A Lovely Misunderstanding(Mayur FF) Updated pg 26

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: VampirePrincess
Hi dear:)
I am shocked...truly am.[;o]
So Zaid and Ada had a thing going on..n they broke up and its been 8 years OMG!
thts an amazing plot!!👏
i loved the lines...u wrote them?

"Where ever you are,
What ever you do;
I'll always be here waiting for you,
And how much ever my heart breaks…
You'll always find me waiting for you!"
Beautiful⭐️

How must Zaid be feeling i wonder....i am eagerly waiting for his take on the whole scenario...Ada still misses him...and if only Zaid feels same they can be together again😊 but...i think u have something special in store for us.
Some twists n all😉
Am loving the story dear...n as its ur first! u r doing a really fab job!👏

Its a pleasure to read this one!:)

Continue soon...!
Thanks for the PM

Luv
ZeeJay..!:):)

thnx fr d comment dear !!
hmm yeah thy had smthng goin on bt technically not... 😉

no i din rite these lines....smone else wrote !!
yup n zaid wil enter soon ...
hopefully u'll like zaid too ...

-Fatima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: ShelDev
Hey there
Wow awesome update...

Could it be possible for you to make the updates a little longer? You write so well & it's always a pleasure to read your updates...longer updates would be heartily accepted....😆

So Ada & Zaid had a past...hmm..interesting...

looking forward to him coming back...

Pls continue soon

Thanks for the PM

hey thnx a lot dear,

fr d comment ...hmm n longer update.. 😲 lets c if i can manage..coz i've kept evrythng short sweet n crispy....hope u don't mind...but if i can make d updates ny longer i'll try my best !!

and i'll b posting my third part soon hope u'll enjoy it !! 😊

-Fatima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: deepikavasudeva
hey gr8 start. i m in for this....
continue soon and plz add me to ur pm list!!

hey thnx !!
yeah i'll continue soon...hope i'll get encouraging comments then too 😉

-Fatima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: bhoomikauttam

HI Fatima,

I read the two parts.. really nice and its not slow as well.. quitea speed in the story graph whcih i like.. the flash back part in hte second one made me feel its more isntersting..so where is Zaid.. i like the way the story is progressing..

Sorry for late in comment.. I read and foudn this stroy very nice..ur first atempt must say a very very good one.. it doesnt look like ur first attempt..

so Ada ..hmm lets see when she meets Zaid in present.. and Sameer is so nice he is her bro.. the three friends. hmm preet marriage.. ok.. will look forward ot read the story when i get tie in hand..tc

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hey bhoomi di,

thnx a lot fr ur comment...i really appreciate it !!
hmm yeah its true i've never written a story apart frm short articles or poems ...
hoping my first attempt to be gud..!!..😊

hope i get reviews from u...it'll help me a lot in d long run !
tc

-Fatima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: kweetrockstar
omg
chapter 2 was kind of a shocker
poor Ada n Zaid
i loved the lines
thanks so much for the pm

pooja

hey thnx pooja,

for ur lovely comment it's very ...i cnt describe d feeling bt its nice to c ppl read ur work n appreciate it encourages me coz i nevr thot ppl mite read it...bit pessimistic i knw bt wat to do..it happens at tymes...

and i hope u'll enjoy d further parts too 😊

-Fatima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#26

well this d third chap finally !!

Chap 3: Surreal

flashback in magenta
present in green

"Everything is a mystery inside a mystery, Unfold it and again it's a mystery." Well this is the way friends and acquaintances described zaid ….an enigma. The more you tried to understand him and his personality the more you seem to become confused. Not everyone knew zaid to the core, not even Sameer and Gaurav seem who were his best friends only one knew how he was and now the fear of facing her again gripped him again and again. Standing at the door he travelled back to his past………

"Zaid what are you up to now?? Ada fumed or rather was very curious to know what her dear buddy was up to, she was tired of his pranks and mischievous nature he was fourteen!! yet behaved childish at times with her so that she listens and complies to his silly demands…….but zaid was in no mood to stop. He slowly blindfolded her, taking her small delicate hands in his own took her to a place and Ada silently obeyed him.

On reaching he opened her blindfold and she was spellbound by the beauty of the place.

Never in the wildest or the most pleasant of all dreams had she seen such a beautiful place, the view was breathtaking! They were inside a cave kind of place and there was a waterfall and trees and the birds chirping and stones were lying nearby, the water rushing through the pebbles made such a sweet sound...pure soothing music indeed and the sun reflected brightly illuminating the cave. The place was so serene and ethereal. After what seemed like aeons zaid broke the silence and spoke,

"Loved the place Ada?" Ada just nodded her head in affirmation it seemed as if she forgot to speak, zaid continued speaking…"you know I love this place, mom and I used to come here at times and now I come her occasionally when I feel low or remember mom and the best part is this place is so secluded that no one knows about it… (pause)… you're the first person I bought here… (pause)….you are special Ada; now and forever! Ada could not listen more, tears were spilling from her eyes and she hugged zaid tightly……"

Just then the door opened and zaid came out of his trance and he entered the house. His eyes searched for her and finally brown eyes met the black ones staring at him from a distance, a bubble of joy started forming in his heart but he still had a rough look on his face ….No I can't let loose of myself, I can't afford to be vulnerable and that too at this time…my years of hard work won't go down the drain, I won't melt…I won't become the old zaid again …never! He thought as he entered the house and was greeted by everyone.

But it was as his eyes and heart had betrayed him and he scanned the whole room and finally rested his eyes on hers…and was stealing glances from the corner of his eyes noticing each and everything as if scanning her from head to toe and registering her in his mind. She still looked as innocent as ever… there was a light glint in her eyes but then there was something else too like as if she were hiding some pain or sadness deep within, zaid pondered long enough ….only to be stopped by his sane and rational mind to concentrate on others rather than her and he immersed himself in the conversation with preet and gaurav.

There was lot to happen …after all full four weeks were awaiting, thought zaid dryly …as he engrossed himself into others.

Edited by charming.angel - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago

#27

Hey Fatima:)
I LoveD the update specially the Flashback, i cud imagine the whole scenario...its like wow, breathtakingly beautiful.
and ur style of writing is fab.⭐️
I imagine mohit and sanaya as zaid and Ada :D
4 weeks is supercool..but will it be 4 weeks? wat if sumthing happens before that..hmm m excited for the whole wedding bg to start and ofcoz the convo b/w the two..how wud it be?am curious:)
So zaid has toughened himself up...a lil harsh, from the prankster and by the fb i assume romantic.
What made him change....again m curious...this f is very interesting..!

Do cont soon.
Thanks for the pm

Luv
ZeeJay!😊

Edited by VampirePrincess - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago

#28

hey Fatima That was a great update....

Looking forward to the next one

Pls continue soon

Thanks

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Posted: 15 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: charming.angel

hey thnx pooja,

for ur lovely comment it's very ...i cnt describe d feeling bt its nice to c ppl read ur work n appreciate it encourages me coz i nevr thot ppl mite read it...bit pessimistic i knw bt wat to do..it happens at tymes...

and i hope u'll enjoy d further parts too 😊

-Fatima

hey Fatima
i agree with u
it feels awesome for a writer to be appreciated
n when u have it, u r really complimented
n guess what?
pessimistism (i dont know if its a word or no, lol) is not tolerated on IF,
u'll always be welcomed with warm hands to write ur heart out
i know i'll definitely enjoy further parts too

love
pooja