'Intikhaab' A MaYur FF -Completed (Epilogue pg103)

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bhargavi

@gopi06

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Posted: 14 years ago

#361

lovely updt dear
loved mayur cute talks
waiting for mayur wedding...cont soon
thanks for the pm

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Nirvrithi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#362

Neela, you really wrote this!!! Mayur finally confessed? woh bhi itni jaldi? Khush tho mein bahut hoon , lekin darr bhi abhi shuru hua hain.. u know tumhare andar jo writer haina , woh tho kuch bhi kar sakti hain 😆 ab tak tho paani saaf hain, patha nahi aisa kya daalnewaali ho ki final decision humein lena padega.. Par jab hoga, tab dekhenge.. FIlaal ,iss moment ko enjoy karte hain.. it was so wonderful confession.. especially in your words..

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aswathy

@sreevijayan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#363

mindblowing update dear...loved it sooo much...

the convo btw mayur was very sweet...

so they have decided to marry...

hope there will be no obsctacles in mayur life...

but my doubts are revolving around tanmay and mayank...

hmm...lets wait and watch...

wonderful update dear...

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shaheen_memon

@shaheen_memon

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Posted: 14 years ago

#364

lovely update dear...

dnt knw y m having a feeling is Tanmay n mayank same...😉

thanks for the pm...do continue soon

waiting very eagerly 😊

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maria

@Maria.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#365

@Neela

Sorry for not commenting on previouas parts...i was lil busy...

Beautiful update as usual...i loved Mayur conversation...full of innocence...their love is sweet,innocent...

do continue soon...:)

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ginny munjal

@ginny09

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Posted: 14 years ago

#366

awww omg i am so happy :)

yes dear meri tanmay tension khatam :)

ab toh bas jaldi se mayur meet ka hai intezaar :D

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Wings-of-Fire

@Wings-of-Fire

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Posted: 14 years ago

#367

ok reading it. just came upto tanmay. i dont know whats happened later but i definitely dont want nupur-tanmay to be together. sunney me hi kitni ajeeb lagta hain!

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Wings-of-Fire

@Wings-of-Fire

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Posted: 14 years ago

#368

nupur yeh tanmay se hi kyun takrati hain? aur kisise kyun nehi? i've this terrible fear that you're gonna end her choosing tanmay because it'll give her the chance of living in her town and as she's spending all her times with him, eventually she might think that its all she ever wanted. i fear that she'll not give her love the chance it needed.

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Wings-of-Fire

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Posted: 14 years ago

#369

yar is this a mayur ff or just nupur-tanmay katha? mayank ka toh nam nishan nehi hain. i'm waiting to meet him. and i dont agree with tanmay. theres no guarantee that people who know you the best will always understand every action of yours. even sometimes we dont have explanations for our actions.and its always worth justifying yourself.

now i'm very sure about where its going.log aksar adat ko, dosti ko, care ko pyar samajhe ke bhul karte hain.love is a very special feeling and i've seen nupur feeling that for mayank. i've seen her being restless for him. and i dont want her philosophy to come between the way of her love.
ayse bahaut sare log hain jo apni humsafar main ek acche dost ko pate bhi hqain aur ek khushal jindegi bhi jeete hain. par woh pyar ka disha kabhi nehi pate aur unhe pata bhi nehi chalta ke pyar nehi that.i dont want this to happen to nupur.

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

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Posted: 14 years ago

#370

shoking...

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Kitni khubsoorat hoti hain na yeah kahniya…jasy chay likh do…jasy chay rang bhar do….aj lag raha tha jasay ek shayir ny apn pora dil nikal ker rekh diya ho….ek ajeeb sa ehassa tha aj ap ki tahreer mein ….

Dekhny mein ap kasi hain……yeah jawab jo Myank ny diya ..woh itna hasseen tha…hum bulkul kho gay…aur ek muskrahat agai humary chehray per….

N thn….jab woh apna guzara hoa kal yaad ker rahy thy….aur woh ABHI…wali baat…kitni massom se jazabat thy aur hain…..lol im still laughing on tht ….

Aur phir itna baar surprise….hum ny soch abhi nhi tha k yeah sawal itni jaldi ajay ga…..hum hairaan hai….aur thoray pareshan bhi….Mayank ny kiya soch ker yeah fasal liya…hum abhi bhi nhi jantay…per Nupur ny tu bs apny dil k suni….magir is waqt ..hum sach mein is paal ko mehsoos kerna chatty hain…ek mukamaal ehass tha is mein….aur un ke khamoshi un k elfaz….evrything …just perfect …love it

Dua tu yeahi hai k kismet k nazar na lagay….per pata nhi kyun yun mayank k achanak ..is traha se….humain daar lag raha hai…kuch hai…jo andekha hai…

Ek aur khubsoorat aur khamosh ehassa se bahr por tahreer…

PS…Khudaya asa zulm mat kerain…woh 4 lines tu hum update se bhi pehly pahrtay hain…humary bewaquf se dil mein uthy bethy jazabat ke saza unhy na dain pls…..bs us din apki baat ny humain kuch yaad dila diya tha bs….aur hum ny bilwajahy ap ko pershan kerdiya…..mazraat chatty hain…..

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