A Lovely Misunderstanding(Mayur FF) Updated pg 26 - Page 5

Originally posted by: VampirePrincess

Hey Fatima
Awesome Update!
But No fair u said the next chap will shock me...hmm u have still left me in the dark.
So Zaid has an attitude i knw he's not approaching Ada, so thts his attitude..i got tht
And Ada has covered herself in a shell..cant wait now..i wanna knw wat happened!!!m very curious!
True as the last line says, the coming updates are gonna be very interesting😳
The part was very short, but its okay...i want u to continue soooon....😊
The engagement is here! Yes! i will love that:D
Ofcoz hun m connectin to the characters well, and since i find Mohit and Sanaya very cute n lil similar to these chars..i imagine them😊
And i understand y u r not talking much abt the 4 weeks thing😉 u have something special in store m sure:D
Do continue soon!
M loving this ff
Thanks for the PM

Luv
ZeeJay😊

hey thnx zeejay,
hehe ya i knw but then i want to reveal thngs a bit later on ..
hope ur gettin it..its really wonderful u can imagine mohit n sanaya..
though i've not taken inspiration from them....😊
yeah maybe u'll like the engagement thng bt again im nt revealing much... 😉
i'll continue soon....inshallah !!

-fatima

Originally posted by: deepikavasudeva

oh sorry fatima.... i m really sorry i wasn't here since a week. so couldn't read and comment.... the place i went was a remote type so no internet access..... right now there are about 60-70 pms in my PM box and have to read them all.... *wiping sweats* 😆

sorry. will read all the parts i missed by tonight and will comment ..... plz don't mind..... and btw don't stop PMing me 😃

love
deepika

ohh thts alrite with me..hope u read the next part and comment on it n like it !!

-fatima

Originally posted by: kulsumd

Haey dear.

Fantastic fanfic hun.

Character sketch are nice

Ur description of the story is too good hun.

The bonding between ada n sameer is great.

Liked trio friendship too.

Aapke ff ke name ne toh mere confused mind ko is confusion ne aur confused kardiya.😆

And the main theme of the story what have happened between ada n zaid before 8yrs..??[:S]n after reading preet's thought im wondering more..😉

The fb was superb..

Liked zoya n sameer scene too.

Continue soo0oon with the longer update hun.

❤️kulsum❤️

hey kulsum,

thnx a lot dear ..finally u read it 😉
hmm thnx fr liking it...
and ur confused...coz of d name ?? ohh why it's not tht confusing also k it'll confuse u more... 😉
yeah 8 yrs...bt dnt worry u wont get to knw so soon wat was d rsn...n hence the name...
and longer update.... 😕 ....aare yaar mere saare updates chotu hote hain...kya karein lets try if i can manage...!!..

-fatima

hey i've finally updated my fifth chap...do read it and comment !!

Chap 5: Merriment


The whole household was waking up stirring with the hustle-bustle of the engagement, excited guests chattering and children giggling; the whole house was lit in a celebration mode. Preet's parents as well as Ada's granny wanted a full fledged traditional engagement ceremony first and later on wedding with all the pomp. Everyone was in site the bride fretting over her dress and zoya calming her down, muskaan bantering with the servants and gaurav and Sameer were late as usual…zaid had been out for two days on the pretext of some personal work.

The day had just begun to rise and the sun sprinkled its soft rays on her lovely delicate form. A sweet smile played on her lips and she was lost in her faraway dreamland with her prince charming. Suddenly, the cold water flushed her dream and she woke up irking. "Bro can't you find just another way to wake up your darling sister??" Ada said, annoyingly Oh! My sweetie I was just taking revenge from you nothing more dear, Sameer added cheekily and went out of the room leaving behind a blazed Ada. Oh! Keep a check on yourself ada …don't think so such that even your dreams revolve around it, you can't survive another heartbreak dear, ada sighed as she got up and got ready for the day ahead.

The cold November evening mist concealed the sleepy hill station; the lights illuminated in the background and added a touch to the serene placid nature. Soon after the couple was standing at the alter gazing each other with nothing but love in each others eyes, soon the stare broke as Prachi Khanna gaurav's mom summoned everyone to gather around for the engagement ceremony. The gorgeous couple stood facing each other and shying to face others. On the far right corner of the bride stood ada watching her friends bond till eternity; oh! How she wished she could be there instead of preet and zaid as her companion for life…..she had cherished this dream for long, suddenly she snapped out of her reverie with the sound of claps and she mingled with everyone and later joined her friends in pulling the new couple's leg, of how they used to proudly joke,
"Me and gaurav?? Falling in love!! Are you guys joking?? We are so very contrasting in nature…"

and now the same friends were moving ahead to embark on a new journey together; and ada again slipped into her virtual world.

On the other extreme corner zaid was busy stealing glances of ada every now and then, "Long dusky eyelashes rested on her flushed cheeks, a sweet smile played on her curved lips her jet black waist long hair were let loose today and above all…. her peacock blue coloured sari with silver work and silver chandelier earrings added to the beauty. She looked like an angel descended on earth …so gorgeous and so innocent….a man would be mad not to fall in love with her and despite the fact she was a "romantic idealist" (as zaid had labeled her) she was a perfect combination of beauty with brains; a blend of both emotional and practical. Suddenly the music brought zaid out of his starring session." What the hell was I doing?? Checking a girl out and that too ada?? Am I out of my mind?? What if she comes to know about my feelings for her?? Oh! Dear lord help me in keeping a check on myself and my traitor heart which always somersaults when it sees ada. I can't let her come close to me she'll probably hate me more if she knows my dreadful past…yes it's a dreadful full of pretence and deception….she'll be more distant than as of now, I can't be that irrepressible I need to hold on to my feelings for at least one more week or so, like I've been doing for the past two weeks…then it'll be over I'll be gone and I will not return hopefully", thinking all this zaid drifted back away from his thoughts and mingled with everyone savoring the party.

Fatima ... you are simply wonderful .... the way you described zaid's and ada's emotions ... is just wonderful ... it's a beautiful story ... continue soon and keep prompting me whenever you update .... 😊

Hey Fatima

hey,it was great........zaid still feels something for ada.....wow!!!!!!!!...wud love to read your next update😊

hey fatima!
firstly m really sorry for the late review...was quite busy..
I Loved the update!
U expressed Zaid n Ada's emotions really well....!!
So finally engagement has happened.
Now m quite confused zaid has a dreadful past n he doesnt want ada to knw abt it....m waiting eagerly for the secrets to be revealed....Cont soon...!
Thanks for the PM

Luv
ZeeJay!:)

Originally posted by: sonam961986

Fatima ... you are simply wonderful .... the way you described zaid's and ada's emotions ... is just wonderful ... it's a beautiful story ... continue soon and keep prompting me whenever you update .... 😊

thnx di,

im really glad u liked the story...n their emotions n feelings....
and sure i'll update soon....n wait fr ur comments 😊

-fatima