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Divya

@myownarea

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Neela . I love that title "tragedy queen" :) do u know that I have quite a reputation of being just the opposite, like when i write a story no matter how it goes ppl just know, aah she s gonna get them together in the end 😆 ..So its good to break away from the stereo type, I shud someday write something tragic 😆/// ok enuf abt me, coming to ur update, interesting how Mayank and Nupur were married more by the heart than by the mantras and loved the connection u put in the end, did mr abhijit live the life of a loner that MN always felt a certain bhoj on their marriage ? hmm loved that particular twist u brought to a straight fwd tale :)

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#12

wow

i love it a lot

gr8 job

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neetu

@mayurg2010

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

this piece of work is perfectly written
there is no doubt in that
but who is abhijeet sinha?

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anju011

@anju011

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

awesome os neela
loved it.
keep writing more.

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Amazing os neela

fantastic

but is abhijeet Sinha her first hubby???

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Nirvrithi

@Nirvrithi

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

Chalo ji... Neela - ab tum hi batavo.. Abhinav Sinha hain kaun? 😊

Im sure 99% that he must be Nupur's first husband - but ...

**again scratching head** what can be the connection between his death and Mayur's marriage.. I guess I have to just switch off my logical section once return from office. What say?

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aswathy

@sreevijayan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

i am really confused dear,,,,,do u know the reason?? bcoz i cant believe that our tragedy queen has wriiten this os..juz kidding lolozzz...the os was amazing dear,,,,,,loved it..pls do write more.................

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-SharNeela-

@-SharNeela-

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Nirvrithi
Hi Neela... (BTW,Neela se hi baat kar rahi hoo na, ya uske bhoot se?😉)

How are u now? tumhari gajniwaali bhimari theek ho gayi? 😆

Kuch yaad hain mein kaun hoon? 😉 Itna bada vacation logi tho bhool tho jaavogi na?

Coming to your OSS - Sach bolun😆 Maarna mat ,huh?😉 When I started reading it, I was smiling in my mind that Tragedy Queen returns - Ye nahi badli.. but..suddenly the twist came. I couldnt believe😲 Nupur bhaag gayi ? Shaadi ke baad? Woh bhi Neela ke story pe?

I thought I lost it completely - Probably the aftereffect of reading OS at odd hour of 5AM morning😆 Then read it again and came to know that its you only... 😊

Anyways I loved your short story - though bit unconventional... Stories mein tho chalta hain😉

Par ye Abhijeet Sinha ka kissa kya hain,kuch samajh nahi aaya;did I miss to read or notice something? Only thing I can remember is this is the something you mentioned in this line right?

Initially, both Mayank and Nupur were reluctant to go through this but then again, something happened that convinced them to change their minds.

Par ye janab hain kaun?? 😕

Oh god, probably I have to go back to sleep and when I am in my full sense ,read the story again... Ab tho mera logic so raha hain... 🥱

Nivi...while I was reading your comment..I was pretty much sure that either you're drunk or you're suffering from insomnia 😆 especially when you said Neela or bhoot...I was like arre agar 1% bhi shakk hai k bhoot hoon to bhoot ki OS pe comment karne ka kya matlab 😆

Ok coming back to your comment...glad you LOVED it. Unconventional!! is that a compliment? well...say it FF or OS or SS or OSS I don't think I will write anything that is conventional. na likhne me maza hai aur na parhne me..thats my personal view. About Abhijeet Sinha...I thought it was obvious...he is Nupur's 1st husband and you're right! The connection was within that line that something happened that convinced them to change their mind. Whats the connection between his death and their marriage? yeh bhi obvious meri logical aunt 😛 Nupur was always burdened with that mangalsutra and sindoor and as far as her conscious went, she was still married to Abhijeet. When he dies, she could take that mangalsutra off and remarry. itni si to baat hai...😃 ab tu bhi chain se so jaa aur tere logic ko bhi sonay de 😆

-Neela ki Bhoot 😉

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-SharNeela-

@-SharNeela-

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Divya_kaldivya
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You are still the "TRAGEDY and JUDAAI QUEEN".. woh toh isme Mayank ke haath se khoon nikalta hua dekh, Nupur uske peeche gayi aur phir unn donon ne apni zindagi phirse jeena shuru kar diya..

warna tune toh koi kasar nahin chodi thi inn donon ko juda karne mein...

But I am happy that, ek baar hi sahi, inn donon ne pyaar ke liye saari rasmon ko bhula diya.. aur pyaar se badi cheez aur kuch bhi nahin hain duniya mein...

And 25th Marriage anniversary ko inki beti ne inki shaadi karvakar bahut hi punya ka kaam kiya hain....

Nice update..

Par ek baat bata, inn 25 years mein kya Mr.Sinha ne ek baar bhi Nupur ko dhoondne ki koshish nahin ki..

haila Divz...abhi tak mere mathe se woh kalank nahi hatta aur kitne happy ending wali kahani likhni paregi iss badnaami ka daagh dhonay k liye...bol.

But thanx for the comments. teri wajah se iss concept me zabardasti jaan daalni pari. har roz tu jo purani record ki tarha bajji jaa rahi thee...yeh kahani ugalna parha mujhe 😆 But thanks...teri wajah se yeh gallery kholne ki himmat hui. aur mere saare readers ne mera saath diya...I am like in tears 😭 of joy...of course. You guys haven't forgotten me yet. 🤗

About the question...dekh maine Abhijeet babu ki baare me kuch nahi likkha. I don't know actually. Shayed dhoondha hoga...shayed nahi. As you know...main hamesha apne readers ko ek choice deti hoon jahan woh khud apne sawalon ka jawab apne tarha se dhoondh le aur usse maan bhi le...meri taraf se koi bandish nahi. So..if you feel comfortable thinking that he did search for her...then so be it. teri marzi...tu reader hai. 😊

-Neela

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Nirvrithi

@Nirvrithi

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: sharneel

Nivi...while I was reading your comment..I was pretty much sure that either you're drunk or you're suffering from insomnia 😆 especially when you said Neela or bhoot...I was like arre agar 1% bhi shakk hai k bhoot hoon to bhoot ki OS pe comment karne ka kya matlab 😆

Ok coming back to your comment...glad you LOVED it. Unconventional!! is that a compliment? well...say it FF or OS or SS or OSS I don't think I will write anything that is conventional. na likhne me maza hai aur na parhne me..thats my personal view. About Abhijeet Sinha...I thought it was obvious...he is Nupur's 1st husband and you're right! The connection was within that line that something happened that convinced them to change their mind. Whats the connection between his death and their marriage? yeh bhi obvious meri logical aunt 😛 Nupur was always burdened with that mangalsutra and sindoor and as far as her conscious went, she was still married to Abhijeet. When he dies, she could take that mangalsutra off and remarry. itni si to baat hai...😃 ab tu bhi chain se so jaa aur tere logic ko bhi sonay de 😆

-Neela ki Bhoot 😉

Hello Bhoot ji - Pranam 🤣 Loved ur reply 😉

Aur haan..jab tumne mere logic ko challenge kar hi liya hain - Ab mein tujhe chodungi nahi... 🤓

esp about @Bold... lekin yahan nahi - kyu baaki logon ko irritate kare

.. Tumein PM karungi..