Your name across my heart Raj Aamna FF Last Part - Page 14

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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice part !
I hope no more villians will cum in their life now!
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Posted: 15 years ago
did it end?? if yes thn it was a veryyy sweet ending.....if ur planning to write more...even better....i will look forward to it....kali got what she deserved....and she really needs a psychic ha....policemen se bhi stupidity......sujal ne acha kiya by getting proves...he m8 hv follwed esha whn he heard her talking....if nothing else kali deserved to be punished for tashu's death....lets wish kakoon sujal n kajal a good life now....tc...n continue soon....
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Posted: 15 years ago
finally all is well................cont soon.................
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey bhaagwan yeh esha ab tashu kya ho gaya yeh plz dear isse tum ne toh ek dam ekta maata ke serial baana diya wohi plastic surgery and all anyways jaldi se esha or tashu what ever bhaagao yaar mujhe aur yeh ekta maata k tyupe serial ke kahani seh nahin hote plz jaldi karo aur haan apart from this ur story is very nice but plz aase ekta maata ke type mat do plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz yaar kunki i just hate her typical ekta funda
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Posted: 15 years ago
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh thank god woh kali ko police ne arrest kar liya nice i loved this part aacha hua sk ek sath ho gaye ab sk aur kajal ek saath rahenge plz cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
sorry dearfor commenting late
i was little busy at my office so i just read the parts and pressed the like button
awesome updates and nice twists and turns in the story
great going
cont soon
tc
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Posted: 15 years ago
Finally Kali's truth is out and the police have arrested her for murder.
Sujal's parents and Kajal have accepted Kakoon.
Hope that they do not have to face any more difficulties.
please continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
jasmine dear continue soon please
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Posted: 15 years ago

Your name across my heart part 19


Diwali decorations with lots of light everywhere. Sujal is in a beautiful shervani. His eyes were looking for Kakoon.Then cumes Kakoon in a pretty grand peach salwar kameez with lovely ornaments. Kajal runs to her:Mumma has come.
Sujal is very happy tosee Kakoon.
S:Kakoon,you look very pretty.
Kakoon smiles:Thanks,you look cute.
Kajal:I have got the most beautiful parents.
Everyone smiles. Kakoon and Sujal get blessings from the elders.
They dance.They feed diwali sweets each other.Then they celebrate diwali with fire crackers. In that light,Kakoon sees a person coming.She does'nt see him clearly.Then his face becomes clear.She is shocked to see him. Kakoon thinks:Oh god,why did he come in this last moment.Is it to break my dreams like before?
Kakoon starts to walk off..
S:Kakoon..
K:Let me spend some time with Kajal.
She goes. Sujal's dad comes with that person.Kakoon notices it from far.
K:How is dadiji having having connection with him?
Sujal's dad introduces him to Sujal:This is my youngest friend Kshitij.
They all laugh. Kakoon is shocked.
Dad:this is son Sujal.
Kshi:hi.
S:Nice to meet my dad's best friend.
Kshitij and Sujal shake hands with cheers.Kakoon could not digest seeing them together with friendliness.She gets tensed:What is he planning to do with Sujal?
Dad:You know Sujal is engaged.
Kshi:Really?Wow!Congrats.
Sujal smiles:Thankyou.
Dad:He is in a thrill to celebrate this diwali with his fiancee.
Kshi:Oh i see.So his fiancee is here.
S:Yes,I will call her.
Kakoon hides behind the tree.Sujal finds her.Kshitij and Sujal's dad are busy talking.
S:Why are you standing here?cCome..I will introduce my dad's friend Kshitij.
K:I'm not coming.
S:Why?
K:I don't want to see him.
S:Whats this Kakoon?What will they think?I told him that I will introduce you to him.
Sujal holds her hand and walks towards them.Kakoon did'nt know what to do. Kshitij was shocked to see Kakoon.
S:This is my fiancee Kakoon.
Dad:How is my future daughter in law.. friend?
Kakoon bends her head as she feels difficult to look at Kshitij.
Kshi:Very nice.you are lucky to get her Sujal.
Sujal smiles:I know that i'm extra lucky,otherwise i would'nt have got Kakoon.
Kshitij stares at Kakoon.She turns back.

When Kakoon is at home,she is tensed about Kshitij's come back.

Sujal's dad:How do you like my friend Kshitij?
S:Very cute since he is young.
Dad smiles.
S:His name is also good.Not common.But still i feel that I have heard this name somewhere.Where did i hear this name?
Suddenly Sujal remembers reading this name in kakoon's diary. He thinks:Kshitij is Kakoon's husband's name.
He remembers Kakoon refusing to go with him to see Kshitij.
Sujal thinks:Kakoon's behaviour was unusual yesterday,a friendly person like Kakoon did'nt want to talk to see at all.Is it because...is he the same Kshitij?
Sujal gets confused.
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Posted: 15 years ago
OH....Blast from the past...I hope this guy doesnt try to harm sujal

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