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Your name across my heart Part 15


She is Kali.. Her face is red with anger:What happened suddenly?Tell...
T:i told everything over the phone.Nothing more than that.
K:You are so cool while i'm burning.You are not at all sincere in what you are doing.
T:I am sincere.But what to do?
K: I don't know.I'm mad.I will destroy everyone. Anyways,I have to spoil Sujal's peace of mind.He should not live happily with his beloved.He spoiled my life.He destroyed my dreams.
T:When Kakoon is there,he won't marry me.If i don't get inside his life,how can i spoil his peace of mind as you wish?So what are you planning to do?
K:I will kill kakoon.
Tashu smiles:What a great idea.Its very easy to finish Kakoon.
K:Yes,for me its simple.

Kakoon is walking on the road.One lorry is following her. She does'nt know that. It hits Kakoon.A major accident…

Kakoon is seriously injured.People stand around her.Sujal's car passes by.He sees the crowd.He goes there.He is shocked to see Kakoon covered with blood.
S:Kakoon......
He cries loudly.Sujal takes her in his arms.She gets admitted in the hospital. Sujal tells the Doctor:Doctor,please save Kakoon.I will give you anything you want.
Dr:Pray to God.Everything in his hand.
Sujal goes near the idol of Lord Ganesha:Lord,Kakoon is your worshipper.So do not close your eyes before her.I beg you.
He cries. After sometime the Doctor comes:God has heard your prayer.Kakoon is conscious now.
Sujal becomes very happy:Thank you so much Doctor.
Sujal runs to Kakoon.Kakoon's eyes are filled up with tears:You thought i will die?
S:No,i can't think like that.In that tension i thought I will die.
Kakoon smiles with tears and holds his hand:Your hand is my strength.
The doctor comes:Kakoonji,you are lucky to get a man like him.He was praying all the time for you.His prayers only saved you,because your condition was that serious.
Kakoon smiles:I know i'm the luckiest person,because Kakoon is mine.
Sujal and Kakoon pray before the idol of Lord Ganesha.

Kali scolds the lorry driver:How careless you were!
He:No ma'am,i hit her hard.I don't know how she got escaped.
K:Again you have to hit her.Kill her.Otherwise I will finish you.

Sujal drops Kakoon somewhere near the temple.
S:Ok bye Kakoon..
K:Bye..
She is walking.Sujal is watching her.He saw the lorry moving towards Kakoon. Immediately Sujal gets out of the car and pushes her to a side. Kakoon is excited:What happened Sujal?
S:One lorry was about to hit you.
K:Oh god,i'm so careless.
S:I don't think it's your fault.Why always a lorry is there to hit you?
K:It may be a coincidence.
S:I doubt..
K:What?
Sujal sees the lorry stopped at a side.
S:I have to find out.Kakoon,be careful while you are going. Sujal runs near the lorry.The lorry gets started. Sujal takes the car and follows it.

The lorry gets stopped due to brake down.The driver did'nt know what to do fast . By that time,Sujal reaches near him.He tries to escape.But Sujal catches him.
He beats him:Why did you try to run away from me?
He:nothing..
S:No,tell me you bloody liar.Did you try purposefully to hit Kakoon?
He:Who is Kakoon?
S:Stop this drama.Did u hit her purposefully?
He:Yes.
Sujal is shocked:That means,that day you only hit her?Today also you tried to kill her?
Sujal loses his control and beats him heavily:Why did you try to kill that poor lady?What did she do to you?
He:I don't have hatred against her.I was just doing my work.
S:Killing is your work?
He does'nt tell anything.
S:Who entrusted you this horrible work..to kill my ladylove,to take my life from me?
He:My ma'am.
S:Who is your ma'am;that bloody witch?
He:Kali ma'am.
Sujal is shocked.
S:Kali!why is she here now?Why can't she leave me alone?

Sujal goes to the temple.He sees Kakoon praying in her mind:God,give Sujal and Kajal the biggest happiness of the world.
He stands near her and prays in his mind:God,please save Kakoon from Kali.Otherwise I will lose her forever. Tears leak from his eyes.He wipes it. Kakoon opens her eyes and is surprised to see Sujal:Sujal,you are here?
He smiles.
K:Did you get the lorry driver?
She feels it funny:You are simply suspecting him.Why should he hit me purposefully?For that why should he be angry with me?
S:The anger is towards me.Its to punish me that he tried to kill you.
K:What are you telling Sujal?Why should he be angry with you?
S:He is not angry with me,since he is a professional killer,he was doing his duty.But the real culprit is Kali. K:Kali?Who is she?
S:The girl who was madly in love with me.
Kakoon is shocked.
S:Sorry Kakoon,though you told me your secret,i did'nt tell you my secret.I was not hiding it purposefully from you,i did'nt want to make you worry.
Kakoon keeps silence.Her eyes are wet.
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Posted: 15 years ago
omgg...not shweta yaar.......i adore her pair with raj....sab usse negative kyu bana dete ho !
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Posted: 15 years ago
twist pe twist hai inki life mein....ab ne nayi musibat kaha se agyi....kali....itna pyara naam...aur kaam dekho....waise i doubt now...ki this tashu is real or wht....ya some look alike of the real tashu.....kali m8 hv git her hands on her na....she loved sujal madly....hmm....v understand her feelings so well.....any1 can fall for him....specially the character he has here....ab sujal ka bhi secret hai....bt m sure it will turn out to be one sided....sujal didnt fall for her.....but kashish's eyes are already num...hope no more misunderstandings now...
....continue soon...i miss ur story on times its nt thr...tc...luv yaa....
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Posted: 15 years ago
ab yeh kali kaha se aa gaye bhaai uff kitne saree villians anyways the up is nice plz cont soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome update !
Loved it !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !
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Posted: 15 years ago
so its kali whos the mastermind....................wonder what sujal has got to tell kakoon now........................cont soon...............
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hy Raba.....ab yah kali dayian kahan se tapak gaye well jasmine yaar tumhare choice ka toh jawab nahi woh S kali k role main aik dam fit hai i dont like her sory if some one mind it......dekho jeee humari story toh mast chal rahe hai bas ab kakoon aur sujal ko mila do aur iss blody tashu chorail ka kissa khatam karo i want to see SK togather please please....... aur dear you R doing fantastic work woh .......DID.....main tarance bolta hai na dance k liye main toh tumhare writting pay bolon g what a choomaiswari story he,he,he love U yaar *******Jasmine*******
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Posted: 15 years ago

Your name across my heart Part 16


Kakoon begins to turn back and walk.Sujal holds her hand:Kakoon,please believe me.
Kakoon looks at his face with tears:You did'nt understand me till now?How can i think that you have cheated me?I know that you can't never do that with me.I trust you more than anyone else.
Sujal's eyes rises up with tears due to Kakoon's love and trust in him.
Sujal:Thank you Kakoon.If someone else was in your position,that person would have suspected me.
Kakoon smiles:Who is Kali?
Sujal recalls his memories:For the publicity of their product Sujal and gang decide to conduct a fashion show.Many girls come there for audition. A glamorios girl enters the room.Brown hair,sleeveless yellow top and tight jeans.
She:Im Kali..I'm the daughter of the millionare Rakesh kapoor.
S:Really?Then why did you come for modelling?
K:modelling is a craze for me.Thats why i chose this field.Not only that your company is famous.i will be prowd if you take me as your company's permanent model.
Sujal smiles. The fashion show happens with lots of pretty models including Kali.It was a huge success. Kali got the maximum appeciation. Kali enters Sujal's room:Why did you call me?
S:There is a happy news.You are appointed as the permanent model.
Kali is thrilled:Really?
S:Yes.
She jumps with joy and hugs Sujal:Thank you so much.I adore you.You are so great.
Sujal is feeling weird.
Later on Kali's attitude towards modelling started changing.She started becoming slack.So Sujal calls her to his room.

When Kali enters the room,Sujal:Whats this Kali?Complaints are coming about you that you are not doing your work properly.You came here for your interest for modeling,but now...
K:I was lying.I did'nt come here for modelling.I joined here for you.
S:What?
K:I'm mad about you Sujal.Thats why i joined your company.
S:What do you mean?
K:I love you Sujal.I want to see you always.Thats why i came here. I wanted to enter your company .I did a nice job and won you people's trust.Everything for you,only for you.
Sujal is stunned. Kali comes closer and closer to him.
S:Whats this Kali?
K:I love you Sujal.
Sujal becomes angry and moves away from her.He slaps her.
K:Sujal!You slapped a person who loves you the most.
Sujal feels sorry:I'm sorry Kali.But i can't be a man like you wish.
K:That means you can't love me?
S:I'm sorry...
K:But why?Do I have any problem?
S:Kali..i'm a dad to my brother's daughter.My life is only her.
K:If that child is the problem,then throw her away.
Sujal becomes angry:How dare you say that?Get lost.
K:What?
S:You are dismissed from here.
K:I won't go.
Sujal gets fed up.
S:Security....
Security people come and take her out.She keeps on screaming.

Sujal tells Kakoon:She was really crazy.She even tried to kill the very small Kajal to get me.I hated her a lot.She became a complete mad person.Later i heard that she is under treatment.I don't know why she came now.
K:Don't worry Sujal.Nothing can break our Love.Because God has made us for each other.
Sujal smiles.
S:But I will never forgive Kali.

Sujal gets Kali's mobile number from the lorry driver. He dials the number.Kali attends the call.
S:Do you remember this voice?
Kali is stunned as she never expected this.
S:I'm Sujal.
K:How can i not recognise the voice of the person i love and hate most.
S:I want to see you.
K:No way.You can never catch me.You can't find out my place.
Sujal laughs.
S:Please turn back madam.
Kali turns back.She is shocked to see the smiling Sujal behind her.
S:Finally i'm here.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice part
Now that Sujal has Kakoon support he will fight his way out with Kali.
please continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

dishum dishum...maro sujal...aaj to iski khatia khadi kar do....itni pagal ladki...acha hua iska treatment hua ....bt i think she needs a specialist....she even tried to kill kajal i dnt believe tht...are suajl hai hi aisa i agree tht sum1 will go mad....bt acha hua he found her....ab zara treatment kre uska.....n dekha...i was r8 na....he did nohting she was d culprit...cont soon dear...tc....

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