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Anisha

@.anishaa.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#341

Originally posted by: Jake-lover

My bud, come out from ya thread. 😆😉

LOL okay 😆 😆 Where do I go from here? 😉

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Posted: 15 years ago

#342

Originally posted by: starstruck2

LOL okay 😆 😆 Where do I go from here? 😉

A lot of places. Take a deep breath - in n out. Fresh air. 😆😆😉

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Anisha

@.anishaa.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#343

Originally posted by: Jake-lover

A lot of places. Take a deep breath - in n out. Fresh air. 😆😆😉

Care to specify where? 😆 LOL Jake don't speak of the impossible 😆 😆 😆

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Posted: 15 years ago

#344

Originally posted by: starstruck2

Care to specify where? 😆 LOL Jake don't speak of the impossible 😆 😆 😆

Ok, ok! Here you go: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1478640

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Fatima

@desigirl_18

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Posted: 15 years ago

#345

Awesome part Anisha!!! You write wonderfully!!! Loved the way u depicted Maan's thoughts, brilliant!! keep it up!!!

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Anisha

@.anishaa.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#346

Originally posted by: desigirl_18
Awesome part Anisha!!! You write wonderfully!!! Loved the way u depicted Maan's thoughts, brilliant!! keep it up!!!

Thanks for reading and commenting, glad you liked it 😃

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anjali

@rosette80

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Posted: 15 years ago

#347

januuuuuuuuu anisha...ab mein kya boluu..itni frankly ..point to point expressions were even just soooooooo noxious to read...ur updates aree doo dngerous to my helth..they kill me really!!!

i mean sooooooooooooooo entirely this happen only things will move on...true beauty.best lines.......

As he placed her in his black Merecedes, he couldn't help but kneel down on one knee and stare at her innocent sleeping face. He wondered what she was dreaming about.

Her eyes were shut, and the turmoil and pain within them were nowhere to be seen. Her usually arched eyebrows were relaxed, her forehead was free of worry, and her lips were angelic, beaming at something only she knew.

She was dreaming of him.

She was the one who cared if he went to jail or not.

She was the one who cared if he lived or died.

She was...the one.

And her past didn't matter to him. Nothing else mattered.

He was always on her side and he always would be.

tooo good ani..........u have such god;s given blessings!

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Anisha

@.anishaa.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#348

Originally posted by: rosette80
januuuuuuuuu anisha...ab mein kya boluu..itni frankly ..point to point expressions were even just soooooooo noxious to read...ur updates aree doo dngerous to my helth..they kill me really!!!

i mean sooooooooooooooo entirely this happen only things will move on...true beauty.best lines.......

As he placed her in his black Merecedes, he couldn't help but kneel down on one knee and stare at her innocent sleeping face. He wondered what she was dreaming about.

Her eyes were shut, and the turmoil and pain within them were nowhere to be seen. Her usually arched eyebrows were relaxed, her forehead was free of worry, and her lips were angelic, beaming at something only she knew.

She was dreaming of him.

She was the one who cared if he went to jail or not.

She was the one who cared if he lived or died.

She was...the one.

And her past didn't matter to him. Nothing else mattered.

He was always on her side and he always would be.

tooo good ani..........u have such god;s given blessings!

Anjali!!!!!!! Long time no talk 😭

Glad you're here, thanks for commenting 😊 😊 🤗

Awwh that's so sweet of you, I love those lines too! And yeah I though something resolute like this was necessary to move on. Because in the show Maan hasn't been this straightforward 😳

Thanks Anju, I'm sure God blessed you too 😆 😆 😉 LOL luvya! 😊

-Anisha 😊

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ruchi

@macho_muffin

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Posted: 15 years ago

#349

heyy Anisha,

need i mention just how beautifully written the last update was? and omggg, u just killed me with those last couple of lines....ahhhhhh soo romantic and deep!!😍....and u know the best part about it was that you captured MSK's character perfectly in those lines....it was exactly something he wud say so great job dude!!!....i m soo sorry for commenting late but urghh, college has started and i m only gonna say one word abt it : HELL!!😭.....i wish i could stay in ff and maaneet land foreverr without worrying about DNA replication and addition of vectors😆....*sigh* if only.....but great job and update rapidooo....i would lovee to c how maan handles this truth!!