Your name across my heart Raj Aamna FF Last Part - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
#61
nice part................her mum is like a typical mum................cant blame her but could try to understand sujal........................hope she says yes without any conditions relating with kajal......................cont soon.................
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Your name across my heart Part 8



Mom:I failed before your true love.
Sujal and Kakoon become happy.
Mom:You both taught me that true luv cannot be hidden.
Kakoon's eyes got filled.
She hugs her mom:mumma..
Sujal and Kakoon go out in his car.They go to the beach.They look at the waves.
S:So beautiful.
K:Love is like the never ending waves.
S:You are true.Thats why love is not dying in this world.
K:How can love die?Without love people cannot survive.A person needs true love in life.
S:You are right Kakoon.You are my true love.
Kakoon smiles:You are my true love.
Kakoon thinks:Otherwise you would not have reached near me after many years.
Sujal shows her something.Kakoon looks.There were young romantic pairs playing in the water.
Sujal and Kakoon dream about dancing and playing like them with the waves. Both of them had the same dream.
S:What were you thinking?
K:Nothing.You?
S:Nothing.
Sujal and Kakoon are in the car.
S:I have not told you a truth.
Kakoon looks at him carefully.
S:I'm not married.Kajal is not my daughter.
Kakoon is shocked. Sujal tells her everything.By that time they reach Kakoon's house.Kakoon felt difficult to face Sujal.She bids Bye soon and goes to her room. She becomes mad about thinking Sujal's words. She thinks:Sujal is not married.Then its sure that i'm not perfect for him.If he was a widower,he would have understood me well.But ...now.. ,if he cumes to know about my truth...
Kakoon gets tensed.

Kakoon thinks:Once i lost Sujal.Again i'm going to lose him.Oh!i can't bear this.Should i tell the truth to Sujal?If i tell,i might lose Sujal.If not,if he comes to know about it...what'll be his reaction?
Kkusum comes:Kakoon,what are you doing? Where all did you go with Sujal?
K:Mumma,i feel headache,we will talk later.
She pretends to be sleeping. Sujal rings her up:Kakoon,there is a party tomorrow at Hotel Green.You have to come.
K:Sujal..should i?
G:What a question!You have to come.Its a party for unmarried couples.
Kakoon feels uncomfortable.
S:Now we are unmarried.We will be married soon.This will be our last chance to attend an unmarried couples' party.
K:But Sujal..
S:No excuse,you have to come.I will be waiting for you.
Sujal waits for Kakoon at the party.All the unmarried couples are dancing. Sujal is alone and sad since Kakoon is not there. But later Kakoon arrives..She has worn a violet sari with black metal ornaments.Garv is very happy. Sujal goes near her:Why did you become late?I got tensed.But now i'm relieved.I'm really happy to see you Kakoon.
Kakoon smiles. Sujal is impressed by her look:First time i'm seeing you in a grand saree.You look like a Queen.
Kakoon smiles.Kakoon looks at the dancing couples. Sujal holds her hand and starts dancing.
S:I will be so lucky to get a wife like you.
Kakoon's eyes rose up.
S:Why tears are there in your eyes?Because of happiness?
Kakoon cries.Sujal is shocked:What happened Kakoon?
She runs out.Sujal runs behind her:Whats the matter Kakoon?You love me no?So you have to share everything with me.I will take out your worries.Tell Kakoon.
K:You don't know anything about me Sujal.You are a handsome young gentleman.So i don't deserve you. You will get better girl.
S:What rubbish!What happened to you?Why are you talking like this?How could you talk like this?You are right.i will get good girls.but nobody can replace you.Because you are my girl.We are made 4 each other.Only u deserve me. But i doubt whether i deserve you.You are such a sweet person.
K:I don't deserve you Sujal.I hid a big secret from u.Because i did'nt want to lose you.Because you are my real love and my only love.
S:Oh Kakoon!
K:I should not have come for this party,because its only for unmarried couples.
S:So why can't u cum?
K:Because……because...i'm not unmarried.
S:What do you mean?
K:I'm already married.
Sujal is shocked.Kakoon turns back as she is not able to face him.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wowowoowwo awesome part oh please ab aur koi dikkat nahi dono ke eak hone mein please update soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#64
are baap re yeh kya bomb phora yaar tune up mein
plz cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65
ye kya?????????????? this was completely unexpected......................cont soon.........................
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Shocking part
Kakoon is married? Sujal is shocked and confused to hear this truth.
please continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67
first toh sorry for late response well i was busy toh iss liye khair thanks dear for pms and humare yah story toh mast chal rahe hai tum toh her post main koi na koi bomb phor rahe ho ab yah kakoon ka pati kahan se agaya well bohat confussion hai toh please jaldi se next part main iss mistrey ko clear karo cant wait love humaira
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68

Friends...I will be more happy if you all comment rather than just pressing the like button

Your name across my heart Part 9


Sujal:Kakoon,what are you telling?Do you know what you told now?
Kakoon:Yes,thats true.
Sujal's eyes rose. Kakoon was crying. She runs away.Sujal becomes sad.He lost his sleep.
The next day,he loses his patience and goes to Kakoon's house.
Sujal asks Kakoon's mom:Kakoon?
Mom: You know right..Kakoon went to school.
S:O!I forgot. I wanted to see Kakoon very badly.So i came here without thinking anything else.
Mom smiles.
S:I will wait inside her room.Let it be a surprise for her.
Mom smiles. He goes to Kakoon room.He sees her photos stuck on the walls. He gets a diary from her room.
S:This is Kakoon's diary.
Sujal goes through it. Love and marriage.
Kakoon has written about her love:I love him deeply.I don't think life is possible without him.I want to tell him about my love.But what if he does'nt love me?I can't think about it in a negative way.
Next day she has written:I still believe that he has a loving heart.I see love in his eyes.Though all the girls in our college are after him,he has'nt fallen for them.He will fall only for true luv.I believe that one day he will understand that i'm his true luv. I will wait for that day.
Kakoon has'nt written his name.So Sujal gets irritated due to over anxiety.

Kakoon has written:"i am shocked that mumma fixed my wedding with another guy."
He cumes to see Kakoon.She is not willing to go near him.But her mom forces her to wear the new salwar and go near him.She wears the new salwar & goes there with pooja's aarthi and prasad.She does'nt look at his face.Her mom gets tensed.
Kkusum:Kakoon is very shy.Thats why she is not looking at you.
He smiles:Hi Kakoon,no need of becoming shy.I'm not a stranger,i'm going to be your husband.
Kakoon is shocked and stares at him.He is cool.He extends his arm:Hi,i'm kshitij.
They shake hands. She goes to her room. Kshitij smiles.
Kakoon tells her mom:Mumma,i don't want this wedding.
Kk:Why?He is such a nice guy
K:I agree.But i don't want to marry him.I want to study.I want to get a job.
Kk:Why?See,kshitij is very rich.You are lucky.Otherwise a middle class girl like you is not going to get a rich hubby.
K:For me,money is not important mumma.I give importance to love.
Kk:Kshitij will love you.
K:Maybe,but i cannot.Why shud i spoil his life?
Kk:Why can't you love him?You will start loving him.
K:No mumma.Love happens once.I'm luving another person.
Mom got shocked.
She shouts:Who is that guy?
Sujal reads:"i told his name."
S:What was his name?Kakoon has'nt written that.oh!
Kakoon's mom slaps her. She cries:mumma,though you beat me,i did not change my decision.
Mom:Is he rich?
K:I don't know.
Mom:Does he love you?
K:I don't know.
Mom:Why?
K:I have not told him that i love him.
Mom:For this kind of silly love you are making so much of fuss?
Kakoon cries:iIm serious mumma.My love is not silly.
Kakoon has written:Its getting delayed.I have to tell him how much i love him.Tomorrow is the last day in college.My last chance to reveal my love.I will tell him that.Sure.
Edited by jasminerahul - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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yaar yah toh bara mazedar part tha sujal is jelous with his own self haaaaaa yaar story toh aik dum mast hai realy her part main aik bomb blast hota hai yaar itne saare raz hain story main star plus ka super duper hit drama hai akta should read and copy this story so that phir se dhang ka koi drama bana sake what say dear love your work for this masaledar story love u humaira
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Ohhh GOD......now this is getting cooler...sujal was the guy kashish loved so much......and tht too since college....!!!!!!!......kya baat hai yr....lossing her 1st true love then...and getting it back in life...tht is pure destiny yr....ofcourse she cnt afford to loose him now...aur uski mom fixed her with some other guy..aur yaha sujal is only getting anxious to know who she loved...just waiting to see his reaction when he gets to knw its him she waited for so much...continue soon dear...waiting to see what happens on the last day of college then....

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