'Intikhaab' A MaYur FF -Completed (Epilogue pg103) - Page 40

Originally posted by: roshneerakhali

ok reading it. just came upto tanmay. i dont know whats happened later but i definitely dont want nupur-tanmay to be together. sunney me hi kitni ajeeb lagta hain!

LOL...so another hard core MaYur fan. Welcome on board dear.

Originally posted by: roshneerakhali

nupur yeh tanmay se hi kyun takrati hain? aur kisise kyun nehi? i've this terrible fear that you're gonna end her choosing tanmay because it'll give her the chance of living in her town and as she's spending all her times with him, eventually she might think that its all she ever wanted. i fear that she'll not give her love the chance it needed.

aha..thinking logically! What do you think? Nupur is so practical about her life? Do you think she will be able to make the biggest decision of her life based on some conveniences like ease of living near home etc? I must say then you have not related to her at all. She is a kind of person who would cross thousands of miles to be with that one person she loves.

Originally posted by: roshneerakhali

yar is this a mayur ff or just nupur-tanmay katha? mayank ka toh nam nishan nehi hain. i'm waiting to meet him. and i dont agree with tanmay. theres no guarantee that people who know you the best will always understand every action of yours. even sometimes we dont have explanations for our actions.and its always worth justifying yourself.

now i'm very sure about where its going.log aksar adat ko, dosti ko, care ko pyar samajhe ke bhul karte hain.love is a very special feeling and i've seen nupur feeling that for mayank. i've seen her being restless for him. and i dont want her philosophy to come between the way of her love.
ayse bahaut sare log hain jo apni humsafar main ek acche dost ko pate bhi hqain aur ek khushal jindegi bhi jeete hain. par woh pyar ka disha kabhi nehi pate aur unhe pata bhi nehi chalta ke pyar nehi that.i dont want this to happen to nupur.

Tanmay-Nupur katha?? 😆 good one! No dear..I was just trying to create a balance here. Mayank was already ruling Nupur's heart for all her life of 19 years. Tanmay needed to have some time with her so that the story balances out. And I don't agree with bold personally. Its true that sometimes we don't even have explanations for our own actions but thats all the more reason for someone who knows you so well would not expect an explanation from u coz they'd realise that u dont have an answer and hence would not demand that either.

I hope you know by now that you couldn't have been wrong for your 2nd paragraph above. I think you are constantly getting Nupur wrong. She is loyal to her heart and will always follow what her heart says. Tanmay ki taraf usska dehaan nahi jaa raha which is quite worrying. ek chalta phirta shaks aap k itna kareeb hai...aap ki itna khayal rakhta hai..hamesha aap ka saath de raha hai per woh aapko nazar nahi aaraha kyunki aap ko ek yaad se ishq hogayi hai aur woh yaad ab aapki aadat bann chuki hai. So you are thinking completely opposite...Hope its clearer now that you have progressed further in the storyline

Originally posted by: roshneerakhali

part 15:
this is love for sure. both of them are in love.pls dont separate them.and pls dont drag tanmay in between. he's a nice boy. i dont want him getting hurt.

So now you're happy 😊 Coz its MaYur plot and you got what you wanted. They came to this stage despite of the distance and Tanmay's physical presence. He heart won over all the obstacles and now they have decided to be together forever.

Hope you continue to enjoy the next updates as well

-Neela

Originally posted by: jiya_angel

i loved their conversation... it was truly beautiful... now for the time i have no apprehensions about their marriage... but i still hope that things go as smoothly as it is now...

thnx for the pm Neela

~jiya~

Thank you Jiya. I was a bit anxious that as it was written in a fly I thought I missed a few technicalities. But it was written with full heart..By God 😊 and seems like many liked it. I wish I could agree to your point hoping that things go smoothly from this point but then again where is the story then?

Look forward to your comments in the coming parts

-Neela

Originally posted by: princez_94

Comment for part 14...

Rythm of Rain...😳

Such a nice title, I miss the rain now. Yahan toh baraf parhti ha yah phir bas sardi hoti hai, kabhi baarish itni zidada nahi hui... sadly

Uff the feeling of love... 😳 Thats what happens when you're in love everything around you seems so happy and "In love". Aww it feels so great to see her so happy, and smiling.. Mayank ke khawbon main itna dhoob gaiy hai ke bechara Tanmay bhi nahi yaad raha...

Aur ab Tanmay ki bhaari hai apna hunhar dikhane ka...Waise I liked the scene, he won and she came and hugged him as a friend. But its nice to see her supporting him..

Nupur-Abhi..😆 lekin Tanmay kyun aya... Mujhe Jhansi ki Rani dekhni thi..

Aur phir rain scene... I liked how you described that particular scene, the way Tanmay was protecting her from the rain as protecting her from the world... It was a sweet one and when inched closer and there...As happy as I was Nupur confessed, but It was a bit heart breaking... He looked at her so lovingly, she was so close water droplets sliding down her face and she looked gorgeous.. And as he came forward she confessed that she loved someone else... That scene looked so perfect until Mayank came in...bechara...

Neeela... what have you done to me?? Mujhe toh Mehak bhi nahi pasand thi... 😲

One thing Nupur-Tanmay darakht ke neeeche khare thy jab bijli chamak rahi thi... ? Maine suna hai jab bahir bijli chamak rahi h toh darakht ke neeche nahi khare hote or basically anything dark...Yeh marrna chahte hain? 🤔

But wonderful update, I loved the first part of it, smiled throughout the whole the first part... 😳

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khamoshi se seh lete hai judaai
tu yeh na soch k tera saath mera muqaddar nahi
tujhe aise hi jaane diya iss zindagi se
tu yeh na soch k humko tera intezar nahi
kabhi to hamari ruthi hui taqdeer maan jaayegi
tu yeh na soch k humain Khuda pe aitbaar nahi
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😍

-Laiba

Half century ki bohat mubarik ho, dua karte hai centurhy bhi hojaye jald... 😳

-Sorry for being terribly late..-

I know..I also loved that title. Dunno how it got into my head..I think after I wrote that rain scene. Aap ke comments phir se parhe humnain...I think the only part that I can respond to (other than being thankful for all the words) is I am really glad to see you connecting with Nupur. Sometimes when you pretty much write the storyline in your own way, I see this world in Nupur's eyes and I feel so proud coz this is exactly what I wanted to portrait. The way you look at Tanmay...the way you describe Nupur's feelings about Mayank as if you are Nupur 😊 Then again..I start feeling worried..a fear for you perhaps. *sigh* humnain hamesha hamari Nupur ki hifazat ki iss poori duniya se aur aakhir me woh hum hi se ghayal hui.

Be there with me Laiba. aap se hamari yehi ilteja hai k kisi haal me bhi iss kahani ko adhura na choriyega...please!

-Neela

Originally posted by: vampire_girl

mai itni late😡..namumkin hai yea🤣🤣
mai kabhi itna late to nahi hui thi
ya allah..!! yea kya hogaya😭
ok now coming to the update

it was fab...OMG...shocking..!! mayank proposed nupur uo bhi online??😲😲
that was the biggest shock of my life🤣
i mean kisi ne kisi ko online proposed kiya😳
kitna romantic hai na😍..mujhe to bohot acha laga...
and you why i loved thie part more than anything...cause there was only mayank and nupur...no tanmay at all😃

mayank ne kya tareef ki hai nupur ki hayeee😳

dikhne me aap kaisi hai?? saawan ki ghataon jaisi'hawaaon se baatein karti hui aur hamesha aapke aankhon ke saamne aake aapko pareshan karti hui lambe se uljhe se baal'.agar uthe to qayamat dhaati hai aur agar jhuke to aasman bhi zameen se aa milta hai aisi gehri kaali aankhein'awaaz me jaise baarish ki rimjhim per aap ki khamoshiyan shayed aap ki awaaz se bhi zyada bolte hai. chehre pe woh masoomiyat jo poori qayenaat ko sharminda kar de. har ada'har harqat aapki ek nazaqat hai. khush kismet hote hai woh log jinhe aapka saath naseeb hota hai

isse better kuch bhi nahi hoskata...and hats of to you neela..ap chod koi aisa likh hi nahi sakta👏⭐️
amazing written...!! so beautiful that cant be described in words
pls continue soon

love
tasfia

Actually hum bhi yehi soch rahe the k kya baat hai! Tashu ki bacchi dikhayi nahi de rahi hai! Then I saw you busy updating all your 'Adult Fictions' 😆 to maine socha bechare ko disturb nahi karna chahiye. pata nahi kya kya likh rahi hogi...tajaurba to sifar hai aap ki iss maamle me 😉

Anyways coming back to the comments...so you're shocked! Good balance of readers yaar! kuch hai jo shocked hai aur kuch hai jo khush hai and then again kuch hai jinhe koi hairatgi nahi hui.

kyun? Online proposal k baare me nahi suna kya? I know of so many cases jahan online proposal hui aur ab shaadi bhi hogayi unnke. Romantic...but too good to be true 😊 And thanks for those lines. Fiza ne bhi aisa hi kuch kaha unn lines ko lekar. woh mere bhi favorite lines hai...glad you liked them.

Enjoy...isske baad se kahani ek naya mor lene wala hai. Watch out..

-Neela

Part 14:

sorry yaar for commenting late

amazing part

really loved it

cont soon

Part 15:
beautiful

simply beautiful

loved it

cont soon

Originally posted by: -Faria-

Neela jee
apki ye udate parke mujhe khush hona chaiye...
ummm sirf khush nehi bahut he khush hona chaiye ---- kyun ki ye bilkul mera maan pasand update hain- totally mayurish. mayurki baatein , ek dusre ki feelings, respect sab kuch tha yaha...lekin hum khush nehi hain. kyun ki dil ki kone main ek bada sa daar hai ki- kahi kuch galad jarur hone wali hai, ye tufaan k phele ki shaanti hai... pata nehi kyun mujhe aisa laga hai ki ap jarur aisa kuch karne wale hai ki ye khush jaida din tak nehi rahega...something is really cooking in ur mind... neela ji hum jante hai ki ye zindegi itna ahsaan nehi hai, lekin itna complex bhi nehi hai jitna apko lagta hai...plz isbaar in dono ko alag maat kijiye... khsh rehne do in dono ko. ha agar isliye in dono ko koi bure waqt se guzrane paregi tou koi baat nehi ----- kyun ki hum jaante hai wo pyaar kise pyaar hai jo mushkilo ka samna na kare..
accha shayed main apni vabnao se behkar kuch jaida he likh diya.. aur kuch likhungi tou ap ye kahengi ki- main kuch jaida he sochti hu... kuchh jaida he imagine kart liya... lekin kya kare hum aisa he hai... so plz mera baat apni dil o demag pe maat lijiye ... sirf ek random comment soch kar par li jiyega... thik hai??
apna khayal rakhiyega...

aap ki comments ki jawab kya de yehi soch rahe hai kab se. humain jhoot bolna nahi aata aur jis sach se kisiko taqleef pohunche woh sach chupa jaana hi behter hai. bas itna hi kehna chahte hai k agle update me aapko apne saare sawalon ka jawab mil jayega.

By the way, you are on my warning list. waise to hum kisiko bhi rok nahi sakte per isske aage agar aap na parhna chaho then I wouldn't mind. In fact i would strongly recommend that you don't. All up to you now.

-Neela

Originally posted by: sizzlingsehr

neela
tumhara ff to phir mjhse chut gaya
but aj dekha itne saree update tumne kya hai
i m gonna read all updates
miised urr this ff a lottt
thankfullyy today i got tym to read ittt

My My...what do I see here..Seher!! Kya baat hai..aajkal saare purane shakal dikh rahe iss aashar me. kya kismet hai hamari...welcome back baccha. Missed all the late night wishes from you 😉 Jaldi se catch up karo ab...you have arrived just in time.

Look forward to your comments in the next updates. By the way, purane udhaar bhi chukta kar dena 😆

-Neela

Originally posted by: alishaL786

great job!! 👏

i just read all of your parts and you are fantastic!! 😊

amazinggg! 👍🏼

love them to the core! ❤️

write more soon! 😊

thanks for all of the pms!

~Alisha~

Alisha Thank You 😊 I am glad you liked my work. Just wanted to welcome you on board. A bud request is on your way to add you on the PMList. Look forward to your comments.

-Neela