A Lovely Misunderstanding(Mayur FF) Updated pg 26

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AnotherAdmirer

@AnotherAdmirer

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Hey dear!
amazing update:)
I am waiting for Zaid to join them soon.
So is the story gonna have a wedding background tht is preet and gaurav's marriage, it will be fun, i love this plot actually, to meet someone special in a wedding and bond with them, coz evrything i mean all sorts of emotions add up, and ofcoz they r always dressed beautifully!:)

Liked Sameer he's sweet:) and ada had tears of joy in her eyes, thts very touching, seems tht she's a lil vulnerable..or emotional kind of person:)

I hope to get the Zaid and Ada first meet scene soon! eventhough if its not love at first sight, it wil have its own magic m sure..:)

continue soon:)
&& I like ur style of writing..!:)
thnx for the pm
*edited*
I just noticed the name...sounds cool! so wats the misunderstanding..curious to knw😉
Luv
ZeeJay!

Edited by VampirePrincess - 15 years ago

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Pooja

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

hey
congrats for ur new ff
plz do pm me too

pooja

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Escapist

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

@vampireprincess: thnx for ur encouraging comments !! hope u like d further parts to.

@kweetrockstar: thnx ..sure i'll add u !!

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Escapist

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

chap 2: Homecoming

flashback in blue
present in green

Three days had passed since Sameer arrived and he was having a great time here and today his second buddy was coming back. Gaurav and Sameer's joys knew no bounds! They couldn't believe he was returning to Darjeeling; their home town where they were born and brought up, the most cherished and amazing days of their life 'their childhood' had been spent here ……… Eight years! A really long time to be away from a place where you heart is! And today he was coming back to the place where he and his heart belonged. Everyone was waiting for him to arrive amidst all this someone was……….

"Don't you dare talk to me like that mister; I'm warning you ... the words escaped her mouth no sooner she heard him. He was accusing her for their fallout, as if she was the only one at fault wherein he was equally responsible."

'Zaid' the name was enough to take Ada back to her past. He was a good and a dear friend with whom she could be her true self, though he was Sameer's friend Ada and Zaid shared a special bond! But then one day everything changed and the Ada's world shattered…. They grew apart; the only memories remaining were of a conceited and an arrogant man who always found ways to fight with her, the condition worsened each day and it was impossible for them to stand each other it felt as if a cold war was raging between them. Yet deep down in some corner of her heart Ada hoped that things would change as she still missed him and cared for him. And whenever she was nostalgic, the words came rushing back to her…

"Where ever you are,
What ever you do;
I'll always be here waiting for you,
And how much ever my heart breaks…
You'll always find me waiting for you!"

This is what Zaid always used to say her whenever they had a fight and those words still echoed loud, but the only difference was now no one would come but still Ada had a forlorn hope that he would come back one day………..

Suddenly, the sound of foot steps bought Ada back to reality from her reverie and she wiped the tear rolling down her cheek, she could not afford to be so vulnerable; she had to be strong, thinking this she plastered a smile on her face.

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AnotherAdmirer

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Hi dear:)
I am shocked...truly am.[;o]
So Zaid and Ada had a thing going on..n they broke up and its been 8 years OMG!
thts an amazing plot!!👏
i loved the lines...u wrote them?

"Where ever you are,
What ever you do;
I'll always be here waiting for you,
And how much ever my heart breaks…
You'll always find me waiting for you!"
Beautiful⭐️

How must Zaid be feeling i wonder....i am eagerly waiting for his take on the whole scenario...Ada still misses him...and if only Zaid feels same they can be together again😊 but...i think u have something special in store for us.
Some twists n all😉
Am loving the story dear...n as its ur first! u r doing a really fab job!👏

Its a pleasure to read this one!:)

Continue soon...!
Thanks for the PM

Luv
ZeeJay..!:):)

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Shelina

@ShelDev

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

Hey there

Wow awesome update...

Could it be possible for you to make the updates a little longer? You write so well & it's always a pleasure to read your updates...longer updates would be heartily accepted....😆

So Ada & Zaid had a past...hmm..interesting...

looking forward to him coming back...

Pls continue soon

Thanks for the PM

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The-chosen-one

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

hey gr8 start. i m in for this....
continue soon and plz add me to ur pm list!!

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Bhoomi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

HI Fatima,

I read the two parts.. really nice and its not slow as well.. quitea speed in the story graph whcih i like.. the flash back part in hte second one made me feel its more isntersting..so where is Zaid.. i like the way the story is progressing..

Sorry for late in comment.. I read and foudn this stroy very nice..ur first atempt must say a very very good one.. it doesnt look like ur first attempt..

so Ada ..hmm lets see when she meets Zaid in present.. and Sameer is so nice he is her bro.. the three friends. hmm preet marriage.. ok.. will look forward ot read the story when i get tie in hand..tc

luvu

Bhoomi