Short story :You Belong To Me(Shanak)part22page33

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Hi sweeties 🤗
I would love to write my own version of RBO , as the name of You Belong To Me

The starring and the story is same as what we have seen in RBO so far, but from here I would be starting You Belong To Me.

Would you like me to do? Pls let me know 😉

Part 1 and 2 page 1
Part 11 page 13
Part12 Page 14
Part 13 page 16
Part 14 page 18
Part 15 updated page 20
Part 16
Part 17 page 23
Part 18
Part 19
Part 20
Part 21
Part 22

Introduction
Shantanu Kandelwal was left without a choice other than marrying the widow, Khanak who lost her husband before her SR due to an accident. Shaan who was in love with Natasha, signed a contract to leave Khanak after completing six months of their marriage, but without his knowledge he fell deeply in love with his wife, Khanak....Read the story 'You Belong To Me' to know how their lives are changed....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Ya Amrita go for it .... the title seems promising ....will be waiting for ur update
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You Belong To Me - Part 1

Khanak stood near the window. She felt the cool breezes and the nice scent of the flowers.
She closed her eyes, to think about her life. Her life with Shantanu. She had never imagined
to be his wife. His wife, for whom he even fought for his life, his love, his family and
his everything. He gave his everything for her. He paid so much for what he didn't even
commit. With a loud noise Khanak came back to her senses. SHe closed the window and turned back to look at her husband, who is sleeping. She smiled at her sleeping husband, sweetly.

Khanak walked towards the sofa, where he was sleeping she knelt before him and caressed his
forehead. Covered him with the blanket and walked towards the bed. Before lying on the bed she
looked at Suraj's picture which was hanging on the wall.

Suraj was her love, life and everything. She has to accept and live with the truth that Suraj
is dead. He won't come to life ever again. She wiped her eyes and removed the picture from there. She remembered how Shantanu removed Natasha's picture from the wall , for her comfort. Only for her. She kept the picture in the cupboard and lied on the bed to sleep.

Shantanu woke up in the middle of the night hearing Khanak weeping. He went near to her and to his surprise he saw she is a sleep, and tears are flowing from her eyes. Without knowing what to do he wiped her tears and caressed her beautiful face. He didn't see her this beautiful ever. For once he was mesmerised by her pretty face. He touched her hair, very carefully as if she is the most delicate being in the whole world. Khanak's lips moved as if she was saying something, but he was unable to hear what she said. He moved closer to her, to hear what she was saying. To his surprise she didn't move. After a while she murmured again.

Khanak - You can't...leave me...Suraj...
SHantanu was stunned. He caressed her forehead, untill she slept.

Khanak opened her eyes and saw sun light coming through the window. She looked at the sofa and saw it empty. Where did Shanatnu go? She thought to her self. She was about to get out of the bed she saw him sleeping near her. Very near. She tried to remember what happened that night, but could not remember anything. She decided to wake him up.

Khnak - Shantanu, pls wake up
Shaan - mmm...Let me sleep...
Khanak - No way, you have to go for work. I won't let you sleep
Shaan - Khanak, uff...pls ten more minutes
Khank - Not a single minute, or else I will ouch! ouch!
Shaan caught her hand and she fell on to the bed.
Shaan - or else what??
Khnak tried to hide her expression, but could not succeed. SHe was caught by her husband. Shaan kept on looking at her deep eyes. The eyes that speak alot, for him. The silence gaze between them were broken by the knock at the door.




Edited by amrita2010 - 15 years ago
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You Belong To Me – part 2

Shaan is in a meeting at his office. He remembered Khanak's words 'Shantanu, You will have to work and I would live on what you earn only'. These are the words that changed his playful mind. He should be responsible, for Khanak, for their life. These words gave him the courage to work and to distance him from Natasha. Natasha, the girl he loved blindly. Things had changed so much, Khanak came to his life and it's his responsibility to keep her happy.
He was physically in the meeting room, but mentally somewhere far far away from this world. He was thinking of Khanak- being the shy, sweet and intelligent wife of the handsome and smart Shantanu Kandelwal. A mischievous smile played on his lips. He remembered how shy Khanak was to wear salwar-kamees and how beautiful she looked. He was brought back to his senses by one of the board members.
Mr.Gupta – Mr.Kandelwal, what is your opinion?
Shaan looked at him in confusion. He looked at the faces of all the board members as if he is seeing them for the first time.
Shaan – Mr. Gupta, if you don't mind I will think about it once again and let you know.
Mr. Gupta nodded in agreement and they left the meeting room, leaving Shaan alone. He thought of calling Khanak for the first time from office. Luckily Daadi answered the phone.
Shaan – Hello Daadi, is Khanak over there? I need to talk to her
Daadi – Shaan beta, is everything alright?
Shaan – Yes Daadi, please can you call Khanak
Daadi – (smiling) Hold on, Khanak is right here. (Daadi handed the phone to the Khnanak)
Khanak – Ji?
Shaan – Hi Khanak, something is really wrong. I am having a big problem here
Khanak – (shocked) What happened? May I know? Can I help?
Shaan – Let me speak first, what did you give me as the breakfast today?
Khanak – Sandwich
Shaan – Who made it?
Khanak – Ji? I made it
Shaan – Now I have figured the problem. It is the sandwich that is not allowing me to concentrate on my work.
Khanak – Anything wrong?
Shaan – Everything seem to be out of the way. I'm coming home right now. I feel very hungry.
Without giving a chance for Khanak to answer Shaan hang the phone and headed towards the Khandelwal house.
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Originally posted by: rashrousha

Ya Amrita go for it .... the title seems promising ....will be waiting for ur update


thanx, I have updated part 1 and 2
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hehe, sounds just like Shaan:)
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loved it....pls continue soon...will be waiting😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice read. Do continue. 😊
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Amrita2010
You belong to me seems interesting and very good to read.U left a suspense of shaan coming back home.Do continue.
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nice start.. playful shaan.. do PM me..

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