Your name across my heart Raj Aamna FF Last Part

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Aamna's character's name will be Kakoon

Your name across my heart Part 1

PART-1....Sujal is a guy who has a dream girl in life.He has not seen her.But he is waiting to see her. He is close to his bhabhi.
Sujal:i'm sure that one day i will meet her.
Tashu supports him:Its good to have dreams about your lady love.Best of luck.
Sujal smiles:Thanks bhabhi.
Unexpectedly Sujal's brother Aryaman dies in an accident. Everyone becomes moody.Sujal is not in a stage to dream.
Months passed.Everyone decides to make Sujal marry Tashu. They were shocked.
Sujal shouts:No..i can't marry bhabhi.i can't see her as my wife.She will be always my respectful bhabhi.
Tashu sheds tears. Their family members keep on forcing them for the marriage. Both Sujal and Tashu become really upset.
Tashu thinks:Poor Sujal.Because of me, his sweet dreams are breaking..
Tashu cries.
Tashu seems to be missing.Everyone becomes upset.Sujal finds a letter in his diary.
S:Oh...its written by Tashu bhabhi.
He reads it:Sujal..i don't want to break ur dreams.I don't want you to be sad because of me.I don't want to hurt you.So i'm going...Please don't follow me.But please look after my child.
Sujal sweats.He goes searching for Tashu.But he fails. He is tired and sleepy.The two year old child{Kaajal} of Tashu comes and holds his hand.Sujal gets upset about the child. He gets touched by the innocent smile of the child.He smiles at her with pity.
He:I'm leaving my dreams for you.Today onwards you are my child.
He hugs the child.
Two years passed.
she comes running towards Sujal:Papa....
Sujal:what my darling daughter?
Kajal:i want to put kajal.Please put it for me..
Sujal:why not?
He does that for her.
S:You look so pretty today.Today is your first day in the school.You will be the beauty of the school.
Kajal:Really?
S:yes..
Kajal smiles.
S:So cute..
He remembers Tashu and Aryaman pampering her when she was small. His eyes got filled up with tears.
Kajal:papa,why are you crying?
S:Nothing daughter..
Sujal carries her in his arms to the school.He tickles her.Kajal and Sujal laugh.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Omg sooooooooooo sweet and cute Kajal is so sweet she called Him Papa awww thank you so much for pm
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very sweet part, liked the first part
continue soon
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hey damn cuteeeeeeeeee..............wht a concept.....an excellent 1st part.....will b waiting for the 2nd part.......plzzzz pm me when you update....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice start !
Cont. soon !
Waiting for next !
Thnx for pm !
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cute start....................cont soon dear and thanks for the pm......................
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice start...very different.
sujal leaves his dreams behind to fullfill his duties towards Kajal. She loves him the most and for him she is his world.
please continue soon
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice part !!
Continue soon !!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Your name across my heart Part 2


Kajal was very happy to see the kids around her.
Sujal:Did you like your school?
Kajal:The school building is very nice..
S smiles:You will like the atmosphere also.
Kajal:Dad,how is the school life?Is it jolly?
S:Ofcourse daughter..
Kajal:How was your school life?
Sujal laughs. He thinks about his naughty school days.He feels funny.
S:My school days were extremely funny...
K:Will my school life be like that?
S:No doubt..
He carries her to the class.After seating her there ,he kisses her:Papa will come to pick you up after the class.bye....
Kajal could'nt react. When Sujal goes,Kajal's eyes get filled up with tears.She loses her control and cries.All the kids were looking at her. Suddenly someone comes and wipes her tears. " Don't cry baby...smile..you will become really pretty".
Kajal looks at that person.She saw the smiling face of that person.
That person was Kakoon.She has worn an orange salwar with red dots and a green shawl. Kakoon smiles:Smile baby..Slowly slowly kajal smiles.
K:Wow!what a beautiful smile.You look like a princess.
Kajal becomes very happy:who are you?
Kakoon :Great question.
She looks at everyone:Children,i'm your class teacher.
Kajal becomes happy:Really?Whats your name ma'am?
K:my name is Kakoon.Whats your name?
Kajal:Kajal.
K:Wow!Thats a sweet name.You are so lucky to get such a nice name.
Ka:Is it true...?Am i lucky?
K:Ofcourse.
Ka:But usually people say that i'm unlucky.Some people call me orphan.
Kakoon becomes serious.She becomes sad about her.
K:Where do you stay?
Ka:In a big house.
Kakoon smiles.She thinks:She may not be an orphan..i hope so.
K:who all are there in your house?
Ka:In my house...my dad is there...Grandfather....Grandmother….
Everyone is there.
K:You did'nt tell about your mom..
Kajal becomes dull.Kakoon notices it. Kakoon asks slowly:whats your mother's name?
kajal:My mom's name is...her name is...
K:Tell kajal..
Kajal:Her name is mamma.
K:what?
Everyone laughs.
Kajal cries.Kakoon becomes upset.
She consoles her:Don't cry Kajal.I told you no..You are the most luckiest person in this world.So you should not cry.
Kajal:Really?
K:Yes baby doll.
Kajal smiles.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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heyyyyyy damn cute.......kajal is such a cute baby.....bechari was crying so frequently....itna chota sa baby......kashish was consoling her so well....she is sucha good teacher......i dnt think kajal had tht good a first day after all having to face all those questions......bt it was nice meeting kashish ofcourse.....n sujal n her elationship is adorable...he is parenting her well....do continue soon....tc...

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