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topsyturvy23

@topsyturvy23

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#41

hey was pretty awesome ...loved it to bits...cudnt take off my eyes from the screen until i read it to full...n i can say i knw what it feels to loose some important person of your life...evn i lost my heartbeat...i believe if u lost that person that means that u were never meant to have that person in ur life...but anyways very well written...thanks for the pm

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Sanchari

@--Sanchu--

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#42

hey neela...

that was awesome...

i am really falling short of words to describe it...wow!!!

and i truly wish u that someday u would come across that special person again...

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maria

@Maria.

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#43

heyyy Neela

what a beautiful piece of writing ...really awesom

loved it

do write more OS

haan aur agar ap apna wada nahi bholi toh wada wafa kab ker rahi hain?

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Escapist

@Escapist

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#44

Hey Neela,

How are you ?? Its been too long of a time that I din interact with you...but my exams were there and they got over just a week back n I can't access my ym due to some problem and hush...even your FF is pending...god I'm getting a feeling that you are really pissed off at me due to all this...kahoge bus bahane deti hai...bahane banana toh koi Fatima se seekhe 😆 but jokes apart...how are you?? howz everything goin on..?? hope all is well !

Coming to this one...I somehow figured in the start Mayank is none other than you...in fact in the pm only it was clear its not mere fiction...it was a one of the beautiful moments of your life...coz you met someone someone who din judge you on your position on your status...such people are rare to find!
And I really pray to Allah k aap uss shaks se zarur milo...woh aapka kaafi aacha dost ban sakta hai !

Beautiful os :)

Take Care,
Fatima

Edited by -shabnoor- - 14 years ago

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valliyah

@valliyah

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#45

Dua karengey aapko woh khaas jaldi miley...!!!

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ALIMA AFRIN KHEYA

@kheya-mayur

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#46

awww nice1 neela
but m confused r u at nupur's place or on mayank's

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drmaha

@drmaha

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#47

InshaAllah u 'll get tht special person back in your life...😊

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#48

beautiful

excellently written n wish dat u met with dat person again soon

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556195

Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#49

hmm..what to say..as always..speechless...amazing job neela👏
just so good and so beautiful that i just cant describe my feelings
beautiful ..and truly amazing😳
pls keep writing os like this..it gives me some energy after a tiring day😆
awesome😃

p.s hope you get that special friend back in your life soon..because its hard to find such true friends😊

Edited by vampire_girl - 14 years ago

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#50

It was a beautiful story...i wish he could read...

I understand urdu...can even speak...[not typical words]...but still even i cant read urdu...

And it's a wonderful story...

It's a true story? really?

I wish you meet him...

Do continue writing such beautiful one-shots.

- Mahak