Short story :You Belong To Me(Shanak)part22page33 - Page 9

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Shaan accepted Khanak.. now its the Khandelwal's turn.. dont make Khanak suffer too much 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@amrita2010.so they consummated their marriage.That;s great.good work there.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83
OMG i hope ur daughter feels better now😲...u should take care of her n write when she's fine we can wait dear😳
the part was awesome...very cute i loved hw Shaan took Khanak back to Mumbai😉...now lets hope for the best
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@neha2005 thanx for the comment I know it's short, that's writing the next part now😊

@tofeeees thank you dear
@mimas_ence thanx
@Fatima dear I know it's short, but thanks alot
@dhrashtee thanx dear, as they are husband and wife more.......scenes will come later
@shalini_s awwww, your wish is granted
@sshriyaa84 thank you, lets see what comes up next
@Noorya thank you so much for the well wish dear🤗she's better now, so I'm kinda back again
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Posted: 15 years ago
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eagerly waiting for the next one but i know ur really busy so take your time dear. The actual show is moving very slow. I think ima stop watching and watch all of them on friday.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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You Belong To Me - Part 11
'Hey, Khanak shut your mouth, or else you want a lollipop?' Shaan mocked at Khanak as he started driving
'Shantanu, aren't we supposed to go to Dulwadi?' Khanak wanted an answer from Shaan
'Khanak, I'm taking you where you belong to, my beautiful wife' it wasn't the first time he complimented on her beauty
'Well, I don't think that I should go back to Mumbai again. I know I was your wife and our contract is over' Khanak cannot believe what was going around
'For your kind information, we didn't do a contract marriage, and then you are still my wife, so where ever I go you have every right to be with me' Shaan kept on explaining in his own style
'simply being the wife of you doesn't mean that I have to go back again?' Khanak twisted her lips like a kid
'what's wrong with you Khanak? you could ask me directly what is going on your mind. ok? by the way, what had happened between us last night wasn't an accident. I was concious as well as you were. I don't regret it, infact I think I should have done it before' He went on talking proving himself as a straight forward guy.
Khank looked at his eyes while he talked 'what?' she shouted back in surprise upon hearing his last statement
'of course Khanak, you know me right? Shantanu Kandelwal, the most handsome and coolest guy you could ever see' he said with having a huge grin on his face
'Shantanu, this is not funny, I'm serious' Khanak couldn't take his words seriously
'Khanak, if you are one hundred percent serious then I'm two hundred percent serious' he was still talking like a teenager
'ok, stop the car now' he stopped the car as she ordered him. She opened the door and tried to get up from the seat. It was then she felt his strong hands holding her wrist
'she was tossed back to her seat and he moved closer to her 'Khanak, I'm not joking, tell me what can I do to make you believe my words?' he held her chin with his thumb and forefinger
She looked at his eyes and saw the affection that she hasn't seen before. His eyes expressed his inner feelings. The feelings he have for her
He leaned closer to her again, slowly yet carefully so that he can see her eyes. She felt his warm breaths and closed her eyes.
'Khanak, open your eyes and look at me. look into my eyes and feel what I want.' he muttered into her hair
She felt that her heart beat quickened and closed her eyes again.
He traced her lips with his fingers. He wanted to kiss her swollen lips again. He moved his face closer to hers. It was then they were taken back with sound of a lorry that was passing by
If you like this smaller update please press the like button and I look forward for your comments
See you all at the Kandelwal Mansion😉
Edited by amrita2010 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#87
short update yet awesome.
plzzzzzzzzz continue sooooon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88
Veryyyyy cute update.
Continue soon.
Thanxx for the pm.


Fatima
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks for the update and the pm.....if u can plz make the update long...if u cant then the short ones are just fine😉.... but u'll have to update sooner with short ones....keep up the good work....cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#90
@mimas_ence Thank you, I don't write in advance that's why the updates are short
@ Fatima Thanks dear
@Dhrashtee Thank you, If I get time I will write three or four parts and I don't write in advance so it happens, and I really don't feel like to have more narrations in the writings, but it also should be there, hope to update tomorrow too😉

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