Your name across my heart Raj Aamna FF Last Part - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesome update wow sujal going to take her with him so sweet thank you for this part .
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow very nice part....................kakoon saved kajal without thinking twice and now she unconscious...............cont soon.......very interesting.................
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Posted: 15 years ago
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bohot aacha part haai kakoon aur sujal great plz jaldi se unke beech mein pyaar ke dhun baajao plz cont soon aur thanks for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
nice part
very good
please continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55

Your name across my heart Part 7


Sujal:I'm going to take Kakoon to the hospital.
He keeps her inside the car.He drives the car with lots of tears.She gets admitted in the hospital.Kakoon is having high temperature.The principal informs her mom about it. After sometime,Kakoon opens her eyes.Sujal is relieved.His eyes were filled up with tears.
Kakoon is surprised:Sujal,you are here?
S:Ya..sorry Kakoon,its because of Kajal that you are in this stage.
He cries.
K:No,Sujal.I have to tell u sorry,because i cud'nt take care of your daughter properly.I was careless.
Sujal cries:Thanks a lot Kakoon for saving my daughter's life without even thinking about your own life.I feel that you are her mother.
Kakoon becomes happy that her eyes got filled up with happy tears.
K:This is the greatest achievement in my life.I wish i'm her real mother.
Sujal is surprised. He tells in his mind:Who said that Kajal is not ur real daughter?A mother is the one who loves nda cares for the child more than anyone else.Who else is so much caring to Kajal like you?
Sujal slowly holds her hand.Kakoon never expected it.That time Kakoon's mom Kkusum comes.She is shocked to see it. She:Kakoon..
Sujal takes his hand from her and turns back.
K:Mumma..
Mom cumes and cries holding her hand:Are you ok?
K:Yes mumma.
Mom:To save someone's child,you did this?
Sujal is very sad. He thinks:Thats true.Kajal is not Kakoon's child.Then also...no one lse would have done this.Kakoon,you are great.
He wipes his tears. He goes out of the room and stands near the door.Kakoon understands that Sujal is hurt. She becomes angry:Mumma,how rude you were to Sujal.Kajal is not someone else's daughter.She is my daughter.
Mom is shocked. Sujal is touched by it.
Mom:What did u tell?
K:Mumma,you know my feelings more than anyone else. Then why are you behaving like this?
Mom:I know that you love Sujal a lot.You love his kid too.But Sujal ...whats his attitude?Does he love you sincerely?Will he marry you?He might throw you away to protect his status in the society as we are middle class people.. he is a high class guy.
Kakoon did'nt know what to tell.
K:Sujal accepts me or not..I will love him till my death.i will be his daughter's mom forever.That I know.
Sujal is touched by Kakoon's sincerety.
Sujal moves from there.
He is thrilled:Kakoon loves me!
He is very happy.
K:There were many obstacles that separated me from Sujal,but still no one could take Sujal's position in my heart.Thats true love..right mumma?


Kajal goes to Sujal:Dad,i want to see Kakoon ma'am..
S:Ok..i will take you there.
He goes to the room with Kajal.Kajal and Kakoon sit very close to each other.Kkusum mom did'nt like it.
S:I will buy medicine for Kakoon.
Mom:No need.For that who are you to Kakoon? Only her student's dad.Nothing else.I will by medicine for Kakoon.I'm her mom and its my duty.We are not that poor.We have money for medicine.We don't need your kindness.Because we are not beggars.So please leave us alone.
Sujal is really sad. Kakoon is shattered. Sujal takes kajal in his arms and goes out of the room.Kakoon could'nt stop them at that point of moment.

Sujal remembers Kkusum's words about suspecting him.He gets irritated thinking about it.Sujal goes with Kajal to school.He looks for Kakoon.He did'nt see her.
He asks the principal:Ma'am,Kakoon?
P:Kakoon is on leave.Her mom is stubborn.She is scared tosend her toschool after that accident.She wants Kakoon to resign her job.
S:what?
P:Yes,its very sad to lose a good teacher like her.
Sujal thinks:Its not because of the accident that Kakoon's mom is behaving like this.She is sacred of my presense.I have to clear her misunderstanding.
He was determined and goes to Kakoon's house.Kakoon and her mom are shocked.
:Kakoon,are you planning to resign your job?
Kakoon :No..
Her mom:Yes,she is..
S:Why?Is it because of me?
Kakoon's eyes got risen.
Mom:Yes,how can we trust a high class guy like you.You people use middle class girls even if you have a family.
S:You are misunderstanding me.Believe me,I have not thought like that.
Mom:Enough Mr.Sujal Sachdev.You can leave.
S : I will leave,but I will clear wipe out your misunderstandings about me.If i marry Kakoon,will your misunderstandings go?
Kakoon and mom are shocked.
Mom:What?
S:I want to marry Kakoon.Please give us permission to have a good family lifePlease…...
Mom goes inside her room.Kakoon follows her:Mumma,please throw away your misunderstandings about Sujal.He is a very nice gentleman.
Mom comes out of her room and stares at Sujal.Sujal and Kakoon get tensed about her reaction.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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bohot aacha up likha aapne sk are getting married
plz cont soon and pm me when u up
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesome update !
Loved it !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome , mind blowing , let them married please please .
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Posted: 15 years ago
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good going sujal.......ye kakoon ki mom bhi na....she shud trust sujal now.....ekleast ek chance to de...bt i think there is more to this....sab kuch uljha uljha sa hai...how does kakoon knw sujal....what is happening....m waiting for tht to un reveal....continue soon....tc....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Great part
Sujal feels very happy to know that kakoon loves him. But is upset by seeing Kusum's behavour towards him.
But finally he goes to Kakoon's house and tells Kusum that he wants to marry Kakoon.
Waiting to see what kusum will say. please continue soon

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