Your name across my heart Raj Aamna FF Last Part - Page 13

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Posted: 15 years ago
oh...toh yah majra hai yaar this kali is realy a mad one zaberdaste payar pane chale the good job sujal dear kay chanta mara hai maza agaya the kali,s story is intresting im dieing to see k ab jab sujal aur kali samne agaye hain toh next kaya hoga well jasmine yaar tumhare tareef main ab aur nahi karne wale bcoz jitne b karon kam hai toh bas itna kahna hai k please next part jaldi post karna cant wait dear.........Humaira
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice up yaar yeh kali really mad i like what kakoon says to s she is right i loved the up plz cont soon a nd thanks for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome update !
Loved it !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnxx for pm !
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow nice part..............kali is really a mad woman................and tashu is in hands with her....................looking forward for the confrontation between sujal and kali.....................cont soon............
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Posted: 15 years ago

Your name across my heart Part 17


Kali could'nt believe her eyes. Sujal moves near her.He gives her many slaps.Kali is stunned.
S:You thought i won't find you,you can play wicked games against me.Your plan will never succeed Kali.
K:Who told you that i won't win?I will win.I will destroy your life.I will destroy your family.
S:If you do something you can't do anything.You tried to kill Kakoon,but i saved her.Like that I will save my family also.My family has got unity.We will stand together.Nothing can separate us.
Kali laughs:You are talking about your family's unity?Everyone stands together in your family?What about your lovely bhabhi Tashu?
Sujal is silent.
K:Now she wants you.But you and your family are not bothered about her dream.So naturally she is against you.Believe me,Tashu won't stand for you,unless you are her bubby.
Sujal is stunned.
S:Tashu bhabhi is very understanding.She won't hurt us.
Kali laughs:Tashu won't hurt your feelings.But Esha will do whatever i say,even to murder you.
Sujal did'nt understand.
S:Esha? Who is that?
K:You are eager to see Esha.Right?I will call her.Esha.....!
A glamorous lady comes.Micromini skirt.Short top with thin strap.There is a chewing gum inside the mouth. She has a wicked smile in her lips. Sujal is shocked,because it was none other than Tashu.He is shocked to see Tashu's unusual appearance.
S:Tashu bhabhi..you?You are brainwashed by Kali?I just can't believe this.
K:What happened Sujal?Your heart is torn seeing your bhabhi's real color? Please don't hate your bhabhi.She is not your old sweet Bhabhi.She is a ghost sent by me to drink your blood.This is Esha.
Sujal is shocked:What?
Sujal is going crazy due to the strange laughter of Kali and Tashu.
Sujal:How can Tashu bhabhi be Esha?
Kali:Tashu can't be Esha.But Esha can be Tashu.
S:What?
K:I will make you understand.One day Tashu ran away from your house.Right?Unfortunately she reached before my car.My car hit her,though it was just an accident.It was a major accident and she died.
Sujal is shocked:Tashu bhabhi died?
K:Yes.since i did'nt like her,i did'nt take her 2 the hospital.After all these years,i met Esha;a profesional killer.I planned with her to destroy you.But she also met with an accident.I wanted her for my need.So i saved her.Her face was disfigured.That time i got a new idea.I made the Doctor do a plastic surgery and give Esha a new face.The Doctor gave her Tashu's face.
Sujal could not believe it.
K:Like that Esha entered your house as Tashu.So that it will be easy for us to destroy you.
S:How cruel!Don't think that you can destroy us.I will inform the police.
K:If you do so,we will kill Kajal;your beloved daughter.
S:No,you can't do that.
K:If you don't want that to happen,don't tell this to anyone.
Sujal is depressed,he goes back.He seems to be worried in his room. He gets irritated seeing Esha as Tashu there. When he becomes angry,Esha:Don't be angry,when you are angry,think of Kajal's life.
Kajal runs to them:Mom…dad...
Esha takes Kajal in her arms. Sujal gets tensed.
He thinks:What will i do?
Sujal sees Esha talking to Kali on the phone:i'm coming there.I want to talk to you seriously.Very important for me.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Oh my God......itna barda plan well mujhe toh phle he laga tha k woh tashu nahi hai so my guss was right but poor tashu ....bechare sujal ke kushi k waste gaye the but uss ka naam aur chara he sujal k liye musebat ban gaya jasmine yaar i just love u what a story girl seriously tum ko tv dramas likhne chaheye U R such a good writter believe me ....love U yaar
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh my gosh............what a wicked plan............kali is pure evil and tashu is a esha a fake one...................poor sujal...............cont soon...............
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Posted: 15 years ago
Oh my gosh...what a wicked plan...Kali really wants to destroy Sujal's family. please continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

Your name across my heart Part 18


Esha goes to see Kali.
E:I'm doing my job well.But i want 2 crores.
K:2 crores?For that what did you do?iI have already given you 95 lakhs.
E:Thats nothing.I want money again.
K:Never.Don't expect it from me.
E:You have to...
K:No way.
Kali ignores Esha.
E:You cheated me.i will not leave you simply.I will tell the whole world about what you did.I will remove your mask.You will be trapped.You can't escape at all.
Esha laughs.She begins to walk out .
Kali was shocked:No,this can't happen.You can't beat me Esha.
Kali shoots Esha.Esha falls down and dies.Kali laughs loudly like a mad person.
The next day,Kali hears the calling bell ringing and she opens the door.She is shocked to see policemen. Police:Miss kali?
K:Yes,myself.
P:You are under arrest.
K:What?You can't simply arrest me.
P:We are not simply arresting you,we have a reason forthat.
K:What reason?
P:murder of Tashu.
Kali was shocked:What nonsense!I did'nt kil her.How can you arrest me without proof?
P:you thought we won't be caught because you have a false belief that you can hide proofs so easily.But miss Kali,you are wrong.We have a strong proof against you.
Kali is shocked:What proof do you have?
They catch them.She screams at them like a crazy girl.

Kali is seated before the policemen.She screams:I did'nt kill Tashu.
Police:Yes,you did'nt kill Tashu purposefully.But it was your carelessness that led to her death.Remember the accident....Tashu was hit by your car.
Kali is shocked:But i did'nt do it purposefully.
P:Ok,but still u r a murderor.You killed a person purposefully to hide your secrets.Esha.
Kali is shocked.
P:You are arrested for killing her.
K:Rubbishness.I did'nt kill Esha.
P:Esha is a professional killer.How du you know her?
Kali can't answer fast:I don't know who she is.
P:No,you are lying Miss.Kali.
K:noooo.
They play a cd.Kali is shocked to see it.Because on the screen Esha's murder is shown.
P:Now you can't escape from from us Kali,this cd proves that you are the killer of Esha.
Kali lost her hopes.She is sweating.
P:Actually there is a person who helped us in finding out the truth,by exposing you.He is here.
That person comes there with a smile. Kali is shocked,because that person is Sujal.
Sujal smiles at Kali with victory:What did you tell Kali?You said you will destroy my family?You can't do anything,because you are an evil.Evils cannot succeed.
Kali cries.
Sujal's family members cry thinking about Tashu's death.
Mom:I can't believe it.Tashu's duplicate came here with a wicked mask to destroy us.How can she act so nice to Kajal?
Kajal cries:Dad,mumma died.
Sujal becomes sad:Your mumma is not dead.That was not your mumma Kajal.
K:Then who is my mumma?
S:Kakoon ma'am is your mumma.
Kajal is surprised:Kakoon ma'am is my mumma?
S:Yes Kajal.Kakoon ma'am is your mom.So don't call her ma'am anymore.Call her mumma.
Kajal smiles. Sujal's parents are very happy.
S:Kakoon loves Kajal so much like a mom.Only she can be Kajal mom.
They smile.
Sujal goes to Kakoon's house with Kajal.Kajal runs to Kakoon calling "mumma".kakoon is surprised.
Ka:why did'nt you tell me that you are my mother?
Kakoon is so happy that her eyes get filled up with tears. She kisses Kajal:iIm your mom,you are my dearest daughter Kajal.
Kakoon looks at Sujal.He smiles at her.
Sujal-kakoon's engagement function..They exchange diamond rings.The indian Idol Abhijeet Sawant sings his album Jaana...Sujal and Kakoon look at each other's eyes.They go to a dreamworld.They dance together in the rain with lots of romantic expressions.
Sujal's mom:Diwali is near.This time,Kakoon also will be there with us to celebrate Diwali.
Kakoon smiles.Sujal whispers to her:Diwali will be really sweet with my sweetheart Kakoon.
Kakoon smiles.
Edited by jasminerahul - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
jasmine dear awesom update finaly kali ka natak khatam aur Sk happy happy again good work

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