Originally posted by: @nup@m@
Hey Anisha!!!!
FInally I am done reading the FF and like I promised I am here to comment... Lovely FF... U have given a new start to the story...Everything is very beautifully written and I loved reading it... U have to have to ADDme to the PM list becoz I tend to forget which ones I am following... I liked few lines from the chapters.. Lovely and beautiful.. here they are :
"Especially not gossip about my fiancee!"
"Geet, jaan, tumko bhook lagi hai kya?"
"If I am ready to pass out, it's for you! I came here for you and won't leave until I'm done helping you!"
I pushed Maan away and faced Darji. "Shut up! Stop yelling all the time like an uncivilized being. I am talking. He knows how to talk. Why can't you be normal and have a conversation for once? You always jump to conclusions and shout and scream and yell and shriek like you're five! And who are you of mine anyways? If it wasn't for him, I would be dead today! My life is his, whatever he wishes, he is free to do and I'm there to tell him. You and I have no relation, so therefore you have no right to yell at him at this!" I spat at Darji furiously.
"Her place is with me."
The man laughed. "You and bhabhi look so perfect. And in love. That is only possible when a couple is newly married. After a few years, it all goes away." the man looked sad, probably thinking of his own scary wife
"Nahin, aisa kuch nahin hain. We are newly married, but I will love her forever." Maan said, peeking at me from the corner of his eye.
"Geet, I am a billionare! I have wayyyyy too much money. One diamond ring isn't going to reduce my wealth," Maan said wearily. Then, under his breath, he said, "And how long is it going to be a natak anyways?"
"Saheb, are you sure? This is a one crore rupees ring,"
"I am sure. You can't put a price on love," Maan said, looking at me and handing the shopkeeper his credit card.
She was his fake fiancee, who he bought a one-crore diamond ring for.
She was the one who called him "suniye."
She was the one who gave him lassi when his tongue was burning.
She was the one who cared if he went to jail or not.
She was the one who cared if he lived or died.
She was...the one.
Keep giving us more of these romantic lines
Love
anupama
Real Estate
Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon
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