Short story :You Belong To Me(Shanak)part22page33 - Page 5

Very sweet part! I hope they are still together after there legal separation and realise they have feelings for each other.

it was a very sweet part

I hope they dont separate

@ amrita
Very nice FF.... just read all the parts...

Do write more...

Originally posted by: ...Noorya...

<font color="#ff33cc">it was a very sweet part</font>

<font color="#ff33cc">and 6months already over😲....plzzzpost soon what will happen next</font>

Thanx
Actually my story is taking a leap.. After six months things will be very different 😊

Sorry lovelies, I'm abit late to respond

@pickachu I'm glad you liked it, me too is wondering whether to part them or not 😕

@neha2005 thanx, hope their realisation comes soon 😆

@shalini_s thanx

@mimas_ence thanx

@rashrousha let's hope for the best

@shriya84 thanx, the surprise is on it's way

@tvrasika thanx, yeah I have written three parts but will take a while for them to get updated

To all who read this FF

There will be a leap soon after the six months trial is over and the real story will begin from there 😊

Hi lovelies, soon my story will take a leap and the real 'you belong to me' will begin hope you guys enjoy this and pls let me know what you expect me to include

You Belong To Me - Part 8

Shaan was waiting in the room, while Khanak got ready to leave. She was wearing a green sari. She appeared as beautiful as an angel to his eyes. He kept on looking at her, as if he might not be able to see her ever again.

He wanted to stop her leaving. He didn't feel happy to be away from her. His ego stopped him from stopping her. He wished Daadi to get sick to stop her leaving.

For the first time in life he regretted filing his divorce papers. He still have time to change his decision. But if only she wants to stay with him.

He wanted to tell her how much he love her. He wanted her in every aspect of life. He called out her names so many times to tell his feelings. Each time he failed.

Khanak asked him whether she could see Daadi alone, before she leaves.

Daadi was sad to see Khanak ready to leave the house. The daughter - in - law she loved dearly. The only one Shaan has in life.

Daadi - Khanak, please don't go dear..Shaan will be all alone if you leave now

Khanak - Daadi, you know very well that Natasha will come to take care of him

Little did she know that Daadi doesn't like Natasha to be Shaan's wife. She then hugged Daadi one last time before leaving the room.

Shaan was walking up and down the room when she entered. He seemed to be in trouble.

Khanak - Shantanu, are you alright?

Shaan ran to her and held her hand unintentionally.

Shaan - I was...er..I was worried about you

Khanak - me?.. why?..

He lost his words. He looked into her beautiful eyes. To his surprise he saw pain and loneliness in them. His heart beat quickened. He wanted to understand each and everything her eyes expressed.

He let go off her hand and looked at her slowly. The beautiful embroidered, yet simple sari was simply perfect on her. He was still able to see her curves. He then focused to her face. Her small chin, moist lips, perfect nose and her lovely eyes. He got trapped there.

He can't bear the loneliness without her. Damn his ego. He can't let his ego to win over his life.
He made her to sit on the bed so they could meet their eyes.

His eyes begged her to stay back. Her eyes became watery upon seeing tears in his eyes. Both of them wanted to speak, but couldn't.

It was after a while Shaan started his car, for their journey towards Dulwadi.

@ amrita
U hav got me eager and worried now! Poor things...hope ShaNak let go of their ego and tell the truth to each other...

Good one there Amrita. Keep it going!