Short story :You Belong To Me(Shanak)part22page33 - Page 10

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Posted: 15 years ago
#91
it was toooo cute😳
poor Shaan no one takes him seriously😆😆
cant wait to know what will happen in Khandelwal Mansion...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ABSOLUTELY FABULOUS AMRITA!!!
I can't wait till we get to the Khandelwal's.....really great stuff. I love the romance between Shanak......
You rock hun!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93
waiting for the Khandelwal mansion scenes
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Posted: 15 years ago
#94
eagerly waiting for the next part 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@amrita2010.that was really short and sweet.can't wait to enter k mansion.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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You Belong To Me - Part 12

Natasha was calling Shaan since the past two hours, yet there was no response from him. What might have happened to him for which he isn't answering any of her calls? Did he repeat the same thing again? She walked up and down to relieve her nervousness. 'I know Ms.Dulwadi havecasted a sspell on Shaan' Khsboo muttered her usual evil words for Khanak.
She knew that Shaan and Khanak have feelings for one another, but wasn't sure of their addmittence and acceptence.

'Khusboo, dear.now she is not here so why not stop talking bad about her' Mr.Kandelwal tried to calm his eldest daughter-in-law. Though Mr.Kandelwal liked Khanak to be his daughter-in-law, he couldn't do anything against his family, especially his son, Shaan. He still remembers under which circumstance Shaan and Khanak were married and little did he know that Shaan loves her.
'dad, don't you remember what happened last time when she left?' she wasn't in the mood of giving away. 'Khusboo, calm down.Shaan will come at anytime, he might be driving so he's not answering his phone' Akshay puta hand over her shoulders to give her comfort. Being Khushboo's wife, Akshay had to support Natasha, even by knowing Shaan's feelings for his wife.

Half an hour later they heard the sound of Shaan's car. All of them nearly ran toward the door. Natasha's face enlightened with happiness. She smiled at Shaan who got out of the car and walked to the otherside to open the door for Khanak. She got out, Shaan held her wrist and walked towards the door. She tried to release her wrist, knowing this he made his hold
tighter.

Natasha was witnessing all these with teary eyes. She remembered the first time Khanak came there as Shaan's wife. Shaan didn't hold her hand then, instead he dared not even to look at Khanak. She saw the difference now and then. Now Shaan is holding Khanak's hand and wanted his family to accept her as his wife. The way he walked with Khanak was confident and fearless that made her more hurt.

Mr.Kandelwal felt happy to see his son and daughter-in-law back, together. His smile welcomed them with hope. Daadi gestured them to stop at the door and went inside. She came back with a vessel filled with rice and a colour palate. 'welcome home, Khanak' Daadi asked her to enter the house.Khanak bang the vessel down softly with her right foot and stepped inside the coloured palate. Slowly she entered into the house leaving her foot prints behind. Daadi and Mr.Kandelwal hugged and gave her blessings

Upon seeing the warm welcome the family offered for Khanak, Khushboo became mad. She made faces toward Khanak,as if she was about to kill her. Khushboo then took Natasha out of the house with her. She drove Natasha home, where Mr.Aggarwal was waiting impatiently for his daughter. He understood everything byseeing the tears flowing from Natasha's eyes. He felt happy that he got his daughter saved, but felt sad seeing her crying.

Though Madhvi didn't like Khanak she also joined them to the dinning area. They enjoyed the dishes and teased each other while having the desserts,as Madhvi always worries about her becoming fat. Daadi retired once she finished eating, Akshay stayed behind to talk Shaan and Khanak.

Shaan took Khanak to the upstairs to his room and sat with her on the bed. He held her in his arms for awhile. She felt happy, but kept it hidden from him. Her mind was still confused, thinking that it could be a dream. 'tell me now, how do you feel?'She wanted to clear her mental confusions. He didn't answer her, but kissed her on her forehead. He knew that this was a different feeling he have for her. He was in love with Natasha before, but he never felt this
way before. It was only Khanak's happiness that he looks forward in life. It was with her only he feel that his heart melts. Her one look is enough to trap his emotions. He kissed her cheeks, chin and finally on the lips, that spoke all his emotions. He felt happy feeling that all his dreams of being with her becoming true. He didn't break the kiss as if he wanted to let go off his control. He wanted to keep this very moment forever.'what is wrong with you now?'Shaan asked as she withdrew from that intense kiss. 'I'm going to have a bath now' she ran towards the bathroom.

You all need to answer this'is it ok if I include a little bit of hubby wifey scenes😳 '
I know that it might be a problem or not, anyways, I will move ahead with your wishes😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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it was absolutely wonderful.
plzzzzzzz continue sooooon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Noorya...

it was toooo cute😳

poor Shaan no one takes him seriously😆😆
cant wait to know what will happen in Khandelwal Mansion...

oh! thankyou dear, poor him, no matter what he does no body still believes him😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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great update..... we would love the hubby wifey scenes....plz cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower

ABSOLUTELY FABULOUS AMRITA!!!

I can't wait till we get to the Khandelwal's.....really great stuff. I love the romance between Shanak......
You rock hun!!!!!

Thankyou so much dear, I'm really glad you like this

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