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-SharNeela-

@-SharNeela-

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: samiralovemayur
Hey Neela glad to see u back
this 1 was awesome update

looking foward to read more dear

thankks 4 d pm

Samira...🤗So glad to be back yaara. Also over the moon that you are still reading my writings. Thanks a bunch...please be there for me moving forward.

Love
-Neela

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kirti123

@kirti123

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

😊neela congo for ur gallery

zabardast start ha

truely ur a tragedy queen

but beautifully written

continue soon

😊

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: sharneel

haila Divz...abhi tak mere mathe se woh kalank nahi hatta aur kitne happy ending wali kahani likhni paregi iss badnaami ka daagh dhonay k liye...bol.

But thanx for the comments. teri wajah se iss concept me zabardasti jaan daalni pari. har roz tu jo purani record ki tarha bajji jaa rahi thee...yeh kahani ugalna parha mujhe 😆 But thanks...teri wajah se yeh gallery kholne ki himmat hui. aur mere saare readers ne mera saath diya...I am like in tears 😭 of joy...of course. You guys haven't forgotten me yet. 🤗

About the question...dekh maine Abhijeet babu ki baare me kuch nahi likkha. I don't know actually. Shayed dhoondha hoga...shayed nahi. As you know...main hamesha apne readers ko ek choice deti hoon jahan woh khud apne sawalon ka jawab apne tarha se dhoondh le aur usse maan bhi le...meri taraf se koi bandish nahi. So..if you feel comfortable thinking that he did search for her...then so be it. teri marzi...tu reader hai. 😊

-Neela

Woh kalank tabhi jayega jab tu ek zabardast romantic happywali, MN OS yaa FF likhegi..

aur tujhe bhoolne ke liye humein kuch Ghajniwali bimari nahin hui hain.... duniya mein sirf do cheezon ko bhulaya nahin jaata.. love aur tragedy...😆😆😆😆.. ab tu decide karle tu kaunsi category mein hain...

aur raha teri cross sawal ka... mein mera khud ka conclusion kar liya hain..

ab mein toh poorani record gaaoongi nahin... naya gaaoongi... Romantic OS likh...

aur itna ro mat.. baadh aa jayegi...

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556195

Hibernated

Posted: 15 years ago

#24

hey neela
i am really happy that you are back
coming to the update
really awesome
lovely starting
but, who is abhijeet sinha???
and one request yaar this time want a happy ending plsssssssssssssssss
do cont soon

love
tashu

Edited by tasfia123 - 15 years ago

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-SharNeela-

@-SharNeela-

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: mjhtnupurmayank
hey awesome oss...
loved it...

but, who is abhijeet sinha???

haaye meri jasoos...I thought out of all you would be able to fill all the gaps and give it a strong conclusion. Kya hogaya hai Pooja tumhe? 😉

Anyways...glad you liked it. Abhijeet Sinha was her 1st husband 😊

-Neela

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-SharNeela-

@-SharNeela-

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: TheLioness
Awesome OS! Is Abhinav Shukla Nupurs first husband?

Thanks Nidz. I am so glad you read it and liked it. Btw...ye Abhinav Shukla kaun hai?? 😆 apni koi FF ka character meri OS me daal diya kya?? Or is it a mutation of Abhinav and Shukla sir 🤣 Then again I think Abhinav Shukla is a better name than Abhijeet Sinha and yes, he is Nupur's husband.

-Neela

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-SharNeela-

@-SharNeela-

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: myownarea
Neela . I love that title "tragedy queen" :) do u know that I have quite a reputation of being just the opposite, like when i write a story no matter how it goes ppl just know, aah she s gonna get them together in the end 😆 ..So its good to break away from the stereo type, I shud someday write something tragic 😆/// ok enuf abt me, coming to ur update, interesting how Mayank and Nupur were married more by the heart than by the mantras and loved the connection u put in the end, did mr abhijit live the life of a loner that MN always felt a certain bhoj on their marriage ? hmm loved that particular twist u brought to a straight fwd tale :)

Divya...I am currently suffering from the opposite kinda allegation. No matter what I write people are still calling me TRAGEDY QUEEN 😆 No one believes me...no matter how happy or sad the storyline is, they are firm in believing that I will separate MaYur at the end 😆 So I need a break from that. Here's an idea...why don't you write one happy wali OS for me and I will write a typical saddy one for you and we exchange...kisiko pata nahi chalega 😉

Ok...coming back to the comment...good question..what happened to Abhijeet babu. And as per other comments, I will revert back with the same message..I don't know. In fact, one can also ask what happened to Nupur's parents? For 25 years, did they ever not want to know about her? Mayank's parents never wanted to know about her family? Then the questions that Nivi asked, what is the connection between him dying and them getting remarried? I don't know actually...it was a ONE SHOT..a snapshot of an event. And to be honest, as soon as I complete my writing and publish it, I become a reader just like you. And now even I have the same questions and I try to find the answers in my own way coz the writer is an idiot...usse koi jawab nahi pata 😆 😆

Keep reading yaar...

-Neela

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#28

Hi Neela

kemon acho????????
hmmmmmmmm obak lagse na?
etodin por ami abar kotha theke abirvuto holam.lol

ki korbo tumi amar myaur k niye sad sad ff likhbe r ami ogulo aram kore porbo- kabhi nehi .
tomar sad ff pore ami j tomake ki poriman bokaboki koresinta shudhu ekmatro ALLAH e jane.lol
heheheheehehe amar kotha shune rag lagse- ki korbo bolo , tomar ff pore amaro tou onek rag+dukkho hoyesilo.

r a baba i knw u r one of the talented writer in this forum- but ur tragedy type ff alwz made me sad.
and thats why i was decide not to read any of ur ff.
kintu ki korbo bolo -oi je bole na adat se majboor. amio o erokomi- mayur/arti kono ff/OS dekhlei lafiye uthi porar jonno.

By GOD i cant believe neela- u wrtie an OS on MAyur and u gave a happy ending .

ami kono shopno dekhsi nato
nupur paliye giye biye karuk bba jai karuk wo mayank wer shathe ase etai amar jonno enough. ami bhai logic er dhar dhari na
ki hobe eto logic diye?
ami jodi mayur ki khushi dekhe ektu anondo pai- to sheta illogocal or filmy type hoeli ba ki!!!!!!!!!!

ami to thik koresilam eta porbona- karon ami 100% sure silam j tumi abar emon ekta OS likheso jekhane amar mayur k alda kore dibe.

kintu nivi di er comment pore amar bhulta bhengese.

r amiooti agrogo ebong mone ekta khushi niye tomar ei OS porlam

amar to khub e bhalo legese. ALLAH e jane tomar likhte koshto hoyese kina. karon sad ff likhte to abar tomar khub bhalo lage.lol

r a dhur koshto ektu holoi ba - tate ki? amar tou bhalo laglo..........

shotti nila eta ektu filmy type holeu amar kase bahlo legese. at least tumi tomar circle theke kisuta baire eshe ei OS likheso

ok onek bak bak koralm. tomar matha dhore gese nishchoi- r rag o lagse mone hoy.

hok- eku matha betha n ektu rag shasther jonno bhalo.lol

take care dear
do write more happy happy mayur FF and OS.

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Sania

@dynamic_doll

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#29

welcome back Neela ji (hum aap ko tragedy queen nahin bulaen ge 😆)

congratz 4 ur gallery

ye OSS humain be-had pasand aayi

kya kamaal ki kalam nigaar (writer) hain aap 👏

bus ab aik guzarish hai app itni lambi chuti par na jaya karein

hum aap ko bohat yaad karte hain

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-SharNeela-

@-SharNeela-

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#30

To avoid spamming the thread...mass Thanks for the below buds 😃

@zarfishan
Thanks for reading and commenting

@love.mayurarti (sorry yaar naam bhul gayi)
Thank you

@maria
gosh...thats a surprise. I thought after Qayenaat, you wouldn't want to read anything I write 😊 Honestly, you liked it?

@rumki
Thank you 😊

@Mahi
where have you been? aur woh CC kahan ghayeb hogayi? But always glad to see you reading my work 😊muah..

@Neetu
Thank you. Thats a great compliment. Abhijeet Sinha was Nupur's 1st husband

@anjus
Thank you

@sariska
Glad to see you here. And yes Abhijeet is her 1st hubby

-Neela