Your name across my heart Raj Aamna FF Last Part - Page 15

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Posted: 15 years ago
oh god now one more rukaawat..................hope this guy doesnt create problems between sujal and kakoon...................one bad trouble some person goes and another one enters........................cont soon................
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Posted: 15 years ago
Oh , No......ab yah kyun wapis agaya bechare kakoon kitna upset hogaye us ko deakh k welll next kaya hoga i cant guss about that but i hope k SK ko ab koi alag na kare well jasmine dear it was a big shock for us toh please next part jaldi post karo bcoz ab intzar nahi hoga k next part main kaya hoga love u for pm..........Humaira
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh my god i hope that person doesdnot create any problems in sujal and kakoons life
nice twist
cont soonnnnn
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Posted: 15 years ago
abbe yaar yeh ksitj kaha se tapka waise the story is really getting interesting plz jaldi se up karo and thanks for the pm dear
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Posted: 15 years ago

Your name across my heart Part 20

Kakoon hears the phone bell's ring.She picks up the phone:hello! voice:Kakoon..

The voice is very emotional. Kakoon's lips shiver:Kshitij!

Kshi:So you could recognise my voice?

K:Yes.Whats the matter?

Kshi:If there is anything only i can call you? I'm nothing for you,but you are everything for me.

K:Kshitij!I'm engaged with the person I love.

Kshi:But i can't forget you.

K:You divorced me,then also...i can't understand why you are after me now.

Kshi:But i never meant that as the end of our relationship.Do you remember..?That day i had told you that I will wait for you.I was waiting for your comeback.Not to my house,but to my heart.

K:Thats impossible.I have only loved one person in my life and thats Sujal.He is my first and the last love.. Kshitij weeps:Kakoon!Please...

K:Kshitij please..

She keeps her phone down.Again Kshitij calls up again.Kakoon disconnects the phone.

The next day,she hears the calling bell ring and opens the door. She is shocked to see Kshitij there:Kshitij,why are you here?

Kshi:I came here to visit you.

K:Mumma is not here.So please go.

Kshi:You are scared of the person who loves you very much?

She did'nt speak anything. Kshitij holds her hand:Kakoon please,don't go away from me.If you marry Sujal,I will be alone.

K:Kshitij,please leave my hand and think carefully.I'm Sujal's.So you please marry someone else.

Kshi:I cannot live without you.I waited for you for a long time and you are going away from me?No...

K:Sujal does'nt know that you are my ex-hubby.If he comes to know that you are after me,your frienship will be broken.

Kshi:I don't care.I will tell everything to Sujal. I will tell him that you are mine.Sujal is a gentleman.He will understand everything,he will understand that you are made for me.

Kakoon is shocked to see Sujal standing there: Sujal!

Sujal stares at them.He is moody.

Kshi:If you think that we are in a relationship,please leave.Don't make a big fuss about it.

S:So you want me to leave?So that you both can live happily?

Kakoon starts weeping.

Kshi:Why not?I love her very much and I will give her happiness.

S:You love her..that i understood from today's romantic scene.But Kakoon loves you back?

Kshitij is silent.

K:Believe me Sujal,nothing is there between us like you think.

.S:What i think is correct Kakoon.

Kakoon was shocked:That means you disbelieve me?

S:You lived for me.Your true love only made us come together.Then how can i think that you will cheat me?

Kakoon is happy.Kshitij is shocked.

S:You thought that I will believe what you tell blindly and throw Kakoon?So that you can live happily with Kakoon?Never Kshitij.Because Kakoon can never love you.Because she loves me that much.

Kshi:But you don't know one thing.I'm her ex-hubby.

Kakoon gets tensed.She thinks:Oh God,now what will Sujal think?

S:I know that.

Kakoon and Kshitij are shocked.

S:So i can understand your feelings.So i won't blame you much.

Kshitij is stunned.

K:Please forget me and allow us to live happily.

Kshi:But Kakoon…

K:Please Kshitij..if you separate me from Sujal,I will not only lose my love,but also my sweet daughter Kajal who needs me the most.

Kshi:But Kakoon, will go crazy without you or I will die.

Kshitij goes away. They are relieved.



Kakoon gets a phone call..It is a female voice:Are you Kakoon?

K:Yes.may I know who you are?

F:I want to meet you at the beach.Without telling itself you will recognise me.

Before telling something,she keeps the phone down. Kakoon thinks:Who will be that person?Why does she want to meet me?
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Posted: 15 years ago
twist pe twist ky baat hai
abb ye nayi ladkhi kon hai jaldi cont karo
tc
ammu
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Posted: 15 years ago
ab ye kaun hai?????????????how many more hurdles do sujal and kakoon have to face???????????????cont soon................
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey nice part....but frankly bolu.....i cudnt see kshitij like tht yr....even he has got a heart after all....how can he live without kashish......sujal n kashish shud just not send him away n be relieved...they shud do something for him...after all he is a nice guy....he never harmed any1 nor does he intend to....ab who is this new girl....waiting to c...cont soon.....tc....
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Posted: 15 years ago
yah kahani toh roz he new dhamaka karte hai but sujal is with kakoon so im happy but ab yah lady kon hai jasmine dear jab b hum log sochate hain k next yah hone wala hai tum humare guss ko kachre k debay main dalne pay majboor kar date hoo welll yaar u r such a good writter u better know k kaise kahane ko masaledar banaya jata hai great work dear love u
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Posted: 15 years ago
yaar tere toh interesting hote jaa rahe haai i loved it as sk is saath saath haai plz cont soon and thanks for the pm

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