap ki madat ki iss update ko likhne main unke shukr guzar hai, aise updates bohat kam milte hai. Ab yeh mat poochiye gha ke kaise updates. Lekin parh kar bohat khushi milti hai...

-Laiba

Shukriya...wajah na poochiye ab isska. itne khubsoorat lafzon ko hum ab aur kaise saraahay? 😊 humain lagta hai aap ne baaki saare readers k comment parhne k baad apna comment likkha hai...ek sirhe se accha hi kiya. aap shayed woh pehli shaks ho jissko Mayank ki iss harqat se hairatgi nahi hui aur hum khush iss liye hai kyunki hum aapko ab Nupur ki jagah dekh paarahe hai. iss kahani ko sahi anjaam dene k liye yeh bohat zaroori tha aur humain ab tak nahi pata k kitne readers khudko usski jagah rakkhe soch paate hai. waqt aane per agar woh Nupur ko na samajh paaye to hamare kahani ko shayed usska sahi anjaam na naseeb ho *sigh* per itna yaqeen to hai k aap ka faisla kam se kam muqammal taur se hi hoga kyunki ab tak aap se behter Nupur ko koi samajh nahi paaraha.

Laiba...bas ek aur baat kehni thee...humain maaf kar dijiyega.

-Neela

Originally posted by: DhanakZ

I am so happy Finally they will gonna marry

Thanks for this lovely update

cont soon

Thank you Gul. I hope you stay with me throughout the story as it hits it peak now...

-Neela

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur

awww neela its awsom...

mayur is so cute...

juust want a happily ever after scene...

by d way tanmay er ki holo? m realy confused about him!!!!!! o to ei ff e obossoi ekta boro role hobbe.
etodin moione hossilo tonmoy n mayank ek-e person but last update theke to onnorokom lagse...

bon .jai koro.mayur jeno sesh-mesh ek hoie sukhe santite ghor kore. :)


thx for remembering me in ur thnk u note :)

Thank you Kheya. Glad you liked it. Tomar comment pore mone hocche golpo shesh...tumi mone hoy nije thekei kahini te 'The End' er board lagiye dile 😆 😆 ektu opekkha koro..tobe tumi amar warning list e acho. agami update gulo..errmm icche hole pora baad dite paro. mone hocchena tomar bhalo lagbe. tobe hain..tomar shob prosner uttor tumi porer part gulotei peye jabe. Up to you...either way I wouldn't mind.

Take care
-Neela

Originally posted by: SamiraARTiMAYUR

Salam Neela

Remember it's me (Samiralovemayur) i've changed my name😉

But i'm so sorry Neela i didn't comment since the 2nd update

really sorry dil se

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mostly i was busy there was time i could've have time to read but always got something alse which made me busy

u know everything is written so i thing now my time was 2night although i'm so tired but still i promised my self lastnight i'll have read today

n atlast i did readed in one go. believe me i did 😉 n enjoyed hated it finished but somehow was happy coz i can do comment now

so i feel releaved. No i readed all the parts it was realy such sweeet n very beautiful story

each update has unique way which touches u

i loved their childhood

and now their friendship n become lovers tht was superb

their latters email no words to descripe ur work hun

coz i don't want to do injustice in ur work

n last update 15 was mind-blowing their comfortable n how they understand their hidden words it's amazing i think Tamney is our Mayu 😉 loved it hun to 🤗core

n i always love ur work although is emotional n touching stories but every1 can't have fairytale right? but true hurts

i know it's imaginery Story but u know women 😆 we always love fairy tale's

i realy enjoyed reading dil se so after this chapter i'll be regular reader n will be commentg as well insha-Allah till then update soon next part

Samira...of course I remember you sweety! I think I will never forget my first batch of readers back in KAJ..simply because of you guys I am here today..writing away. So no matter if you disappear for years and whether you come back or not, no one can replace you as my special readers who encouraged me back in those days. About the sorry note...LOL yaar ab aap 10kb k wazan ki sorry mujh ghareeb per phaink maarogi to aur kya raasta bachega hamare liye 😆 😆 seriously..that was not needed at all. But I am really glad that you are back and that too just in time 😊

Keep reading and you have lots to catch up on yet..so best of luck 😉

-Neela

Originally posted by: Nirvrithi

Neela, you really wrote this!!! Mayur finally confessed? woh bhi itni jaldi? Khush tho mein bahut hoon , lekin darr bhi abhi shuru hua hain.. u know tumhare andar jo writer haina , woh tho kuch bhi kar sakti hain 😆 ab tak tho paani saaf hain, patha nahi aisa kya daalnewaali ho ki final decision humein lena padega.. Par jab hoga, tab dekhenge.. FIlaal ,iss moment ko enjoy karte hain.. it was so wonderful confession.. especially in your words..

haila Nivi..😲 😲 now I know I must have written a 'dhaasu' chapter that made Nivi forget everything she is going thru and had to reply 😆 😆 yaar tum baaz nahi aaogi na! mauka mila nahi aagaye Neela ko sunaane. yeh logic lagane ki beemari kuch mahino k liye multawi nahi hosakti...humain bhi kuch dino k liye sukoon mil jaata 😃 jokes apart..you can't imagine how happy I am to see you here commenting. You are my sixth sense and I miss you a lot (sacchi..cross my heart) but I can't demand you to come and read and comment.In fact main to soch rahi thee Nivi ki bacchi ki lautne se pehle hi main Intikhaab khatam kar doon taaki saare taanay eksaath mil jaaye 😆 concept ki bahar jaane ka sochti hoon to tumhari yaad aajati hai...beech me kahani bhool gayi thee, so Noor ne kaha change kar lo kisiko pata nahi chalega and the first name that came into my mind is YOU 🤣

Anyways...dehaan se suno ab.. bohat parh liya...enjoy this moment and hold onto it. isske baad se parhne ki zaroorat nahi. You are in my ban list as well 😔 Sorry..per majboor hain hum..

-Neela

Originally posted by: achoose

mindblowing update dear...loved it sooo much...

the convo btw mayur was very sweet...

so they have decided to marry...

hope there will be no obsctacles in mayur life...

but my doubts are revolving around tanmay and mayank...

hmm...lets wait and watch...

wonderful update dear...

@bold Aswathy...itna bharosa hai kya hum per? 😉 Follow your gut instincts...you know my style na! but after a long time I see a relatively longer comment from you..so thanks for that. Hope you don't run short of words moving forward as well.

Keep reading...you need to clear your doubts on Tanmay and Mayank. The answers are there...😊

-Neela

First of all….I am so sorry that I missed to comment on the last three parts….well I am reading them now only…

I was away….so I just couldn't get my hands on them.

Well, now that I am back, I can read them and enjoy them as much as I like.

Missed my comments?? Cause I definitely missed reading this one.

Toofan se aane waali khamoshi? God! Now I am scared *laughs*

Hey, and I read the entire concept again. And some questions arose in my heart.

Would Nupur hate Mayank so much that she would forget about her love for him? And Why? And Nupur would be so blind in her hate that she would even neglect the love thrown at her by Tanmay?? Why?

You have got to answer me some questions soon.

Okay, I think now I can start reading the parts. So that you can get my first thoughts like always.

Hmm…..so Mayank wrote a mail for her.

True yaar, whenever we are angry or upset with someone or ignore that person because we think that we have hurt that person, we never think about that person's thinking. Maybe the other person is thinking the same way too!

She is sooo happy! Its great to see her like that.

She imagines so much! Kids? God!

Apni Nupur se kahiye ki thoda intezaar kare. Itni jaldi sapne mat dekhe cause jab sapne toote hain, tab bahut dard hota hai.

Lol….whenever I have to do something, which is a little different and personal, even I feel that everyone is not doing their own work and are plotting to know my secret. It's really funny!

Aha…so she finally wrote her reply! Great!

WOW! The last four poetic lines were sooo touching. Teach me how to write them too. You are just beyond awesome at them.

Hmm, so now I proceed on to the next part of the story.

In love, people do not change….it's you that change….everything seems so happy. Or so, I have read.

She is something! She hugs her friend just like that? And I thought that she was a little mature!

And it's great that Tanmay won the match.

I hate lofers. Trust me, when a boy gets into my way and tries to flirt, I feel like trashing his face. But I am extremely a follower of non-violence, so I ignore them.

Lol. I loved this scene. Exactly what I would have done. And exactly what my friend would have said! Because they know ki jab tak main chup hoon, tab tak theek hai…jab gussa aaya, they are so gone!

This Tanmay, makes me laugh. His talks are so amazing.

So, finally Tanmay knows ki Nupur loves Mayank.

Were they really about to kiss? *extremely shocked*

Nupur bahut badi idiot hai. And umm….I can't comment on that scene.

I mean, I already knew ki Tanmay would fall for Nupur…but umm...I didn't wanted his heart to be broken.

Amazing six lines.

Nupur jab bhi Tanmay ke saath hoti hai, she forgets the fact that Mayank even exists!

Isn't this love? Not the love she has for Mayank …but what she feels for Tanmay.

I mean, kisi ke paas khud ko safe mehsoos karna…and khud ko bhool jaana?

Anyways, this is what I feel, is love.

I am sad right now, but I am proceeding on to the next part.

Wow….I mean start se hi MN?

And I so loved their talks.

I just couldn't stop myself before reading them all.

And Mayank is such a romantic guy.

His description of Nupur was more than amazing.

Online proposal!

Pata nahi kyun…par online proposal itna shocking nahi laga….jaise hum usi ko expect kar rahe the…

Wow! It was so heart-touching!

WoW! I am so in love with this update. I have read it more than 10 times already.

I don't know how long I would keep reading it.

But I guess, before reading it 11^th time, I need to give you this as a comment.

You deserve a round of applause after this update.

This was the most beautiful update of this FF.

This time, the update was so beautiful that it could match upto the beauty of the last four poetic lines.

Itni achi lines aap likhti kaise hain?

Amazing! I loved the update. I am in love with it completely.

Now I know, the troubles are going to start.

Anyways, nothing can spoil my mood right now.

Thanks for such an amazing update.

Do continue soon. Kaafi intezaar hai.

Love,

Mahak