Your name across my heart Raj Aamna FF Last Part - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
#21
i liked ur story
i think kakon is tashu
i am waiting for the next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
#22
bohot sweet part haai yaar kaju ne sujal ko kakoon se milwaya
kakoon is perfect for kaju
plz ab jaldi se cont karo and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
amazing part
kajal and kakoons scenes were really good
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24
ur fic is nice..................yeh kakoon sujal ko pehle se he janti hai kia???????????????plz con't soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25
Nice part
Sujal is happy to see that Kajal has enjoyed her day in school. But he gets shocked when Kajal starts asking questions about her mother., He has no answer to giver her and so just distracts her.
He goes to meet Kakoon ma'am and thinks that she is her dream girls but then stops himself from thinking further because he is now Kajals father. But why did Kakoon react this way when she sees Sujal.
please continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26

Your name across my heart Part 4



Kakoon's mind is full of Sujal.She cries.
The next day… She can't concentrate on teaching.She is always looking at Kajal.Kajal has an innocent smile on her face.Kakoon dreams herself as Sujal's wife.She makes breakfast for her family.Kajal is their lovely daughter in the dream.Kakoon is a caring mom and a romantic wife.
Sujal:We are so lucky to get you in our life.You are the most wonderful wife,daughter in law and mother. Kakoon smiles. Suddenly Kajal calls her.Kakoon wakes up from her dream.
Ka:Will u teach us a song?
K:O sure.
Kakoon sings a lullaby.It was meant for Kajal.All the students are impressed by it.
When the bell rings,the kids go out of the class. When Kajal begins to go out,Kakoon calls her.
Ka:What ma'am?
K: Did your dad talk anything about me?
Kajal thinks ..Kakoon is eagerly waiting for the reply.
Ka:You know ma'am...
K:Ya...?
Ka:Actually i don't remember whether he had asked about u.
Kakoon becomes moody. Kajal runs out.
Sujal is waiting for her.Sujal's eyes are looking for Kakoon.Kakoon comes out.Sujal smiles at her.Kakoon is so excited that she smiles back. He begins to walk towards Kakoon.
Kajal:Dad,we will go soon..
Sujal:Ok..
Both of them get inside the car.Kakoon becomes sad. Sujal looks at Kakoon before starting the car.So Kakoon becomes happy. The car starts..Kakoon looks at the car till it goes away from her eyes. Sujal:Sweety..did Kakoon ma'am tell anything about dad?
He has only least hope for a positive answer.
Kajal:ya....
Sujal is surprised:What?
Ka:Today Kakoon ma'am was talking about you.She asked whether you talked about her to
me?
Sujal is thrilled:What did you tell?
Ka:i said… i don't remember.
Sujal smiles:If she asks again asks about it,you should tell that dad asked about you.Ok?
Ka:Ok..

Kakoon stands at the school compound.She thinks:Where is kajal?
Sujal's car comes.Kajal comes out of the car.Kakoon becomes happy. She expects Sujal to come out of the car.But nobody else comes out of the car.The car goes away.Kakoon becomes sad.Kajal comes to her:Goodmorning ma'am.
Kakoon smiles:Good morning Kajal.
Ka:Ma'am,i told dad..
K:what?
Ka:That you asked whether he talks about you at home.
Kakoon gets embrassed.
She thinks:Sujal might have lost his impression about me.That may be the reason of not getting out of the car.he might have seen me standing here.
Ka:Ma'am..today,dad did'nt come with me to the school.
K:What?Then who drove the car?
Ka:Its our driver.Dad had to go for an important meeting.
Kakoon thinks:So thats the thing and not because Sujal is angry with me.
In the evening,Sujal comes to pick up Kajal.
She is angry:I will not talk to you,because you did'nt drop me in the morning.
S:I'm sorry sweety..i will get you icecreams and chocolates.
Kajal smiles.He tickles her.Kakoon comes there seeing that beautiful sight.
Sujal looks at her.Kakoon did'nt know how to face him.
S:hi..
K:Hi..
S:hi..
Kakoon smiles.
Ka:Why you guys are saying hi to each other?
Both of them become shy.
S:Kakoon,tomorrow is Kajal's birthday.We have arranged a party.You are expected to attend the party. Kakoon smiles:Sure,its my pleasure.
Sujal and Kajal become happy.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27
so sweet aamna is kajal's teacher
nice part dear
loved kajal's and aamna's convo and sujal's and kajal convo
cont sonnnnnn
tc
ammu
Edited by ammuakhi - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
fabolus part......................sujal n kakoon are soo cute.................n kajal is sooooooo sweety.....................i hope party achi ho...................plz con't soon dear
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
cute part................sujal and kakoon are attracted to each other......................cont soon....................
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
It was a sweet part yar dono ko he kuch kuch hota hai wale feelings hone lage hain aik dosre k bare main how sweet waiting for the next part good job dear

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