Your name across my heart Raj Aamna FF Last Part - Page 5

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Kakoon takes all the kids for picnic.They all are enjoying. Kajal is moody.
Kakoon:Kajal,what happened?Why are you not playing with your friends?
Ka:My best friend is my dad.We always go f picnics for & play with each other.I really miss my dad
Kakoon hugs her:Don't worry darling.If your dad is not here,as your mumma i'm here with you to play.
Ka:Yor are my mumma ?
Kakoon is shocked.
Ka:Sometimes i feel that you are my mumma.
Kakoon's eyes rises up.
K:Ok.. we will do something funny.
Ka:will you sing ma'am?
Kakoon smiles:As u wish.
Kakoon sings and dances with Kajal and other kids.
Sujal misses Kajal very much.
His mom:You can't even sit for one moment without Kajal?
His dad:Usually sujal accompanies kajal for picnics.But today he is not there with her,so he is feeling sad. S:i'm going to see Kajal.i'm going to their place.
Dad:Sujal,this is a children's picnic.Then why should you go?
S:No dad,I will go and play with Kajal.
His mom smiles.
Sujal starts the car.
Kakoon and Kajal play with balls.The ball starts rolling.Kajal follows it.It falls into the lake.To get the ball,Kajal jumps into it. Kakoon is shocked:Kajalllllll....Kakoon jumps into the lake.


All are shocked to see both Kakoon and Kajal in the water.Kajal is drowning.Kakoon saves her.All are relieved.Kajal Is ok.But Kakoon is shivering heavily and she faints.Her forehead hits a stone.Blood starts flowing.People are shocked.

Sujal reaches there searching for Kajal. Their principal goes near Sujal.
S:What happened?Why there is a crowd? Is everything ok?
Principal got tensed:Mr.Sujal,we are so sorry to tell you that kajal...
S:What happened to Kajal?
P:She drowned in the water.
Sujal is shocked:What?
P:but she is ok now. Kajal goes to him crying:Dad...
He sees her wet dress. Sujal shouts :How irresponsible!You people did'nt even bother to change her wet dress.She will catch fever.
P:We are sorry.We are tensed about another thing.
S:Where is Kakoon?She assured that she will take care of my daughter.Then where is she?She is so irresponsible.I'm so foolish to trust her.Its the biggest mistake in my life.
P:Please don't talk ill of her without knowing anything.She did'nt even think about her life when she jumped into the lake to save Kajal.She fainted.
Sujal is shocked:What?
P:Yes Mr.Sujal..Only she had the guts to save Kajal,because she loves her that much.
Sujal looks at Kajal.
Ka:Yes dad,Kakoon ma'am only saved me.
S:i'm so sorry.I misunderstood Kakoon.I want to thank her.Where is she?
P:Kakoon fainted.
Sujal is shocked. Another teacher comes and tells:Ma'am,Kakoonji is not opening her eyes.
They get tensed. Sujal goes with them near Kakoon.He felt discomfort seeing Kakoon lying unconscious.Her salwar is wet.Sujal takes her in his arms and walks forward.Others are stunned to see it.

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