Your name across my heart Raj Aamna FF Last Part - Page 4

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesome update !
Loved it !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome part i love kajal she is so sweet.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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sorry dear cudnt comment earlier.....both the parts were gr8....loved the way their relationship is going....slowly slowly.....bt ye kya ho rha hai..i had guessed tht kashish wud b knowing sujal n kajal....i mean shayad wo tashu ko aur background story janti ho....bt she herself is falling for sujal now.....infact she is imagining herself as his romantic wife....awwww...cute....n poor thing was embarresed thinking how wud sujal react....par haal to dono tarah ek hi hai...lolz....now this is good...sujal invited her to bday party...ab aage kyaa....wud b waiting for next part.....continue soon..
waise i dnt even knw ur name as yet....hehe...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
Thanks a lot.But Aamna is not Kashish here,but Kakoon.My name is Jasmine
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Posted: 15 years ago
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bohot aacha up hai so kakoon is falling for s good
i know kakoon is nice person
plz cont soon dear and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36

Your name across my heart Part 5



Kakoon goes for Kajal's birthday party.The house was decorated grandly.Kakoon has worn a black party wear.Sujal is floored by her beauty.He can't take his eyes off her.Kajal Is thrilled to see Kakoon and she goes near her.
Ka:Hi Ma'am...i was waiting for you eagerly.
Kakoon smiles:Really?
Kakoon gives her birthday present:Happy birthday Kajal..
Ka:Thankyou ma'am..
Sujal becomes happy:Thanks a lot.
K:For what?
S:For coming here.You know…when you came Kajal was very happy.
Kakoon asks in her mind:Only Kajal was happy?
Sujal in his mind:Not only Kajal,even i was really happy.
Kajal introduces Kakoon to her grandparents. They all like her very much.
Grandmother to Sujal:She is a very nice girl.She loves Kajal very much.
Sujal smiles:You are right mom.
Kajal:Dad,you know Kakoon ma'am sings well.She has sung a lullaby for me.
Her grandparents are very happy.
S:Then Kakoon..please sing a song.
K:I simply sang in the class for kids.I'm not a trained singer.
Grandmom:Its ok.Your voice is very sweet.That means you sing well.
Ka:Please sing ma'am...
Kakoon sings a birthday song for Kajal.Sujal and Kakoon imagine dancing with each other.
Grandmom:Amazing!
Granddad:It was really nice ...
S:You won our heart Kakoon.
K:Whose heart?
Sujal becomes shy.
Grandmom notices it.
S:Now its the time to cut the cake.
Kajal is thrilled. Kajal cuts birthday cake. She gives the first piece to Sujal. She gives cake pieces to her grandparents.
S:Kajal..give a piece to Kakoon ma'am.
Ka:Sure dad.For that you don't have to remind me.Afterall she is my favourite teacher.
Everyone smiles. She gives the biggest piece to Kakoon:Ma'am,a special piece for you.
Everyone is surprised. Kajal whispers to Kakoon:You asked no whether dad talk about you.He always talks about you.
Kakoon becomes happy. Sujal goes near her:Kajal loves you very much.Thats why she gave the biggest cake piece to you.
Kakoon smiles. She asks in her mind:Only kajal loves me?
S:How can i tell you that i also love you Kakoon?
After the party,Kakoon begins to go.
Grandmom:Sujal,you drop her home.
K:No thank you aunty..
Grandmom:It's really late now.Sujal will drop you.

Sujal and Kakoon get inside the car.He plays the romantic song 'Tere naam..'{Tere naam}.
Kakoon and Sujal are shy to look at each other.
Sujal:How was the party?
K:It was really good..very colourful.I really enjoyed it.I really admire you for arranging such a colourful party.Kids prefer colourful party.
S:Thankyou.I will do anything fo Kajal.Life has become impossible without her.You know.. i was a crack teenager with lots of foolish dreams.
Kakoon is having a funny smile.
S:I never thought that I will change like this.I never thought that i can become a responsible dad.Circumstances change people a lot.
K:Thats true. You are a wonderful dad.You are everything fo Kajal.
S:Yes,when her mom went,i did'nt know what to do.But i had a strong determination .. its my duty to look after her like a sweet dad.
K:How was Kajal's mom?
Sujal's face becomes dull:She was a very nice lady.
K:How does your wife look like?
Sujal did'nt speak.
K:I'm sorry.. i hurt u..
S:its ok.
K:we are taking all the kids for outing.One day trip.You will send Kajal no?
S:Ofcourse,when you are there why should i be scared?I trust you.I'm sure that you will look after Kajal well.Sometimes i feel that you are her mom.
Kakoon is really happy. Kakoon becomes sad when they reach her house:We reached my house so fast.otherwise she could have spent more time with him.
Kakoon gets out of the car:Thanks,bye...
S:Ok,take care.
Kakoon smiles.She turns back.Her mom Kkusum was staring at her.
K:Mom,he is Kajal's dad.
Kk:Ok.
Kakoon is not able to sleep.Kkusum enters her room:Why are you not able to sleep?
K:Mumma..Nothing.
Kk:Are you thinking about Kajal's dad?What will his wife think?
K:Mumma!What rubbish!But you are right.I was thinking about her dad.But i'm not doing anything wrong.His wife is no more.
Kk:But do you think that he will accept you?
K:I don't know.
Kk:Then why are you deaming?
K:Do you know who he is?He is Sujal mumma.
Kkusum is shocked:You mean that guy..?
K:Yes,Sujal is my first and last love.I cannot forget him.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey.......now this is getting mysterious......kakoon knows sujal...n loves him him too....n b4 she met him as kajal's dad....but i have a feeling she knows tashu too...n the whole story abt her....leaving tht...this part was real good....the party went well....even sujal's parents are impressed with kakoon now(i always forget its nt kashish!!)....aur kajal to pehle se hi thi...she gave kakoon a special piece....n an even special msg..tht dad talks abt u a lot...hehe...thn grandmother asking sujal to drop her home was good....grandmother ke irade kafi nek lagte hai...n kusum's entry here...even she knows a lot i guess...n kashish...sorry kakoon was r8...she is nt doing anythign wrong...ab wo sujal hai yr....how can some1 stop herself frm liking him...to kya hua if he is a father...uski wife bhi ho jati to kya ho jata....sujal to sujal he hai na...me bhi openly lift de rhi hoti....keep going kakoon.... continue soon..tc...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pehli baar mera comment kahi 1st aya.........thank u every1.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!................meri barso ki murad puri ho gyi............. ....n thank u jasmine for such a good story....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Mind Blowing She also love him this is clear but some thing is blocking her way , I wish they meet so much and share all things thanks a lot for so sweet and cute part kajal is so sweet girl ..you are so sweet and great writer dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40
So both love each other !
But can't express it !
Lovely update !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !

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